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04 June 2006 @ 07:25 pm
Supernatural Slash FanFiction: The Battle Finished (Final Version)  
Title: The Battle Finished
Author: HalfshellVenus
Category: Sam/Dean (Wincest, PWP)
Rating: R
Summary: PWP, established relationship. Sweet, sweet meadow sex. Imagine it...
Author’s Notes: This is the revised version of the story written for 60_minute_fics (the prompt was “Do I Make You Porny, Baby?”). Not terribly different, but with some editing and polishing in the final version.

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That the ground was grassy was a huge plus—every fall went that much easier when it came. That it was secluded was a given—they didn’t dare spar with an audience, not when a couple of guys fighting would get the cops called in anymore.

That it was five days since there’d been any kind of sex was pure chance. Hopeless, aching, rolling over one another and pinning each other down all rough-hard-bruising-breathless chance.

It was Dean who cracked first.

Sam was so aggravatingly tall now, so much longer than Dean. Once he’d flipped Dean over on his back, Sam could sit far enough down on Dean’s thighs to immobilize him and still reach up high enough to lock down Dean’s arms. Dean could squirm and writhe and buck all he wanted, but Sam just Could Not Be Moved.

Sam was above him then, grinning and riding along with Dean’s frustration. It took exactly one low laugh next to his ear and one sweep of Sam’s thumb across his mouth before Dean rolled in a slow thrust up underneath his brother and parted his lips to nip and lick that thumb. Sam shivered, returning helplessly to that sinful mouth— Dean’s most powerful weapon of all. Sam’s lips followed in turn, kissing, wrestling with the stubble-edged softness that was everything like Dean himself. All warning and toughness on the outside, wet welcome and need on the inside, Dean was a secret only Sam was permitted to know.

Winning was forgotten, along with the upper-hand and spin-kick techniques and whatever the hell else they’d been working on that day.

Dean’s arms were pliant under Sam’s hand, just waiting for the chance to be freed, to roam and push-pull and stroke any part of Sam they could find. Instead, Sam slid up further, seated on and lap-dancing over Dean’s imprisoned, rigid heat. Sam ground his hips side-to-side slowly to the music of Dean’s moaning. He slid the other hand up to meet the first, parting Dean’s arms and clasping their hands together as he leaned forward and silk-slip-stroke-loved Dean with his mouth. Dean was many things-- everything—but the blending of skill and affection conquered him like no-one Sam had ever known. It was so sweet and easy, bringing Dean off like this, and Sam mouthed over Dean’s neck and brushed his hands lightly down Dean’s arms as his brother cried out and shuddered and gasped.

Sam kissed and soothed as Dean gained his breath and his stillness once more. Shifting off to lie down next to Dean, he moved his fingers gently over Dean’s temples and into his hair. Dean finally opened his eyes, his gaze heavy-lidded and depthless as it drifted up toward Sam’s. The smile he gave Sam at moments like this was worth all of it—the darkness, the danger, the worlds-inside taboo of the two of them together.

The light was golden now, touching the grass and the vivid green of Dean’s glowing eyes. The air hummed quietly with the presence of hidden life.

In the afternoon haze, Dean pulled Sam’s head firmly toward his own. He kissed Sam slowly, thoroughly before the other hand slid down the length of Sam’s chest. Rubbing with languid intent, he eased his fingers up to fumble briefly with Sam’s fly. It resisted those one-handed efforts, and finally Dean rolled Sam onto his back and used his hands freely, lost in the richness of it all. His mouth teased and twirled, fingers sweeping up under Sam’s shirt and caressing that flat belly, those lanky hips. The pleasure Dean took from this was so obvious, his loving so intense, that it wasn’t long before Sam was arching his back and giving away all semblance of self and control to his brother. It was glorious—so sharp and darkly perfect that Sam’s world spun in red behind his eyes. The earth could have swallowed him whole and he would not have noticed the loss of the sun. It was inside him, inside Dean, when they were together like this.

Dean crawled up beside him afterward, his head in the crook of Sam’s neck and his body molded against every curve and line and crevice. They lay as one, half-asleep with the release of so much energy. Dean’s arm embraced Sam’s chest, and Sam’s hand stroked it in return as he breathed in the hidden-memory scent of Dean’s hair.

The day was ending, and this moment was complete.

The surrounding chirp of crickets rose toward dusk as the rustle-soft whisper of wind soothed the heat of the battle now finished.


