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halfshellvenus
10 November 2010 @ 01:34 pm
SPN Slash Drabble: "Feverish Desire" (Sam/Dean, PG)  
Title: Feverish Desire
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Sam/Dean (Slash, Drabble)
Rating: PG
Summary (S1): Against Sam, then and now, Dean never had a chance.
Author's Notes: A late birthday present for nrrrdy_grrrl. Hope you like it!
Also for supernatural100, this is "Fever".

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He was fine without Sam, Dean told himself, believing it until he ambushed Sam in his apartment. The sharp pain of missing his brother flooded back like Sam had left only yesterday, but Dean joked like it was nothing.

Sam's presence smoldered across the car—foreign, resentful, intense—until Dean was dizzy with it, struggling for self-control.

He never had a chance.

Sam came out of the bathroom that first night, lanky and long-limbed and newly confident.

Dean was on him in a heartbeat, betrayal and promises as forgotten as all the reasons he'd sworn he'd never do this again.


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nrrrdy_grrrl on November 10th, 2010 09:49 pm (UTC)
xoxoxoxox
Squeeing louder than a dolphin in a kiddie pool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Birthdayhalfshellvenus on November 10th, 2010 09:55 pm (UTC)
Re: xoxoxoxox
Yayyyyyyy! So glad you liked it!

And I'm sorry it took so long to finish-- had the idea right there immediately, but that stoopid snoOORZZZzzz problem keeps getting in the way.

Whoo!
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loustat: OTP S/Dloustat on November 10th, 2010 09:56 pm (UTC)
Hee...
Pulling my heart strings as always!<3
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on November 10th, 2010 10:00 pm (UTC)
Re: Hee...
And Dean's too... all that denial just teeters and shakes, and then folds like a house of cards.
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auroramama on November 10th, 2010 10:20 pm (UTC)
Oh very much yes.
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on November 11th, 2010 08:52 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
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Jas Masson: where's deanjasmasson on November 10th, 2010 10:29 pm (UTC)
YES. S1 feelings, please come back.

Very powerful. <3
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on November 11th, 2010 08:52 pm (UTC)
Yes, more S1! When it all made sense, no matter how frustrating the miscommunication sometimes was.

Glad you enjoyed this!
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I'm Mulder, She's Scully: bigbangrunedgirl on November 10th, 2010 10:34 pm (UTC)
Oh, boys....this was lovely :)
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on November 11th, 2010 08:53 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much!

Oh, how I miss the early angst and the hope that things could still get better.
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Trini: [Wincest/J2] wecan'ttrinipedia on November 10th, 2010 10:45 pm (UTC)
HDSBGF3EWVS3BEWHHEWSN UNF.

missed your drabbles like whoa <3
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on November 11th, 2010 08:54 pm (UTC)
Thank you!

Boy, I've sure missed writing them. The last year really made writing any kind of SPN hard. :0
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Yo: SPN: Sam BW for prettydreamlittleyo on November 10th, 2010 10:49 pm (UTC)
*loves*
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on November 11th, 2010 08:55 pm (UTC)
Thank you! :)
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lsl1995lsl1995 on November 10th, 2010 11:39 pm (UTC)
ahhh, this was simply amazing(:
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on November 11th, 2010 08:56 pm (UTC)
Yay, I'm so glad!

I always try to get that feeling of a whole story in, including all the shifts of intent and denial and outcome. :)
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Entendre? Make mine a double.: SN brothers stillnessdeirdre_c on November 10th, 2010 11:59 pm (UTC)
Oh young(er) boys! I miss you! <333

(And good to see you too, Venus! ♥)
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on November 11th, 2010 08:57 pm (UTC)
I miss them too! I (can't believe I'm saying this) miss their simple pain!

And when they loved each other so dysfunctionally and brokenly, but still... it was love in an unmerciful world.

I've missed me writing them too!
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keerawakeerawa on November 11th, 2010 12:46 am (UTC)
Intense and believable!
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on November 11th, 2010 08:58 pm (UTC)
Yay! This is the kind of comment that makes me feel all *glee* ! :)
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brigid_tanner: boys-erotically codependentbrigid_tanner on November 11th, 2010 02:33 am (UTC)
I've missed your Sam/Dean drabbles! Lovely. As usual, I want more :)
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on November 11th, 2010 08:59 pm (UTC)
Oh, so have I. The last one was months ago, and canon has just made it so hard. You don't want to know how many stalled out longer Wincest fics I have on my hard drive. It's maddening.</small I want more too, but I'll settle for anything these days!
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ash48: Art - boys cuddlingash48 on November 11th, 2010 04:44 am (UTC)
Oh yes. Thank you.

Boys <333333333333333
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on November 11th, 2010 08:59 pm (UTC)
So glad you liked it! :)
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tekmessa: Sam/Dean hugtekmessa on November 11th, 2010 07:23 am (UTC)
Oh, yes! This is actually all I want. Lovely drabble.

He never had a chance.

I could quote everything and squee over it, but I think this summs it up for Sam and Dean both. ♥

Thanks for writing this.
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on November 11th, 2010 09:00 pm (UTC)
This is actually all I want.

Oh, me too. At any time in their lives, in any setting, no matter what's gone before... I just want this.

Thanks for your lovely comments!
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Maerhys: ♐ we twomaerhys on November 11th, 2010 11:40 am (UTC)
I love the intensity of this - the inevitability Lovely.
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on November 11th, 2010 09:01 pm (UTC)
Yes-- inevitability! It's one of my favorite flavors of Sam/Dean, where no matter how much they try to deny and forestall it always happens because their love is too strong to be defeated.

So glad you enjoyed it. :)
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Lilith Rain: Merlin's Big Grin.lilithrain on March 26th, 2011 01:04 pm (UTC)
Oh, beautiful and makes me think there would be more. ♥
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on April 8th, 2011 07:38 pm (UTC)
So glad you liked it!

There's the sense that, no matter how hard Dean tries, he'll never be able to resist Sam. It's a battle he could spend forever fighting, and still always lose.
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