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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors
halfshellvenus
26 October 2006 @ 09:11 am
Six Little Words-- Supernatural  
Tiny stories, for sixlittlewords:




Season 1 and before
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Mary's love is gone. Anger remains.

Sam loved them, but hated darkness.

Sam's sadness became lighter. Dean listened.

Don't leave me.
I won't... today.

Dean's tomorrow lies under forgotten promises.

Inside Sam's head, the future screams.

"Ready?"
"Yes."
Blood fills the night.

Demons lie. But Dean believes them.



Season 2
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Never in question: Dean's life won.

My beautiful boys. I'll miss them...

Dean's eyes hold John's unfinished farewell.

Graveyard/junkyard dust fills their hearts.

Dean's grief cowers, consumes... then explodes.

Sons of sorrow, they barely survive.

Dad's secret festers. Is Sam theirs?

Clowns are evil. Sam wins again

Dean's double had brothers. They're angry.

Together (apart) they wait. Healing comes.




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bluesister on October 26th, 2006 05:10 pm (UTC)
OMG. I saw this and thought, I don't know, that a few dozen could be written about SN. Ever. But each one of these is a great fic. Really.

Mary's love is gone. Anger remains.

If someone could have pointed this out to John, in just those words, early on...
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Johnhalfshellvenus on October 26th, 2006 05:26 pm (UTC)
But each one of these is a great fic. Really.
Eeep! Thank you! The microform just owns me, for whatever reason. Or I own it. ;)

If someone could have pointed this out to John, in just those words, early on...
An entire family's destiny hinged on how he reacted to that loss. Only John would have chosen to face it and fight.
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Entendre? Make mine a double.: SN Dean woobiedeirdre_c on October 26th, 2006 06:23 pm (UTC)

Don't leave me.
I won't... today.

EEEEEE! Perfection. *flails*
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Diner Deanhalfshellvenus on October 27th, 2006 12:33 am (UTC)
Somehow I think that will never stop being one of their underlying stories. *sigh*

Thank you, Deidre. :)
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plutogirl10 on October 27th, 2006 06:51 am (UTC)
Oh, very nice!

Demons lie. But Dean believes them.

That one was amazing, it actually gave me shivers :)
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Genhalfshellvenus on October 27th, 2006 03:16 pm (UTC)
Poor Dean-- the demons' lies are half-truths, and when they hit on all his weaknesses, how can he know that it isn't as bad as they say?

This was a fun little challenge. A couple of lines there that could be recycled into a story or two, perhaps. :D
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Mandya_phoenixdragon on October 30th, 2006 05:44 pm (UTC)
Wow!!! and Whoa!!! Perfection in rhythm m'dear - as always!! so many layers to so few words...

*Shivers*

*Sends love*

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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Genhalfshellvenus on October 31st, 2006 06:53 pm (UTC)
Ooh, lovely Dean icon.

I need to do a Prison Break one of these, before I forget. These were lots more fun than I'd have expected. :D
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Mandya_phoenixdragon on November 1st, 2006 03:59 pm (UTC)
Better get crackin on that, lol!! You know how the Muse gets when he/she has a break!

Thanks!! Got this from the lovely graphixbyebonio...

*Hugs*
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(no subject) - cometjantshira on October 31st, 2006 12:27 am (UTC) (Expand)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Genhalfshellvenus on October 31st, 2006 06:54 pm (UTC)
:D Thank you! The one you picked is actually one of my favorites. And it was all over last week's episode. :0
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