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24 August 2006 @ 11:03 pm
Supernatural Slash Fiction: Smoking Gun  
Title: Smoking Gun
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Sam/Dean (Wincest)
Rating: R
Summary: For particlesofgale, who wanted Sam/Dean slash. Longer than a drabble, but worth every extra word. :)

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Something about the Southwest always prompts Dean to clean his guns.

He lays them out on the motel room’s table or bed, arrayed by type and caliber. Disassembling them in pieces, he has rows of chambers, pins and shafts all waiting for stripping, polishing and oiling. Piece by piece he examines and rubs and caresses, feeling for flaws with his fingertips, for hitches and gouges and pieces of grit. He swipes and sights and pushes and rechecks, lavishing all his attention on—

“Hey. A guy could die of frustration watching you feel up all your damn guns.”

Dean’s eyes flick over to the bed, where Sam lies waiting in his underwear and a tight white T-shirt. His brother is half-hard, straining toward the opening of his boxers, while his hand strokes lazily—mimicking Dean’s handiwork with the guns.

Dean smiles then, wiping his hands off with a towel and making his way over to the bed. Easing onto it, he moves in next to Sam—his eyes never leaving Sam’s hand. He reaches forward and takes over, rubbing and counterchecking the heft of Sam’s erection underneath the cloth. He pulls the fly open, pushing it down with one hand while the other coaxes Sam out into the open air. Dean’s fingers roll carefully along the shaft, both thumbs moving up under the front of the head and sweeping upward in tandem as Sam’s hips lift up off the bed. He works with a long, pulling rhythm, palming over the head and angling it upward and back at the top of each deliberate stroke. These are the mechanics he knows as well as his own, as well as his guns and the strategies of the hunt.

He tends to Sam with careful devotion, fingers tracing the fluid build of pleasure as his own heartbeat quickens and Sam leans toward him and puts his arm around Dean’s back. Dean is attuned to every moan and bitten-off cry, every tremor and push against his hand that highlight his brother’s response.

Moving faster, harder, a swirl of interwoven sensations, he brings Sam closer, closer and sweeps him over the breathless edge of completion.

Then he brushes his fingers gently over and around, drifting down Sam’s legs and belly and arms. He watches Sam slow and ease and relax, feels those large hands covering and caressing his own with such infinite tenderness.

Sam’s smile is all for him, his eyes full of every answer Dean has ever sought.

This is still his favorite pastime, whether it is both of them or the one who wants it most.

He is as skilled in this as anything… but his guns will never be so irresistibly beautiful or grateful.


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The Grammarian about whom your mother warned you.acostilow on August 25th, 2006 06:10 am (UTC)
I heart you. I'm a little emo right now, otherwise I'd squee like a fangirl and wax all poetic, but I really like this and it's hot and I heart you a lot.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean slashhalfshellvenus on August 25th, 2006 06:18 am (UTC)
I ♥ you too, always!

And that hilarious new icon you've been sporting lately, too. ;)
(no subject) - acostilow on August 25th, 2006 06:22 am (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - littleeva on August 26th, 2006 12:28 am (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - acostilow on August 26th, 2006 01:16 am (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - halfshellvenus on August 26th, 2006 06:50 am (UTC) (Expand)
bluesister on August 25th, 2006 07:26 am (UTC)
Ah, he loves Sam more than guns! On the other hand, that's what got Sam going so it's probably win/win for those two.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on August 25th, 2006 09:23 pm (UTC)
Ah, he loves Sam more than guns! On the other hand, that's what got Sam going so it's probably win/win for those two.
:D I think there's a big parallelism, and yes-- he DOES love Sam more than guns. :)

More than anything, really, but a guy can't be getting all mushy like that. ;)
Entendre? Make mine a double.: SN cleaning gundeirdre_c on August 25th, 2006 08:34 am (UTC)
EEEEE! So sexy! *whew*
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean slashhalfshellvenus on August 25th, 2006 09:24 pm (UTC)
Ooh, ooh-- suggestive icon!

Thanks, Deirdre! :D
mooyoo: Dean/Sam - BlueBrothersmooyoo on August 25th, 2006 04:46 pm (UTC)
Mmmm, also nice. Gun!porn is always fun.

Sam’s smile is all for him, his eyes full of every answer Dean has ever sought.

I adore this sentence especially. I'm always happy to see devoted!Sammy.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on August 25th, 2006 09:25 pm (UTC)
I adore this sentence especially. I'm always happy to see devoted!Sammy.
Oh, me too. Devoted!Dean is so clearly there. But Sam needs to prove it to us a little more (prove it to Dean), and it's so nice when he does. :D
SUGAR AND SPICED RUM AND EVERYTHING NICE: didn't fallginnytonnick on August 25th, 2006 04:55 pm (UTC)
his guns will never be so irresistibly beautiful or grateful.

