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12 April 2006 @ 07:53 pm
Prison Break Fanfiction: Night Vision  
Author: HalfshellVenus
Category: Lincoln/Michael or Sam/Dean (Slash, Drabble-Poem)
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Slash, established relationship. 100-word drabble poem of lovemaking.
Authors Notes: Written for poisontaster, who requested a 100-word Lincoln/Michael drabble either Pre or Post-prison. Also for fanfic100, where I have the Slash pairing of Lincoln and Michael. This is for prompt #23, “Lovers.” Because of the nature of the fandoms, this can also be read as Sam/Dean rather than Lincoln/Michael: pick your pairing. :)

They slip/sigh
Sweep and stroke and buck and choke
With fingers, lips and quiet words
With thought and touch and sharp intent.
Light filters past as skin follows and flows,
Brushing pillow/sheet/softness
In wanton motion, tender strength.
Lips seek and merge in feeling
Falling slower, deeper, yes-there
Trailing farther, faster, fuller
Down to Please and Oh and Yes.

They bend and hold and break and fold.
Each the other’s
Spent and sated, soulful, sweet
Voices rise and drift in answer and promise:

Will You? floats like a breath of tomorrow,
Always soothes like a stream heard in darkness.

The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB slashhalfshellvenus on April 18th, 2006 02:06 am (UTC)
You really are the Botticelli of Slash fiction.
Wow. Just wow. This could be my secret slogan, but I'd feel I was overstating the case. ♥

You have the rare ability of making love and passion a visual experience for your readers.
Oooh. I certainly try. I want to pull the reader in, and make her or him feel everything as if they're right there, or even one of the characters in the story.

And I want readers to understand the characters-- including their flaws, and how those came to be. It's part of my understanding of the characters too. ;)

Thank you so much, DragonMaiden. I so look forward to your thoughtful comments. :)