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21 August 2006 @ 01:53 pm
Prison Break Slash Fanfiction: Payback  
Title: Payback
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Lincoln/Michael (Slash)
Rating: NC-17
Summary: If they were different, this is how it would be…
Author’s Notes: First, this is kind of dark by nature of the challenge. musicophilia requested a Lincoln/Michael slash drabble with Dominant Michael, which is a major challenge to how I view the characters. In looking through the fanfic100 table, where I have the slash pairing of Lincoln and Michael, this idea surfaced from prompt #82, “If.” Because this is an approach I can work with…

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If they were different, this is how it would be:

Lincoln would owe, for every sleepless night Michael suffered. For every scar, every drop of blood, every tear shed in anger, fear or despair. He would owe not for the times he kept Michael safe, for the food he brought to the table, but for the nights he disappeared leaving Michael to fend for himself. For the stoned arguments, the Juvie brawls and lockups, the jail sentence that nearly forced Michael to give up on him—he would owe big time for that. And Michael would collect…

If they were different, Michael would work that guilt into the ground. It would start with failure and continue through Lisa and LJ, and finish in Fox River and the lengths to which Michael was driven to save him.

If he forced things the way he wanted, Lincoln would grovel at his feet.

“Show me you love me,” Michael would say. And Lincoln might pat his arm, or hug him, like he thought Michael intended.

“Not that way,” Michael would correct him. “Show me body and soul, like your life depends on it, what I mean to you and what you’d do to make it right.”

And he’d pull Lincoln closer, sliding a hand behind his neck. He’d stare him down, focusing on his eyes, his lips, all serious and fierce with no chance for Lincoln to resist.

He’d say, “Show me, Lincoln. Show me,” and let the tension rising between them make his point.

And Lincoln would give in—because he knows Michael has the right to ask this. Because there are amends to be made, and he’d better start somewhere. Because he loves Michael, and that line between them is thin.

Lincoln would rush to meet him or let himself be pushed, but it would happen—Michael is sure of it. He would kiss Lincoln slowly, just relishing the feel of it. Then he’d deepen it, plundering Lincoln’s mouth and meeting him in return. He’d make Lincoln drunk with the power of his tongue, draw out the slut in him that has always been Lincoln’s weak spot.

Then he’d move over onto Lincoln’s lap, straddle him and rock and ride across him while kissing and licking until Lincoln just can’t think.

“Michael, I want…” Lincoln would murmur, but Michael would shut him off with a headshake that Lincoln could feel. Kissing harder, hands on Lincoln’s chest—his nipples—and rolling his hips across Lincoln’s waking arousal, he’d keep control of what was offered and how badly it was needed.

Unbuckling his own belt, sliding down his pants, he’d rise up on his knees and rub himself through his briefs. Cupping a hand behind Lincoln’s head, he’d bring it down to meet his swelling erection. “Show me,” he’d say again, “Show me” as he shifted and arched his back to brush himself across Lincoln’s lips. And Lincoln would break, would bite him softly through the soft cotton before yanking down his underwear and swallowing Michael whole.

He’d buck and roll, not too hard but never gentle, and Lincoln’s hands would wrap around him and hold him firmly against falling. Hands on Lincoln’s shoulders, swaying from the dizzying build of desire, he would push and thrust and talk: “Do it. Harder, Lincoln. Like that, just like that.” And Lincoln would lick and suck and take him deep and oh so strong. When he finally came, he’d press Lincoln’s head against him and make him swallow every single, aching drop.

Afterward, he’d drop back down on Lincoln’s lap and lean in close.

“That’s a start,” Michael would say. And he might kiss Lincoln—not giving away too much.

If he were different, Michael would already be halfway down that road.

On the run now-- in this shack where they are halfway between disaster and freedom-- he can hear Lincoln breathing beside him in the dusty dark.

And thinking of every thing he’s done—every unspoken, naked act of desperation—Michael is fucking tempted to already be that man right now.


