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20 August 2006 @ 10:39 pm
Supernatural Gen Drabble: Uncertainties  
Title: Uncertainties
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Mary (Gen)
Rating: PG
Summary: Belatedly written for the supernatural100 challenge #32 on “Firsts.”

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She’d quit her job at the card shop two months ago, and the walls had been closing in ever since.

She readied the nursery, endured daily phone calls from her mother. Boy or girl, she wondered? Playful like her sister? Or serious and strong?

She busied herself with books and ideas—so many methods to raising children, and no two authors agreed! What if she was bad at being a mother? What then?

One morning a wave of pain hit her, growing hourly until her breath was gone.

“John,” she said, “it’s time.”

She left Fate to decide the rest.





 
 
 
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Genhalfshellvenus on August 24th, 2006 03:50 am (UTC)
It's hard to get a strong feel for her, but card shop seemed to work for me. Lots of customers and interactions, a cheerful atmosphere. English teacher means older kids by default (teens-plus, usually), and I don't see that age group being her strong suit somehow. Little kids and adults moreso. NOT that we have any facts for her at all. ;)

I'm glad you liked this one-- I only have a few Mary and Jess pieces, because there's so little background for them (mainly glimpses of loss).