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18 September 2011 @ 04:04 pm
Prison Break Slash Fiction: "The Blackest Heart" (Michael/Lincoln, PG-13)  
Title: The Blackest Heart
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Michael/Lincoln (Slash, Drabble)
Rating: PG-13
Summary (Pre-series): There were things Lincoln wasn't supposed to see…
Author's Notes: Michael/Lincoln, unwilling desire, for realpestilence. Also for fanfic100, this is "Black."

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There were things Lincoln wasn't supposed to see. That never stopped him from looking:

Michael, under the bleachers with the basketball team's captain, eyes glassy and lips swollen from the fervor of forbidden kisses.

Michael, ushering a man out of the apartment, where the telltale scents of sweat and semen would be waiting.

Michael, following someone into an alley, his lazy posture a lie compared to the unwavering intensity of his eyes.

Lincoln watched, his soul as black as the shadows that hid him.

Michael's secrets didn't bother him as much as Michael doing all those things with someone else.


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mercurybard on September 19th, 2011 12:07 am (UTC)
I was feeling nostalgic and look! You posted this with Linc being all jealous and whatnot. :D
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB slashhalfshellvenus on September 19th, 2011 05:21 am (UTC)
I usually tend to see this kind of setup as going the other direction, but for some reason jealous-Lincoln really grabbed me.

So much passion, so much wrongness. Guh.
realpestilence: aelfsiden's win!realpestilence on September 19th, 2011 12:30 am (UTC)
Oh, look-just what I wanted! :D
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB slashhalfshellvenus on September 19th, 2011 05:23 am (UTC)
Yay! The story you randomly commented on, with Michael and Lincoln's setup at the bar, was entirely responsible for where this one went. Lincoln being not scandalized but jealous of what Michael's giving away... that's always been a diehard kink of mine, and your prompt led me right to it. :D
dearpeterxonealdearpeterxoneal on September 19th, 2011 06:29 am (UTC)
Ah, love Linc like this. Quietly possessive, jealous and on the edge. What will he do about it 'tho? ;)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB slashhalfshellvenus on September 19th, 2011 09:24 pm (UTC)
Ooh, that icon looks awfully familiar. :D

I love the sting of jealousy, especially in slash and especially where the person feeling it is trapped and cannot make their desires known.

Sometimes, it is doomed to burst out under pressure, even when the person hopes to deny it forever.

But with a drabble like this one, it's more about capturing the moment-- especially because Lincoln is the jealous one here, and I hardly ever write that setup. The prompt made mde do it. :)
dearpeterxonealdearpeterxoneal on September 19th, 2011 09:54 pm (UTC)
Ooh, that icon looks awfully familiar. :D

Yeah, White Collar's Neal & Peter have brought me back to the fold, so to speak! LOL

Linc would feel trapped. By both his feelings and by his relationship to his brother but I think eventually he'd have to make a choice. Or let Michael make it for him.

The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB slashhalfshellvenus on September 19th, 2011 10:39 pm (UTC)
:D I've sure missed you, so it's nice to see you back. :)

And knowing Lincoln, he'd either make the choice by crossing the line while drunk, or he'd suffer in silence until Michael made the choice for him.

So many kinks/opportunities, so little time!
dearpeterxonealdearpeterxoneal on September 22nd, 2011 07:40 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much K! It's nice to wade back in the pool
a teeny bit.
Deathcrumb: Awwwdeathcrumb on September 20th, 2011 10:04 am (UTC)
Oh, I love a jealous!Linc!
So wrong in so many ways and still it kinda makes sense - him being jealous of Michaels 'relationships'.

And I really love your style:3
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: DominicSexyhalfshellvenus on September 21st, 2011 04:09 am (UTC)
Linc seems like the type that could easily be jealous-- he's certainly quick-tempered enough!

And given the chance to see something he wants, even though he shouldn't, something Michael's just giving away right and left... fwoom!

Glad you enjoyed this. :)
Deathcrumb: hsdeathcrumb on September 21st, 2011 01:57 pm (UTC)
MTE! :)
I think it's Linc being short-tempered and Michael being himself - saying something totally innocent but making it sound sooo not innocent :D - what makes them look so good together.

(hope you get what I mean :D)

Maz (or foxxy!): Don't Fu...tuesdaeschild on September 20th, 2011 11:07 am (UTC)
I always really loved jealous!Michael but this was a whole new experience and I find myself loving jealous!Lincoln even more!

Lincoln watched, his soul as black as the shadows that hid him.

Awesome line! This officially classifies Linc's jealousy as seething I believe!

You certainly haven't lost your M/L mojo, my friend. :)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB slashhalfshellvenus on September 21st, 2011 04:11 am (UTC)
I feel much like you do- jealous!Michael has been second nature for so long (you can imagine how often he's been in that position), and yet jealous!Lincoln has such unexpected appeal.

Partly because sexed-up intense angry Lincoln is all the more RAWR!

Whoo-- nice to see so many M/L lovers enjoying this one. :)
The female version of Rob Gordon: pb: mike/linc passion and intensityfreaky_nea on September 20th, 2011 03:21 pm (UTC)
Oh! OOOOOOOOOOOH! What an unexpected twist! <3 Jealous!Linc FTW!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB slashhalfshellvenus on September 21st, 2011 04:12 am (UTC)
:D Unexpected for me too-- it's not at all what I would usually write.

But I cannot deny the appeal. Whoo!
Filthy Bunny: Domnomnomfilthy_bunny on September 20th, 2011 04:21 pm (UTC)
YUM. ;) Jealous Linc is a rare delicacy indeed!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB slashhalfshellvenus on September 21st, 2011 06:35 am (UTC)
Thank you! Glad you liked it! :D
Clair de Lune: pb - brothers4clair_de_lune on November 6th, 2011 12:47 pm (UTC)
Lincoln is so doomed here. Unrequited love - I asssume it is unrequited, but with Michael, you never know - and jealousy are already bad enough, but the incest aspect makes it even worse. In just a few sentences, you can feel how much it's killing him.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB slashhalfshellvenus on November 24th, 2011 12:31 am (UTC)
Thank you!

Wanting what you should not want is hard enough, but adding cannot have into the mix only makes it worse.

But what a picture-- it's hard to blame Lincoln for getting caught by it, isn't it?