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08 November 2009 @ 11:32 pm
Supernatural Slash Drabble: "Restless" (Sam/Dean, PG-13)  
Title: Restless
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Sam/Dean (Slash, Drabble)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: As dark nears, Dean gets restless…
Author's Notes: Happy belated birthday to azepherin! I hope this matches what you were looking for. :)
Also for spn_drabble, this is "Twilight."

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As dark nears, Dean gets restless—not always, but often. Sam asked about it once, but Dean's glare wasn't an answer or worth risking again.

It might be the hunt, and anticipating what roams the hidden night. But too often Dean heads to a bar, seeking the distraction of some stranger's bed.

"Wait," Sam says one evening, when Dean's got that look and is halfway out the door.

"What."

He backs Dean against the wall, Dean's blush betrayed by the interest rising up below.

"Sam—"

He kisses Dean, hard and insistent until Dean melts.

Finally.

No-one's going anywhere tonight.


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never trust a big butt and a smileobeetaybee on November 9th, 2009 07:42 am (UTC)
Lovely. You pack so much story into just 100 words. ♥
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on November 9th, 2009 08:04 am (UTC)
Thank you! This one was 123 words at first draft, so getting it down to 100 took some real effort. Lots of "plottiness" there. :0
colleenishcolleenish on November 9th, 2009 10:44 am (UTC)
Oh, that's a happy way to start my day. I have such a kink for blushing Dean. Lovely, thank you!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on November 9th, 2009 05:18 pm (UTC)
I have such a kink for blushing Dean. Lovely, thank you!
Me too-- especially that it's his own naughty thoughts that would make him blush, as they do here. Mmmm!
you've never looked more beautiful, darlingmistyzeo on November 9th, 2009 01:50 pm (UTC)
Yum! Succinct, and wonderful.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on November 9th, 2009 05:18 pm (UTC)
Thank you! :D
Maramara_snh on November 9th, 2009 02:39 pm (UTC)
I like the tension you build here, and in such a short space. I could really feel the pacing, the pent-up energy. Nice!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on November 10th, 2009 07:38 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm glad the "plot" part of it came forward, and that it seemed to build appropriately.

Can't blame Sam for making that move!
Yo: SPN:  Sam BW for prettydreamlittleyo on November 9th, 2009 05:18 pm (UTC)
d'awwww, YUM! Beautifully done!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on November 10th, 2009 07:38 am (UTC)
Yay- I'm so glad you like it! :D
Sarah: Cute Charlie Eppes picyaoifangirl16 on November 9th, 2009 06:43 pm (UTC)
You pack so much EMOTION into your little stories here, that I can just picture what's happening! I LOVE IT!!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on November 10th, 2009 07:39 am (UTC)
Thank you so much-- and what a lovely comment! *snuggles it*
Sarahyaoifangirl16 on November 10th, 2009 11:57 pm (UTC)
Your welcome! :D
Trini: wincest hugtrinipedia on November 9th, 2009 08:09 pm (UTC)
awwwww.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on November 10th, 2009 07:40 am (UTC)
It's a story that never grows old, isn't it? So long as they find each other, I'm happy!
charmedstrange1charmedstrange1 on November 10th, 2009 12:58 am (UTC)
Yummy.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on November 10th, 2009 07:40 am (UTC)
Thank you! :D
brigid_tanner: Boys-boundbrigid_tanner on November 10th, 2009 02:55 am (UTC)
Finally YES! How do you get so much into so few words?
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on November 10th, 2009 07:41 am (UTC)
This one took work-- it was in 123 words when I started the whittling down!

But what a wonderfully evocative prompt that was. Mmmmmmm. :)
I'm Mulder, She's Scully: bigbangrunedgirl on November 10th, 2009 04:53 am (UTC)
Mmmmm. Nice. So much rhythm in the prose, just adds to the impact.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on November 10th, 2009 07:41 am (UTC)
Thank you very much-- I'm so glad you liked it!
abi z: bono edge big gay loveazephirin on November 10th, 2009 03:59 pm (UTC)
Mmm, lovely birthday present! Thank you! I love the tense, restless feel of this. :)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on November 10th, 2009 09:18 pm (UTC)
I'm so glad you liked it! All that want and need and then finally Yes is my hope for these two. If only!

Many happy belated returns, and I hope it was a lovely day for you. :)