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12 April 2006 @ 07:53 pm
Prison Break Fanfiction: Night Vision  
Author: HalfshellVenus
Category: Lincoln/Michael or Sam/Dean (Slash, Drabble-Poem)
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Slash, established relationship. 100-word drabble poem of lovemaking.
Authors Notes: Written for poisontaster, who requested a 100-word Lincoln/Michael drabble either Pre or Post-prison. Also for fanfic100, where I have the Slash pairing of Lincoln and Michael. This is for prompt #23, “Lovers.” Because of the nature of the fandoms, this can also be read as Sam/Dean rather than Lincoln/Michael: pick your pairing. :)

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etherealflaim: happyetherealflaim on February 17th, 2008 07:58 am (UTC)
W00t! So beautiful! I love how you tell of so much and say so little. It has much of the emotion of a fully fledged fic, distilled down into a beautiful bit of poetry. I think that it is only supported by the body of your other M/L work, having read it, the simple emotions expressed above are fleshed out in my mind with memories of their other encounters (that never happened, lol). Loved it =D
~EF
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB slashhalfshellvenus on March 11th, 2009 06:20 pm (UTC)
the simple emotions expressed above are fleshed out in my mind with memories of their other encounters
Wonderful phrasing, and I think it's true to the story as well. It's an echo of other times the two of them have done this, with all of the best moments still remembered.

Thanks so much for reading! Miss having you around these days...
fiery_fox2fiery_fox2 on April 7th, 2008 04:54 pm (UTC)
Long Ramble...sorry...
Well, you've done it yet again, my friend. I must confess that I've never read your Prison Break slash fanfiction before...this was a foray into it to see if I cared for the pairing...and HELL yeah, I do!
*bounces*
I ADORE this poem...you're very talented when it comes to poetry...and you're also just plain kick-ass when you write anyway...*smooch*...
I wanted you to know that I am sticking this...ERHM...puting this into...oh cripes, it isn't coming out right no matter which way I say it...LOL...okay: I am "memories-ing" it...there...that's a little better...*gringrin*...
Now that I've sufficiently rambled on, here's the point: lovely. Absolutely. Lovely.
*hugz*
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB slashhalfshellvenus on March 11th, 2009 06:21 pm (UTC)
Re: Long Ramble...sorry...
I know you've moved on to a different journal now, but I loved the way you expressed this and I'm glad it drew you into Michael/Lincoln as a pairing! Different from Sam/Dean, but wonderful in part because of the differences. :)
the international assholefickwalker on March 2nd, 2009 10:47 am (UTC)
This is absolutely beautiful. Great work!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB slashhalfshellvenus on March 11th, 2009 06:22 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! There's a limited audience for poetry in general, and knowing that means I'm always that much more thrilled when someone enjoys this story. :)