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12 April 2006 @ 07:53 pm
Prison Break Fanfiction: Night Vision  
Author: HalfshellVenus
Category: Lincoln/Michael or Sam/Dean (Slash, Drabble-Poem)
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Slash, established relationship. 100-word drabble poem of lovemaking.
Authors Notes: Written for poisontaster, who requested a 100-word Lincoln/Michael drabble either Pre or Post-prison. Also for fanfic100, where I have the Slash pairing of Lincoln and Michael. This is for prompt #23, “Lovers.” Because of the nature of the fandoms, this can also be read as Sam/Dean rather than Lincoln/Michael: pick your pairing. :)

They slip/sigh
Sweep and stroke and buck and choke
With fingers, lips and quiet words
With thought and touch and sharp intent.
Light filters past as skin follows and flows,
Brushing pillow/sheet/softness
In wanton motion, tender strength.
Lips seek and merge in feeling
Falling slower, deeper, yes-there
Trailing farther, faster, fuller
Down to Please and Oh and Yes.

They bend and hold and break and fold.
Each the other’s
Spent and sated, soulful, sweet
Voices rise and drift in answer and promise:

Will You? floats like a breath of tomorrow,
Always soothes like a stream heard in darkness.

The Good, The Bad and The Lana: brothers jail crawfishthelana on April 18th, 2006 03:48 am (UTC)
Grin, I think the poem that doesn't feel at least a little counter intuitive to me still has to be invented ;D

I still love that you are experimenting with styles and I think you should definitively do it more. Obviously it was a smashing success :D
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphorshalfshellvenus on April 18th, 2006 04:18 am (UTC)
I still love that you are experimenting with styles and I think you should definitively do it more.
I should make a list of ideas to try out (and nothing funky like "no is" or "no 'the'" or "no verbs").

What if I wrote a Michael fic in Lars47 language? It could be... futurefic! :0
The Good, The Bad and The Lana: big smile happy sarathelana on April 18th, 2006 04:21 am (UTC)
LOL, I'd totally read it. (then again, what wouldn't I read?)

You could do things like a newspaper article or letter style or coroner or psychologist's report. Remember that little notes thing that liberate did? Loved that one.