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28 January 2010 @ 10:49 pm
SPN Slash Drabble: "Sweltering" (Sam/Dean, PG-13)  
Title: Sweltering
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Sam/Dean (Slash, Drabble)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Hot and bored is the worst kind of waiting, but it doesn't have to stay that way.
Author's Notes: A drabble meme offering for gretazreta, who asked for Sam/Dean and "humidity."
Also for supernatural100, this is "Distraction."

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With air so thick he could feel it on his skin, Dean sank down in the front seat and closed his eyes. They were waiting—brick-oven hot even in the shade—until dark before driving into town to dig up a grave.

Dean's head swam with the liquidity of sleep, broken by sharp arousal:

Sam.

He knew that touch like his own name, could've found it the dark.

"C'mon," Sam said, his voice searing like a brand.

Dean pulled him down, wrestled off his clothes between kisses.

Things were about to get hotter, but damn if it wasn't worth it.


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Trini: WincestKisstrinipedia on January 29th, 2010 06:58 am (UTC)
YES.
*fans self*
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN SpecialHellhalfshellvenus on January 29th, 2010 07:21 am (UTC)
Whoo! That icon just cuts right to the chase-- could be an interlude in this story.

Thank goodness for people who know how to do great manips!
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean OTPhalfshellvenus on January 29th, 2010 08:01 am (UTC)
If I were Dean, I'd risk heat stroke and hot leather seats for an opportunity like this!
Gretagretazreta on January 29th, 2010 07:47 am (UTC)
Eeeeeee this is AWESOME. SO AWESOME.
And drippy hot humid sweltering, in both ways!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on January 29th, 2010 08:02 am (UTC)
Yay! I'm glad you liked how it turned out, and I truly hope it was worth the wait.

Suddenly, all that heat and humidity doesn't seem so bad, does it? More like foreplay than anything else. :0
devon99 on January 29th, 2010 09:34 am (UTC)
Mmm, lovely as always.
PG13 and yet swelteringly hot.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on January 30th, 2010 04:26 am (UTC)
Yes! Hotness with PG-13, that's what I like to hear! :D
Maerhys: √ ghost kissesmaerhys on January 29th, 2010 08:48 pm (UTC)
He knew that touch like his own name, could've found it the dark.

UNF. I love this, so much said in so few words. ♥
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on January 30th, 2010 04:27 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! Whoo!
realpestilencerealpestilence on January 29th, 2010 11:03 pm (UTC)
Apparently, grave-digging turns them on, lol. :D


I love the "He knew that touch" line-it could work equally well for either of them, you know?
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Birthdayhalfshellvenus on January 30th, 2010 04:28 am (UTC)
So glad you liked this! And I'm late with the birthday wishes, but I hope it's been good so far!

And if you'd like a drabble of your own, please say the word! Doesn't even have to be SPN-- could be another one of my random-fandoms, for instance. :)
realpestilencerealpestilence on January 30th, 2010 04:38 am (UTC)
Oh, thank you! Yes, please-Iron Man, if you would. :D

Tony, showing unexpected vulnerabliltiy


Thanks!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: IronManhalfshellvenus on February 1st, 2010 08:07 am (UTC)
I didn't know you liked Iron Man-- though maybe the slash is not your thing, which is most of what I write.

With that in mind, I wrote your birthday story as Gen. I hope you like it, and many happy returns!
brigid_tanner: boys-naked bodiesbrigid_tanner on January 30th, 2010 04:10 am (UTC)
YES! totally hot. Love it.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on January 30th, 2010 04:28 am (UTC)
Whoo-hoo! Thank you!
deadlynight27: Sammydeadlynight27 on January 30th, 2010 08:25 am (UTC)
*Noms* This was lovely! =)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on February 1st, 2010 08:07 am (UTC)
Thank you! I don't think anyone has nommed one of my stories before, so this is a very nice first!
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on February 1st, 2010 08:08 am (UTC)
If the hotness comes through in drabble length, I've done my job! So glad you liked it! :D
I do not think it means what you think it means.tcs1121 on January 30th, 2010 02:47 pm (UTC)
Yep.

*points to computer screen*

Just like that.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on February 1st, 2010 08:09 am (UTC)
Oh, to be able to spy on that particular carPorn moment!
jjinmo_356jjinmo_356 on January 30th, 2010 09:15 pm (UTC)
Oh yes it is alway worth it when it involves Dean and Sam
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on February 3rd, 2010 08:11 pm (UTC)
The car could be baking them to a near-stroke, and it wouldn't matter. Whoo!
lazy_8s: scratchlazy_8s on January 30th, 2010 10:04 pm (UTC)

Very, very hot! Loved it.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on February 3rd, 2010 08:12 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I was really going for that instant-port effect. :)
dreamboat_kickswaxing_gibbous on January 31st, 2010 01:38 am (UTC)
This fic is smokin!

Seriously, the last line sent chills up my spine, and I loved this: He knew that touch like his own name, could've found it the dark. So true! And what great phrasing!

Fantastic job, as always.


The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on February 3rd, 2010 08:13 pm (UTC)
Whoo-hoo! Thank you!

I love the idea of them being so irresistible to each other than it takes nothing to set them both off, and the where/when doesn't matter as much as the now.
Melissa N. Tillotsonbrianshanelvr on January 31st, 2010 06:12 am (UTC)
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on February 3rd, 2010 08:14 pm (UTC)
Exactly!

That icon cracks me up, too. Oh, Becky, they sent you to shame us and yet your hidden awesomeness made it all backfire. :D