Two Haiku: "Cleaning" and "Sea World"

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17 October 2015 @ 06:31 pm

Two haiku
For

writerverse

Cleaning
Foreign contamin—
there. And there. Streaks, germs, grime—who?
Walle. Nemesis!

Sea World
Waves whisper wetly
above stillness. Dark kingdoms
rule the depths below.

Tags: haiku, my_fic, original_fiction, writerverse

4 comments | Say what you feel

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riverotter1951 on October 18th, 2015 01:59 pm (UTC)

Beautiful. I'm glad that you decided to write haiku. Try tanka next - 5,7,5,7,7.

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halfshellvenus on October 18th, 2015 09:34 pm (UTC)

Thank you!

I thought about tanka, but when I looked up the form, it seemed to warrant something with deeper themes/etc. than I was prepared to write here. Though that second one... I did consider it.

Come to think of it, haiku should probably be more serene than that first one, but I just couldn't resist. :D

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