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chainletter9 on June 5th, 2006 02:39 am (UTC)
this is one of my favourite stories ive read due to its simplicity, there was no dialogue, but its was perfect without it, good job
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Genhalfshellvenus on June 5th, 2006 05:33 am (UTC)
Oh, thank you. :) The simplicity is partly because it is PWP, and partly because one can't bring in too many structures/themes/etc. when the bulk of the story (rough draft) has to be completed within an hour.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Interestingly enough, I wrote another PWP recently that is ALL dialogue. Very different tone from this (it's humor and first-time), but fun. It's called Space Invasion.
Hopehopeowl on June 5th, 2006 02:51 am (UTC)
Oh this is SO GUH! Lovely imagery, and so fitting for the characters. You did a beautiful job.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Genhalfshellvenus on June 5th, 2006 05:35 am (UTC)
Oh this is SO GUH!
I SO love to hear that. "Guh" is a concept in itself to me...

Lovely imagery, and so fitting for the characters. You did a beautiful job.
Thank you so much! This is the only soft-toned PWP I've written for Sam and Dean yet. I have a few in my other fandom, but for SN that tone has only been in the longer fics.



zortified on June 5th, 2006 02:59 am (UTC)
This was so lovely. And mibble.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean slashhalfshellvenus on June 5th, 2006 05:36 am (UTC)
This was so lovely. And mibble.
Thank you. :D Sometime I would love to know how one becomes "zortified." That username has intrigued me for awhile, I admit!

Gorgeous icon. Wow.
(no subject) - zortified on June 5th, 2006 05:45 am (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - halfshellvenus on June 5th, 2006 06:39 am (UTC) (Expand)
poisontaster on June 5th, 2006 07:39 am (UTC)
That it was five days since there’d been any kind of sex was pure chance. Hopeless, aching, rolling over one another and pinning each other down all rough-hard-bruising-breathless chance.
Uh-huh. Go on, boys, pull the other one, it has got bells on. ;)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean slashhalfshellvenus on June 5th, 2006 07:26 pm (UTC)
Hey, it all worked out! I need to add the "established relationship" note, though...
Gilliangillianinoz on June 5th, 2006 09:10 am (UTC)
Dean was a secret only Sam was permitted to know.

Wow, that says it all. Lovely, just lovely.

Thanks!

The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Diner Deanhalfshellvenus on June 5th, 2006 07:25 pm (UTC)
Wow, that says it all. Lovely, just lovely.
Thank you. :) It's the overriding reason for the Wincest, I think (other than the pretty, the isolation, the interdepence). I can't see Dean every letting anyone become as close to him as he wants Sam to be, and he'll never give anyone a chance to get that far down below his mask. :(
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean slashhalfshellvenus on June 6th, 2006 02:16 am (UTC)
:D Glad you liked it!

I have other Wincest porns and series. I'm starting to wonder if I should consider expanding from "The Flow of Darkness" to create its own Universe. This piece would fit in as an extension of that same mood there. Hmmmm...

Oh, and-- icon love!
Kronette: Flailkronette on June 6th, 2006 12:42 am (UTC)
Words..gone. I keep using "Achingly beautiful" for stories I find like this, and they might all be yours *g*. Just...wow.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean slashhalfshellvenus on June 6th, 2006 04:26 am (UTC)
and they might all be yours *g*.
:D That does seem to be one of my overwhelming styles, especially in this fandom (the actual stories moreso than the drabbles). I've definitely seen that fabulous icon before. ;)

Thank you so much, kronette! ♥
MF Luder: GG goldiemf_luder_xf on June 6th, 2006 03:22 am (UTC)
Wheee!!!! Oh that was lovely, my dear. Very sweet and passionate and I loved the lack of dialouge and the descriptions.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean slashhalfshellvenus on June 6th, 2006 11:17 pm (UTC)
Very sweet and passionate and I loved the lack of dialouge and the descriptions.
:D Thank you very much!

When I first started writing fanfic back in September, there was virtually _no_ dialogue. Now, at least, I can have a choice-- as opposed to fear-based avoidance.