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The Grammarian about whom your mother warned you.acostilow on August 21st, 2006 09:12 pm (UTC)
Continuing my quest to be the first commenter on everything you write, no matter what... :D

I like the darkness, the desperation, and the need. And stuff.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB slashhalfshellvenus on August 22nd, 2006 05:01 am (UTC)
:D You ARE first, as usual. ;)

I like the darkness, the desperation, and the need. And stuff.
I think you forgot the word "porn" in there-- and I know it's your favorite word! :D

Glad you liked it though. It's dirty-- really dirty for me-- and yet very hot as well (and how I hate to admit it).
mooyoo: M/L - Never let me gomooyoo on August 21st, 2006 09:19 pm (UTC)
Wow, liked this one a lot. I especially like how you went about it, as I don't see Michael exactly this way, but it's easy to see how he could be like this, and how he might really want to be that man sometimes.

And *ahem* hot. Definitely a fan of biting!Lincoln.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB slashhalfshellvenus on August 22nd, 2006 05:04 am (UTC)
especially like how you went about it, as I don't see Michael exactly this way,
I definitely don't either, which is why the original request stymied me for a bit. How to work that in as a possibility, given how I view Michael (and especially Michael/Lincoln as a dynamic).

and how he might really want to be that man sometimes.
I can definitely see the temptation of those stray fantasies-- those dark and dirty thoughts-- that we would usually deny even to ourselves.

Definitely a fan of biting!Lincoln.
:D Yay, hotness! biting!Lincoln really does something for me as well. And wanton!Michael. Now that's a good combination. :D

And yay for challenges that get me to write stuff I ordinarily would just never, never do. Sometimes it's good to force it to work.
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB slashhalfshellvenus on August 22nd, 2006 05:07 am (UTC)
woah. Really really hot... and. woah
*Glee* It's hot to me too, and then I kind of hate myself for it, but-- Rrowr.

He's not that man, but I can buy that If things were different, he could be and that there are things he's had to do, and continue to do that could almost maybe push him down that line.
And that's how this works for me-- I don't see him being that kind of dominant person with Lincoln at all (in a sexual context, or much of any context), but I could see the incredible temptation what with the frustration and the sacrifices and the feeling that he's committed himself far too deep and that Lincoln owes something in return for that. Definitely a dark fantasy, but understandable as well. :0
I'm for wine and the embrace of questionable women: tbagmissyjack on August 21st, 2006 09:35 pm (UTC)
oh yeah girl - this is scorching! you totally sold me on dominant!Michael.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB slashhalfshellvenus on August 22nd, 2006 05:09 am (UTC)
Whoo-hoo! Selling you on something I had to write in a way that persuaded me is an excellent sign!

Plus, the hotness. Glad I'm not the only one that found it hot, because then I'd feel like a bigger total perv. :D
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: wetMichaelhalfshellvenus on August 22nd, 2006 06:57 pm (UTC)
A very atmospheric, telling fic.
It's very porny, this one, and very dark-hidden-fantasy in feel.

Glad you liked it, Debbie. Not my usual approach, as you well know...
jeyhawk: prison break: fuck me alreadyjeyhawk on August 21st, 2006 10:25 pm (UTC)
Very hot, very nice. :0) I know I lack somewhat in the good-feedback-and-coherency department, but I'm tired. *lol*
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB slashhalfshellvenus on August 22nd, 2006 06:58 pm (UTC)
That's good enough for me! Plus the icon... Nice! :D
dragontatt: gay porndragontatt on August 21st, 2006 11:02 pm (UTC)
Wow- this is great! I think it's probably pretty close to what Michael wants to be, but won't let himself be. Yummy.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: wetMichaelhalfshellvenus on August 22nd, 2006 06:59 pm (UTC)
I think it's probably pretty close to what Michael wants to be, but won't let himself be.
Whoo-hoo! Another satisfied customer!

Yummy.
Mmmmm. Thank you! :D
Kimberley: Fearsome Five: by lady_izlampshade_days on August 21st, 2006 11:06 pm (UTC)
Holy hell. *fans self* First of all: hot.

