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01 December 2006 @ 10:17 am
Prison Break: Six Little Words Fiction  
Six-words stories for Prison Break
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Mom died. And Dad didn’t come.

Tattooed blueprints enslave his identity forever.

Protector, brother, liability—all in one.

Forgotten. But her heart stayed true.

Happy hombre, careless criminal… unexpected friend.

Clever cool hides so many worries.

Danger lurks behind that devilish tongue.

Gentleman thief awaits his dying daughter.

Bribery and bullying—his only coin.

His prison, his downfall. Integrity remains.

Paper birds, empty words… lonely lady.

Loyal friend, deadly assassin. Choose wisely.

Secret killer, he tracks them down.

Cold choices destroyed his family forever.

Will they make it? Panama waits.




 
 
 
miss_mandy on December 1st, 2006 07:41 pm (UTC)
Forgotten. But her heart stayed true.

:'(
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB Final Hughalfshellvenus on December 1st, 2006 07:48 pm (UTC)
I see you recognized Veronica right away. I didn't love her, but Lincoln and Michael should have loved her more than the show would indicate. :(
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB Final Hughalfshellvenus on December 2nd, 2006 12:37 am (UTC)
With the way things have been going this season I really hope Sucre makes it; he deserves it IMHO solely because of his friendship for Michael.
I like him most of all for that. He not only IS a good friend, but I like who Michael is when he's around Sucre. It's clear how much he trusts him, and how at ease he is. :)
aeroport_art: Michaelaeroport_art on December 1st, 2006 09:29 pm (UTC)
Paper birds, empty words… lonely lady.

I love this one, the way it just rolls off the tongue. The subtle rhyming and alliteration... I *love* writing/reading alliteration :D
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB Casthalfshellvenus on December 2nd, 2006 12:38 am (UTC)
I love those things too-- sometimes to excess! :)
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: MichaelInBarshalfshellvenus on December 2nd, 2006 12:39 am (UTC)
Absolutely! The best "side-effect" of Michael's whole prison scheme was meeting Sucre. :)

let's dance, douchebag!: WTF???xshorty24x on December 14th, 2006 12:16 pm (UTC)
I have so much respect for you and this ‘6 word fic’ – the way you can capture the emotions, scenarios and characters of Prison Break within a couple of words is truly amazing. Wow.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Gen PB brothershalfshellvenus on January 5th, 2007 12:45 am (UTC)
Thank you so much-- and sorry for the late reply!

These are such an interesting challenge (there's a whole comm for these things), and even tighter than the drabbles I write so many of for Supernatural. I get a whole 100 words for those, and compared to 6 that seems like a novel. :)