That's just the perfect end after the unfolding action. Lovely.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on August 25th, 2006 09:26 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! :)

So irresistible, tying those two things together...
Ice-T: an actor, also a refreshing beverage: SPN - Sam/Dean Because you watchfiddleyoumust on August 25th, 2006 06:48 pm (UTC)
Yay! Gun porn! This was hot and sweet just like the boys. :D
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Genhalfshellvenus on August 25th, 2006 09:27 pm (UTC)
Thank you, Julia!

That icon says you've finally been converted over. True? (though I love the Gen too-- SO nice to have a fandom where it's all good...)
(no subject) - fiddleyoumust on August 26th, 2006 05:18 am (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - halfshellvenus on August 26th, 2006 06:51 am (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - fiddleyoumust on August 26th, 2006 07:01 am (UTC) (Expand)
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Genhalfshellvenus on August 25th, 2006 09:32 pm (UTC)
:D I don't do much "kink" (at least, not on purpose!), so this was more of a nice chance to tie the theme together (and to perform foreplay on the guns for the reader).

Glad you liked it-- thank you! :D
dawnstarrising: big brotherdawnstarrising on August 25th, 2006 08:17 pm (UTC)
Aw Man! You alway manage to reduce me to a puddle of incoherent goo!

Lovely as always honey. Still love your writing style and stories *contented sigh*

Dawn xx
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on August 25th, 2006 09:35 pm (UTC)
You alway manage to reduce me to a puddle of incoherent goo!
:) Now there's a nice place to be!

I'm so glad you're still enjoying the stories. I've been busy posting up after vacation (catching up with what I wrote). Still have a few drabbles to finish! (we'll see if they stay drabbles. None of the Prison Break ones did). :D
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on August 26th, 2006 06:54 am (UTC)
Oh boy, you have no idea how happy this fic made me.
Whoo-hoo! Since it was all for you. :)

the comparison between Dean attending to his beloved guns & attending to his beloved Sam (sexy!), the sensual, second-nature-to-them-both loving
I just couldn't resist detailing Dean's porn-like care of his guns, to go with the places that skill would be better put to use. Save that caressing for someone who can appreciate it (and you). :)

Thank you so much for this... I love it!
Yay! *dances* I was so hoping that you would. :)


dc_longwing on August 25th, 2006 11:21 pm (UTC)
Awesome. Lovely. Once again, while your pwps may not have as much plot as your other fics, they are still layered and beautiful. Loved this examination of Dean's devotion.
Thanks,
DC
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on August 26th, 2006 06:57 am (UTC)
they are still layered and beautiful.
That is really so wonderful to hear. Pure PWP is lovely, but I guess I do prefer to have a tinge of substance in there-- a reflection of some aspect of the characters, or who they are together or what they struggle through. For me, that's actually part of the atmosphere and what makes the story more real.

Loved this examination of Dean's devotion.
Mmmm, and I love that description of it. :D Thank you, DC!
I'm for wine and the embrace of questionable women: gunpornmissyjack on August 26th, 2006 01:20 am (UTC)
He is as skilled in this as anything… but his guns will never be so irresistibly beautiful or grateful.

and you are so skilled at this - and I am so grateful. porn that moves me? a wonderful thing
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on August 26th, 2006 06:58 am (UTC)
Porn that moves me? a wonderful thing

You have no idea how happy that comment makes me! :) *rejoices*

And you even have an icon to go with the story. Mmmmmm. :D
sparkly fairy princess of the sadness: [spn] i can't shoot them anymoreelohvee on August 26th, 2006 05:21 am (UTC)
As ever, you are perfect. *shivers*
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on August 26th, 2006 06:59 am (UTC)
Oh, Candy-- that is such high praise. I can't tell you how happy that makes me feel.

Thank you. ♥
Skywalker-Winchester: supernatural_brothers05  jsie_iconsanakin415 on August 26th, 2006 11:27 am (UTC)
guh !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! for gun!pr0n
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on August 26th, 2006 07:21 pm (UTC)
Thank you, Anakin! :D

Gun!porn is like car!porn, when Dean's involved. It just sells itself. ;)
tyrical: SPN_togethertyrical on August 28th, 2006 01:38 am (UTC)
I love this look at Dean's careful attention to the things that help protect him and keep him safe or sane. Clearly Sam is one of those things.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on August 28th, 2006 05:40 am (UTC)
Sam is the greatest of those things, even if Dean gets a little sidetracked sometimes. Thank goodness he knows when to be flexible. ;)
Rachel: SPN Dean and coffee <3_sin_attract on August 28th, 2006 03:48 am (UTC)
Mmmf. That's hot.

:P Love me some gun!porn!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on August 28th, 2006 05:42 am (UTC)
Hee! Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. :) Who can resist the chance for a line like "feeling up all your damn guns"? I want to see that one on the show, in any context. :D