Second of all, I'm intrigued. I don't really think of Michael as the dominant one in the relationship either, but this really works. And quite brilliantly, I might add.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB slashhalfshellvenus on August 22nd, 2006 07:01 pm (UTC)
Holy hell. *fans self* First of all: hot.
Whoo! Thank you. :D

Second of all, I'm intrigued. I don't really think of Michael as the dominant one in the relationship either, but this really works. And quite brilliantly, I might add.
Thank you so much. :D It was a challenge getting a handle on this-- on a way to do it that would still work for me, since I don't see him as dominant either. This solution I could buy into-- without feeling like I'm being false to the characters.
dc_longwing on August 21st, 2006 11:17 pm (UTC)
Yay for more of your PB fic!
I liked this. It was dark, but still authentically them--if they were different. This may have been a challenge for you to write, but it reads as easy/smooth as your other stuff; props to you for that.
Of course I enjoyed the hotness, but I also liked how tightly controlled Michael's fantasy would be; that seems very 'Michael' to me.
Thanks a ton,
DC
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: wetMichaelhalfshellvenus on August 22nd, 2006 11:14 pm (UTC)
This may have been a challenge for you to write, but it reads as easy/smooth as your other stuff; props to you for that.
Thank you-- that is wonderful to hear! The first draft was written in one sitting (in the car, actually, driving down I-5. That's the only "alert" writing I did on vacation-- I was half-asleep for the rest of it).

but I also liked how tightly controlled Michael's fantasy would be; that seems very 'Michael' to me.
It does to me too-- and how he must chafe at the harshness of reality in all things, where nothing is ever quite as you planned (largely because other people with different random ideas are usually involved).
Your Sweet Six Hundred, Threescore And Sixmusicophilia on August 21st, 2006 11:36 pm (UTC)
Thank you, I love it :)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB slashhalfshellvenus on August 22nd, 2006 11:15 pm (UTC)
You're welcome! Probably not quite what you were thinking, but then Dominant!Michael is hard for me to work with. So I hope this one came out satisfactorily after all. :)
(no subject) - musicophilia on August 23rd, 2006 07:33 am (UTC) (Expand)
★彡 artificial nocturne.: mujutsu no hanausagiko on August 21st, 2006 11:48 pm (UTC)
A+, would read again. A credit to LJ.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: wetMichaelhalfshellvenus on August 22nd, 2006 11:17 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much-- that is high praise indeed. :)

Lovely icon, BTW...
(no subject) - usagiko on August 23rd, 2006 05:20 am (UTC) (Expand)
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB slashhalfshellvenus on August 22nd, 2006 11:18 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much! And thank goodness it's still hot, since it's not the normal slant I write this pairing from. :D
I'm the girl that you just won't admit you adore.: wtabularassa on August 22nd, 2006 05:42 am (UTC)
Just what I needed. When I've had only ONE thing on my mind today. Wow.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB slashhalfshellvenus on August 22nd, 2006 11:19 pm (UTC)
Just what I needed. When I've had only ONE thing on my mind today.
Ooh, so glad you liked it. :D

I've had PB on my mind, but also 1rst day of school for kids (my son at a new school), AND my son's birthday. It was a day full of fun and possibilities. :)
(no subject) - tabularassa on August 23rd, 2006 02:09 am (UTC) (Expand)
denaligirl1 on August 22nd, 2006 06:19 am (UTC)
just because i can't see michael as the dom in their relationship, doesn't mean i don't want to!

this was dark and pretty much burnin' hot. especially these bits:

Lincoln would give in—because he knows Michael has the right to ask this.

When he finally came, he’d press Lincoln’s head against him and make him swallow every single, aching drop.


p.s. i really liked the drabble too - dom has one amazing voice! i just watched the premiere and was really in the mood to read some m/l. i think i'll run over and read some more of your stuff! thanks for sharing!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: DominicSexyhalfshellvenus on August 22nd, 2006 11:23 pm (UTC)
just because i can't see michael as the dom in their relationship, doesn't mean i don't want to!
I can't either, but I'm willing to be sold on it if an author can persuade me. :D

this was dark and pretty much burnin' hot.
W00t! I am SO pleased people are finding it sexy.

Oh, that last line is so dirty and yet so hot at the same time. I have to push myself to write that sort of thing.

p.s. i really liked the drabble too - dom has one amazing voice!
Thank you! Yes, he really does-- we just haven't heard much of it on this particular show. But that voice is captivating to me... Like Dominic himself-- walkingManSex.

i think i'll run over and read some more of your stuff! thanks for sharing!
Please! Let me know if you enjoy it. :D Thank you!
froggyniektete on August 22nd, 2006 10:55 am (UTC)
Oh good Lord that was hot.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB slashhalfshellvenus on August 22nd, 2006 11:23 pm (UTC)
Whee! Thank you! :D