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12 April 2006 @ 07:53 pm
Prison Break Fanfiction: Night Vision  
Author: HalfshellVenus
Category: Lincoln/Michael or Sam/Dean (Slash, Drabble-Poem)
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Slash, established relationship. 100-word drabble poem of lovemaking.
Authors Notes: Written for poisontaster, who requested a 100-word Lincoln/Michael drabble either Pre or Post-prison. Also for fanfic100, where I have the Slash pairing of Lincoln and Michael. This is for prompt #23, “Lovers.” Because of the nature of the fandoms, this can also be read as Sam/Dean rather than Lincoln/Michael: pick your pairing. :)

They slip/sigh
Sweep and stroke and buck and choke
With fingers, lips and quiet words
With thought and touch and sharp intent.
Light filters past as skin follows and flows,
Brushing pillow/sheet/softness
In wanton motion, tender strength.
Lips seek and merge in feeling
Falling slower, deeper, yes-there
Trailing farther, faster, fuller
Down to Please and Oh and Yes.

They bend and hold and break and fold.
Each the other’s
Spent and sated, soulful, sweet
Voices rise and drift in answer and promise:

Will You? floats like a breath of tomorrow,
Always soothes like a stream heard in darkness.

The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Venushalfshellvenus on April 13th, 2006 03:33 am (UTC)

It's so very different from anything I've done yet. I wrote poetry for years (now I'm down to anniversary poems for my husband and that's about it), but I've never tried that for a fanfic post. olivia_notebook inspired this, with a gorgeous Sam/Dean drabble poem she wrote a few weeks ago.

Sweep and stroke and buck and choke
I love that this is poetical and raw at the same time.

It's desire, both soft and strong, all at once.

There's so much more echo and rhyming here than in anything I've done for years, but it really just seemed to fit the mood.

And I know what you mean about "Will you?" and "Always," because that is a recurring theme in my romantic heart. Even moreso for Sam/Dean than for Lincoln/Michael.

So glad you liked it! I kind of went out on a limb with this one, so thank goodness it wasn't terrible.