/topic: PWP-- It's What's For Dinner! :D
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean slashhalfshellvenus on June 6th, 2006 11:20 pm (UTC)
pushed the fic from porn to pure romance IMHO. Very nicely done.
Ah, Debbie-- you make my heart glow. Thank you. :)

Did the pic inspire you to revise or did the pic arrive after the revisions?
No, the revisions were done first. They were mainly to clean up any awkward phrasing, and to slow the pace a little (breathing room. ;))

That meadow picture was all over the internet yesterday. Pure and lovely serendipity, as it happens. :D

belleimani on June 7th, 2006 02:35 am (UTC)
Quietly lovely.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean slashhalfshellvenus on June 7th, 2006 04:40 am (UTC)
Thank you, belleimani. That seems to often be my style. :)
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cuissesdefer on June 10th, 2006 04:38 am (UTC)
All warning and toughness on the outside, wet welcome and need on the inside, Dean was a secret only Sam was permitted to know.
That's so lovely. Juxtaposition from heaven, really *__*

The smile he gave Sam at moments like this was worth all of it — the darkness, the danger, the worlds-inside taboo of the two of them together.
Wincest in a nutshell, matey.

His mouth teased and twirled, fingers sweeping up under Sam’s shirt and caressing that flat belly, those lanky hips. The pleasure Dean took from this was so obvious, his loving so intense, that it wasn’t long before Sam was arching his back and giving away all semblance of self and control to his brother.
Just LOVE, man. This fic was so powerful because it was so short, so sweet and light and filled with love, and yet we knew every step of the way that it was Sam and Dean and that they were just taking time off from the darkness and the hunting. This was a beautiful piece; thank you for writing it ^__^
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean slashhalfshellvenus on June 10th, 2006 05:06 pm (UTC)
That's so lovely. Juxtaposition from heaven, really *__*
Thank you. It seems so much like Dean to me-- the outside so different from the inside, and the inside is kept hidden from all but a few. Such a shame, really.

Wincest in a nutshell, matey.
:D We fangirls/boys definitely think so.

Just LOVE, man. This fic was so powerful because it was so short, so sweet and light and filled with love, and yet we knew every step of the way that it was Sam and Dean and that they were just taking time off from the darkness and the hunting.
Wow. *glee* Thank you. It's nice to have that contrast between how the rest of their lives are run (and not in a seedy motel room for a change, or the car which is good for different moods). We always hope they'll reach this place someday, where this change in their relationship is the thing that finally brings some lasting light into their lives.

Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments. :)
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zenamydogzenamydog on June 10th, 2006 02:19 pm (UTC)
Wow!!!!! That was so well written. Congrats!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean slashhalfshellvenus on June 10th, 2006 05:27 pm (UTC)
Thank you, Zena! I'm glad you liked it. :)
ivy_x3 on June 21st, 2006 04:30 pm (UTC)
you recommended this to me and i must say, excellent work. (and it is not fluffy at all)

my favorite line: Dean was a secret only Sam was permitted to know.

oh that one just made me melt. It's true, that even with all the girls dean's been with, Sam's the one that actually gets to see Dean display affection and heart and not just hornyness when it comes to this. That Sam was the only one able to completely understand Dean and make Dean lose himself, lose an amount of control, when they're together.

The pleasure Dean took from this was so obvious, his loving so intense

dean's love for Sam isn't just physical, it's all consuming. Dean's willing to do so much for Sam when it comes to hunting and i could just imagine the power of Dean's love when they're together like this.

bravo bravo. :claps happily: and the meadow sex just makes it all sinfully sweet!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Genhalfshellvenus on June 21st, 2006 09:52 pm (UTC)
my favorite line: Dean was a secret only Sam was permitted to know.
:) Someone made an icon out of that line-- it's up above in the comments.

That line says everything about Dean to me-- always hiding under his mask of swagger and sarcasm, revealing his true self only to Sam (even in canon).

bravo bravo. :claps happily: and the meadow sex just makes it all sinfully sweet!
Thank you, Ivy! That meadowDean picture seems just made for this opportunity... :)
aliquid stat pro aliquomaygra on July 6th, 2006 01:58 am (UTC)
aw, honey, this was both sweet and hot. And I love this line muchly: Dean was a secret only Sam was permitted to know

Perfect.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Dean's Secrethalfshellvenus on July 6th, 2006 04:25 am (UTC)
aw, honey, this was both sweet and hot.
Thank you so much! Hope it lifted the mood a little. And if not, I have some CrackPicSpam I can hook you up with, assuming you haven't already seen it. Season 1, in stick figures. Truly.

And I love this line muchly: Dean was a secret only Sam was permitted to know.
That idea carries so much weight with me in terms of what Dean hides from the rest of the world, but shows to Sam (even when Sam doesn't notice). Someone made a lovely icon of it above ^.

I hope the rest of the day and week go better for you. :)
spnfan_232 on June 15th, 2009 02:55 am (UTC)
Beautiful and hot. Didn't need dialogue to follow that.