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12 April 2006 @ 07:53 pm
Prison Break Fanfiction: Night Vision  
Author: HalfshellVenus
Category: Lincoln/Michael or Sam/Dean (Slash, Drabble-Poem)
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Slash, established relationship. 100-word drabble poem of lovemaking.
Authors Notes: Written for poisontaster, who requested a 100-word Lincoln/Michael drabble either Pre or Post-prison. Also for fanfic100, where I have the Slash pairing of Lincoln and Michael. This is for prompt #23, “Lovers.” Because of the nature of the fandoms, this can also be read as Sam/Dean rather than Lincoln/Michael: pick your pairing. :)

They slip/sigh
Sweep and stroke and buck and choke
With fingers, lips and quiet words
With thought and touch and sharp intent.
Light filters past as skin follows and flows,
Brushing pillow/sheet/softness
In wanton motion, tender strength.
Lips seek and merge in feeling
Falling slower, deeper, yes-there
Trailing farther, faster, fuller
Down to Please and Oh and Yes.

They bend and hold and break and fold.
Each the other’s
Spent and sated, soulful, sweet
Voices rise and drift in answer and promise:

Will You? floats like a breath of tomorrow,
Always soothes like a stream heard in darkness.

Ice-T: an actor, also a refreshing beverage: SPN gay subtextfiddleyoumust on April 13th, 2006 03:07 am (UTC)
You made me tear up.

This is really beautiful.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Venushalfshellvenus on April 13th, 2006 03:19 am (UTC)
Is it okay?

I haven't done any drabble poems at all, nor apparently a successful Prison Break traditional drabble. But it seemed like I could get more in, somehow, by doing it this way.

So glad you liked it, Jewels! I... don't have a feel for whether this one is good or not.

Ice-T: an actor, also a refreshing beveragefiddleyoumust on April 13th, 2006 03:23 am (UTC)
Oh I loved it. It actually made me cry a little and I don't do that very often. In fact I'm in the best mood ever tonight so the fact that it moved me to tears speaks volumes for it's awesomeness.