Supernatural100 Drabble: Some Things Never Change

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22 November 2005 @ 10:33 pm

Title: Some Things Never Change
Author: HalfshellVenus
Category: Sam/Dean (Slash, drabble)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Desolation has no power against passion.
Author’s Note: For the Supernatural100 "Motels" Challenge.

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There was a depressing sameness to the places they stayed. Weed-ridden parking lots. Murky motel rooms with stained carpets, banged-up furniture, and a faint mildew smell in the bathrooms.

The bedspreads were all variations on tacky, each different patterns but always ugly and reeking of stale cigarette smoke.

It was habit now, pushing them aside as they moved onto the bed in heated passion. The slam of the door would still be ringing in Sam’s ears as he found himself on his back, Dean astride him, already returning to the rhythm they had barely left off from the last time.

Tags: drabbles, my_fic, sn_slash, wincest

15 comments | Say what you feel

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( 15 comments — Say what you feel )

dhvana on November 23rd, 2005 01:05 pm (UTC)

Bloody hell, woman! You begin with these just amazing descriptions and then WHAM! That certainly jump-started my day (which will be spent cooking...sigh...but now I'll be having all sorts of dirty thoughts while kneading the dough). Two thumbs way way up! =D

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halfshellvenus on November 23rd, 2005 05:37 pm (UTC)

all sorts of dirty thoughts while kneading the dough).

Mmmmmm. That sounds like a great combination of activities.

I thought you were visiting family over Thanksgiving. Is it communal cooking?

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dhvana on November 23rd, 2005 07:49 pm (UTC)

Nope. Mom doesn't like to cook and after one year of eating out, I decided to take over and have been doing all the work ever since. Except the turkey--no way I'm getting up early enough to deal with that thing. ;)

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nevcolleil on November 23rd, 2005 02:49 pm (UTC)

Gah. Awesome contrast of descriptions! Wow. Great job :)

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halfshellvenus on November 23rd, 2005 05:39 pm (UTC)

Thanks! All that yuckiness swept away when more important things need their attention....

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thelana on January 5th, 2006 09:26 pm (UTC)

returning to the rhythm they had barely left off from the last time.

Ohhh, I really like that one.

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halfshellvenus on January 5th, 2006 09:34 pm (UTC)

My one and only slash drabble so far. *sniff* But Mmmmmmmmmmmmm.

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thelana on January 5th, 2006 09:36 pm (UTC)

Well, 100 words *is* fairly constricting.

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halfshellvenus on January 5th, 2006 09:41 pm (UTC)

Well, 100 words *is* fairly constricting.

Yeah, and some of my ~~porn~~ slash is getting fairly long. I've got 2 in the Q still, one at almost 1400 words, one at 1040.

What could I say in 100 words? "Yeah. Like that. Yessssssssss. Oh, Sammy."

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alazysod on February 3rd, 2006 07:29 pm (UTC)

Mm. I love how much emotion is in these 100 words. And it evokes such semi-depressing –– but also beautiful –– imagery of shitty motel rooms. And The slam of the door would still be ringing in Sam’s ears as he found himself on his back, Dean astride him, already returning to the rhythm they had barely left off from the last time. just made me go ooh.

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halfshellvenus on February 3rd, 2006 07:39 pm (UTC)

just made me go ooh.

:D It's unexpected hotness in such a gritty atmosphere. But love conquers all!

Have you taken a look at my LJ homepage? It has everything all separated into fandoms & Slash/Gen. I imagine you're there already, since you found this one at the bottom of the SN slash (yes, the SNs are basically oldest at the bottom).

This creepazoid icon you have here... I've noticed it before. This guy looks like he could be on Buffy (or that "Millenium" Demons-in-a-Donut-Shop episode) without requiring makeup. His face just looks... evol.

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alazysod on February 3rd, 2006 07:47 pm (UTC)

I've been getting links from your LJ homepage, yes. :) And the icon is Peter Stormare as Satan in Constantine. :D

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halfshellvenus on February 3rd, 2006 07:51 pm (UTC)

You're kidding! He looks so much older and scarier here. Well, we're not getting any blue-eyed distraction with the coloring. Heck, maybe he's creepier-looking than I realized :-0

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tyrical on February 10th, 2006 07:54 pm (UTC)

Dean astride him, already returning to the rhythm they had barely left off from the last time.

This is just another one of the lovely images you create. I can totally see it. A rhythm of their own. They fight, move, and love in the same sync.

This drabble well its all really rather perfect.

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halfshellvenus on February 10th, 2006 08:03 pm (UTC)

Thank you so much!

They are each other in this one, competing and balanced and together all at once.

This drabble well its all really rather perfect.
Ooh, wonderful! It is very hard to write a perfect drabble, to set the scene and make it complete and make the language feel natural. But I enjoy the challenge, clearly :)

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