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12 April 2006 @ 07:53 pm
Prison Break Fanfiction: Night Vision  
Author: HalfshellVenus
Category: Lincoln/Michael or Sam/Dean (Slash, Drabble-Poem)
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Slash, established relationship. 100-word drabble poem of lovemaking.
Authors Notes: Written for poisontaster, who requested a 100-word Lincoln/Michael drabble either Pre or Post-prison. Also for fanfic100, where I have the Slash pairing of Lincoln and Michael. This is for prompt #23, “Lovers.” Because of the nature of the fandoms, this can also be read as Sam/Dean rather than Lincoln/Michael: pick your pairing. :)



They slip/sigh
Whisper/writhe
Sweep and stroke and buck and choke
With fingers, lips and quiet words
With thought and touch and sharp intent.
Light filters past as skin follows and flows,
Brushing pillow/sheet/softness
In wanton motion, tender strength.
Lips seek and merge in feeling
Falling slower, deeper, yes-there
Trailing farther, faster, fuller
Down to Please and Oh and Yes.

They bend and hold and break and fold.
Each the other’s
Brother/lover.
Spent and sated, soulful, sweet
Voices rise and drift in answer and promise:

Will You? floats like a breath of tomorrow,
Always soothes like a stream heard in darkness.

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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on November 1st, 2006 06:33 pm (UTC)
It's like the embodiment of the sexual act in thought, verse, and cadence.
Very moving. Very visually. Very lyrical.

Thank you so much!

There's a soothing, loving and yet sexual tone to it all that I really like. It's romantic, but not sappy, I think. :)
tyrical: AP_aJolietyrical on November 2nd, 2006 03:05 am (UTC)
I didn't find it sappy at all! Romantic yes, sexual absolutely, but sappy? No not that!