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26 September 2006 @ 11:10 pm
Supernatural Slash Fiction: Encoded Longing  
Title: Encoded Longing
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Sam/Dean (Slash)
Rating: R
Summary: 2x100 drabbles for supernatural100 on “Taste.”

x-x-x-x-x

Still
Sam shouldn’t know what his brother tastes like.

He shouldn’t have names for these forbidden flavors. The musk-spice below Dean’s ear. Dean’s stomach all satin-salt as it shivers under Sam’s tongue.

The most intimate flavor of all is slightly different from Sam’s own. It’s earth-heavy and fertile, the strong-sweet essence of dogwood trees in bloom.

The rare tinges of blood are liquid fear, as if worry colors the experience when it’s Dean who’s bleeding instead of Sam.

Sam craves these sharp reminders that Dean is still alive. He devours Dean after a hunt, a desperate ritual of Not this time...


Sweet Contest
Writhing under Dean’s hands, Sam is heat in motion as the sequence moves on.

His lips open to Dean’s—to the soul-deep longing that seeks acceptance and desire. His nipples are already hard before Dean’s tongue finds them.

As Dean moves down the waiting path of Sam’s insatiable, captive arousal, Sam lifts and strains against the weight of Dean holding him still. It’s an age-old battle of timing and styles that marks the mystery of “two.”

Dean continues his teasing, tempting tango in this intimate dance of love. When he finally gives Sam release, that victorious moment tastes like Yes.



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Ice-T: an actor, also a refreshing beveragefiddleyoumust on September 27th, 2006 06:15 am (UTC)
He devours Dean after a hunt, a desperate ritual of Not this time...

God I love this line. Beautiful as always.

The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on September 27th, 2006 06:31 am (UTC)
I can definitely see Sam wanting that tactile and inescapable reassurance that they are both still here, after everything they go through. Seeing and hearing are just not real enough.

Glad you enjoyed these, Julia-- late though they be. *Sigh*
I'm for wine and the embrace of questionable womenmissyjack on September 27th, 2006 06:35 am (UTC)
So sensual, in the broadest sense of the word. You make me believe the sexual side of the relationship, because of how much better they communicate this way than in words.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on September 27th, 2006 05:08 pm (UTC)
You make me believe the sexual side of the relationship, because of how much better they communicate this way than in words.
It's funny-- this is their downfall in Gen and their biggest strength in Wincest.

Love shown and not said is the only message Dean ever really believes. In Gen he rarely allows it... and in Wincest, he can finally "hear" it even when he's not sure it will last.
plutogirl10 on September 27th, 2006 07:46 am (UTC)
there's a sense of such slow erotica, even though it's just a 100 words each. v nice : )
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on September 27th, 2006 05:10 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Slow erotica is such a lovely, unfolding mood that lingers on after the ending. I definitely prefer it to the quick-and-dirty sexuality, though I like that as well and occasionally write it. But this form of it speaks to me more deeply...
merctales on September 27th, 2006 01:49 pm (UTC)
strong-sweet essence of dogwood trees in bloom.
Pretty.

It’s an age-old battle of timing and styles that marks the mystery of “two.”
Oooh...::shivers::

You certainly have been writing pretty lately. I like these two.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on September 27th, 2006 05:12 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much! I'm in a poetic frame of mind right now, I guess-- all to the good for stories such as these.

Now, these more cracked-out things I'm writing for various challenges? They refuse to come out from under the bed...
michelle: Sam and Dean 2certainthings on September 27th, 2006 02:56 pm (UTC)

Wincest in the morning wins.

Sam is heat in motion as the sequence moves on.

I love that image.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on September 27th, 2006 05:46 pm (UTC)
Wincest in the morning wins.
Works for me too. ;)

I love that image.
Mmmmm. Makes me want to be part of that picture. :)
aeroport_artaeroport_art on September 27th, 2006 04:09 pm (UTC)
Gee, I don't even know who Sam and Dean are but this is lovely! :D
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Genhalfshellvenus on September 27th, 2006 07:26 pm (UTC)
:D You can read about them off a link on my homepage, but suffice it to say they're another pair of gorgeous, interdependent brothers with issues. (and ghosts and demons in their case)

I love this version of your icon. It's really evocative. :)
(no subject) - aeroport_art on September 27th, 2006 10:13 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Are we back to hos over bros?lissa_bear on September 27th, 2006 04:13 pm (UTC)
Going to echo what others have already said:

This line He devours Dean after a hunt, a desperate ritual of Not this time... is brilliant!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Genhalfshellvenus on September 27th, 2006 07:29 pm (UTC)
Thank you, Elissa! That idea seems so very "Winchester" to me-- after hunting so many unreal things, the need to make sure that what you're taking home is real (and that you still are too) would be undeniable.

Out of curiosity, has your Dad watched "Supernatural"? I'm thinking he'd have lots of Wincesty input on it. :0
(no subject) - lissa_bear on September 28th, 2006 05:51 pm (UTC) (Expand)
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on September 27th, 2006 07:30 pm (UTC)
Thank you, Dawnie.

Oh, I do love the romance of your icon. :)
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on September 27th, 2006 07:33 pm (UTC)
making every caress, every movement count.
Oh, I so try to when writing this particular tone. I think it really helps to put the reader in the moment when it isn't rushed or skipped-over.

As always, your writing makes me incredibly happy and adds infinitesimally to my overall SPN experience. Absolutely gorgeous work.
Yay! *glee* I pulled you into two new (worthy) fandoms, and you might even love the second one more. :0
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on September 27th, 2006 11:23 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much, Claire! They need to be worthy of the boys, regardless of the tone. :)
sparkly fairy princess of the sadness: [spn] i can't shoot them anymoreelohvee on September 27th, 2006 09:14 pm (UTC)
that victorious moment tastes like Yes.

*whimpers* Yes, please...
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on September 27th, 2006 11:45 pm (UTC)
*whimpers* Yes, please...
*Sigh* Right there with you. If only Dean could be sure...
The Grammarian about whom your mother warned you.acostilow on September 28th, 2006 05:17 am (UTC)
Gorgeous and hot and I love. And stuff. ♥
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on September 28th, 2006 06:06 am (UTC)
Hee! Thank you, Athena! :) Wonder what would happen if you sicced that kitten on your computer woes?
(no subject) - acostilow on September 28th, 2006 06:10 am (UTC) (Expand)
bev_crusher1971: SN-hold mebev_crusher1971 on September 29th, 2006 03:53 pm (UTC)
Wow...those were great. I loved especially the first one "Still"...so good. So touching. Great.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on September 30th, 2006 03:07 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! This prompt tends to bring out the sensual type of imagery, which I admit to loving myself. :)
blazeorfadeblazeorfade on September 29th, 2006 05:37 pm (UTC)
I don't know which fandom you own me more in, PB or SPN. The last line just killed. Beautiful, as usual.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on September 30th, 2006 03:09 am (UTC)
I don't know which fandom you own me more in, PB or SPN.
:D It's so nice to find people who love both fandoms. There's definitely more SN love in the PB fandom than the reverse, unfortunately. But so much brotherangst in both of them, and not quite the same either.

So glad you enjoyed these. Thank you. :)
Becky: bluestlightbeckytheelf on September 30th, 2006 01:13 am (UTC)
Yum! Oh so very delicious =D
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on September 30th, 2006 03:18 am (UTC)
Thank you so much, Becky! :)