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03 January 2011 @ 07:54 pm
SPN Slash Drabble: "Undone" (Sam/Dean, PG)  
Title: Undone
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Sam/Dean (Wincest, Drabble)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Dean kept chasing that illusion of self-control.
Author's Notes: A belated birthday drabble for thehighwaywoman, who wanted Sam/Dean (and who doesn't?)
Also for supernatural100, this is "Hunger."

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Sometimes Dean could go days without giving in.

The illusion that he'd mastered his unholy need for his brother would settle down inside him just enough for his hopes to return.

But it was never long before alcohol or adrenaline—or God, just the smell of Sam's hair—fueled the ache that made Dean do the things he shouldn't.

Sam never refused him, never mentioned the days they went without, and kissed him just as greedily.

It didn't matter.

Dean swore he'd beat this, despite those times he couldn't even wait for the two of them to reach a motel.


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ash48: Art - boys cuddlingash48 on January 4th, 2011 05:24 am (UTC)
*loves*

Just give in to it Dean... *g*
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on January 4th, 2011 07:10 am (UTC)
Thank you so much!

Oh, if it were anyone but Sam he'd have stopped trying to hold back long ago...
realpestilencerealpestilence on January 4th, 2011 05:27 am (UTC)
Meanwhile, Sam is dying inside, waiting for Dean to touch him. We need a Sam pov companion for this!


Which means, I like it a lot. It emphasizes the forbidden aspect and makes it clear the feeling's mutual, without going OTT.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on January 4th, 2011 07:16 am (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it!

I think we get a sense of what Sam's feeling, and that it's far clearer to the reader than to Dean. That just makes the pangs all the greater, doesn't it?
Rainrainofthedead on January 5th, 2011 01:24 am (UTC)
Then would it be terrible of me to have written a little bitty thing inspired by this from Sammy's point of view before seeing your reply to this comment?
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Hughalfshellvenus on January 5th, 2011 01:27 am (UTC)
Not at all! :)
Rainrainofthedead on January 7th, 2011 05:59 pm (UTC)
It's up in my ficcy journal here if you are at all interested. Figured since you inspired it, you should get first peek.
jelly babies to manualthehighwaywoman on January 4th, 2011 11:54 am (UTC)
Oh, I love this ♥ Thank you! I love how you layer so much emotion in one hundred words.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on January 4th, 2011 09:39 pm (UTC)
Yay, I'm so glad you like it! I wanted something very intense and Wincesty for you, and I hope this made it far enough on both counts! ♥
gunznammo2gunznammo2 on January 4th, 2011 01:17 pm (UTC)
I'd just say Dean's self-control is compromised when it comes to his Sammy. : )
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on January 4th, 2011 09:40 pm (UTC)
It is-- though Sam is the reason he can't stop trying. He's so convinced he's damaging his little brother that he can't fully see what's right there in front of him.
Entendre? Make mine a double.: SN Sam hearts Deandeirdre_c on January 4th, 2011 01:27 pm (UTC)
OH BOYS. (Dean, don't be hard on yourself. NO ONE could resist that.)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on January 4th, 2011 09:41 pm (UTC)
Icon love! I don't think I've seen that one before.

Poor Dean-- he has to resist, because Sam's his brother, but if he only knew he wouldn't try so hard. *wibble*
tekmessa: Sam/Dean hugtekmessa on January 4th, 2011 03:22 pm (UTC)
Oh, Dean! Fighting it so hard when it is actually something that makes both of them happy.

But it was never long before alcohol or adrenaline—or God, just the smell of Sam's hair—fueled the ache that made Dean do the things he shouldn't.

For some reason I think it's always just Sammy being Sammy more often Sam's smell than alcohol or adrenaline, but denial is Dean's second name, isn't it? ;)

Lovely drabble. ♥ Thanks for sharing it.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on January 4th, 2011 09:43 pm (UTC)
I think the mere presence of Sam is Dean's Achilles' heel, much as he'd like to think otherwise.

but denial is Dean's second name, isn't it? ;)
When it comes to the things he truly needs (especially what he needs from Sam), it sure is. Food? Alcohol? Women? No problem. The deep emotional pull that Sam holds over him? Deny-deny-deny.

So glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for reading!
Yo: SPN:  Sam BW for prettydreamlittleyo on January 4th, 2011 06:36 pm (UTC)
*adores*
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on January 4th, 2011 09:43 pm (UTC)
Thank you! ♥
charmedstrange1charmedstrange1 on January 5th, 2011 01:28 pm (UTC)
GUH. That about says it. ;)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on January 6th, 2011 06:15 pm (UTC)
Hee! Thank you! :D
Trini: [Sam/Jared] B/W Serioustrinipedia on January 5th, 2011 08:13 pm (UTC)
*chest clenches*

broken boys = :/

you're still amazing, though.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on January 6th, 2011 06:16 pm (UTC)
They seem doomed from the start, don't they, with this situation they've found themselves in?

But there's always the hope they'll finally see the truth, and embrace it.

Thanks for your sweet comments!
     Mandy: Dean's Darknessa_phoenixdragon on January 6th, 2011 07:14 am (UTC)
GODS...ohhh, Dean - it isn't just you, darling. Sam wants you too...*wibble*

*hugs you*
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on January 6th, 2011 06:17 pm (UTC)
Wibble is right. Oh, Dean-- it's all there waiting, if you could only see it and stop fighting it.

*hugs you back* ♥
hurricanes & heartachesrejeneration on January 12th, 2011 02:03 am (UTC)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on January 13th, 2011 10:32 pm (UTC)
Thank you, Jen! :)
Lilith Rain: Lucky Cup.lilithrain on March 26th, 2011 01:05 pm (UTC)
Woo. Made of win. ♥
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on April 8th, 2011 07:41 pm (UTC)
Thank you!

The Sam-ness always wins, in the end. Dean's willpower will never be strong enough. :)