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31 March 2006 @ 12:23 am
Prison Break Fanfiction: Twist  
Author: HalfshellVenus
Category: Lincoln/Michael (Slash)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: thelana’s plotbunny: Pre-Prison Michael/Lincoln: A truth or dare type of game, Lincoln is blindfolded and has to guess who is kissing him, and somebody thinks it would be a funny idea to fetch Michael and sneak him into it.
Author’s Notes: Written for fanfic100, where I have the Slash pairing of Lincoln and Michael. This is for Prompt #21, “Friends” (and the stupid things they do).

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It was Jeff’s idea, mixing games with too much drinking. They were in the basement rec room, he and Lincoln, with Veronica, Linda, Debbie and Jennifer. Jeff’s parents were out of town for the weekend, and he did what most high school kids try at least once.

There was beer, vodka, orange juice and chips downstairs. Jeff’s little brother Eddie was upstairs with Michael in the living room. The younger boys were deep in root beer and video games, their eyes glazed over after the first few rounds with occasional recovery for victory yells and the kind of trash-talking that geeks learn from TV shows but will never, ever master.

“Truth or Dare” had been going on for about half an hour in the basement, with Linda admitting she’d peeked in her parents’ nightstand and Jennifer parading her chest in front of the open window. The questions were getting tougher: “Who would you fuck from school if you had the chance?” and “If someone pulled up in a car and gave you $200 dollars for sex, would you do it?”

It was Lincoln’s turn, and he was feeling reckless. “Truth or Dare?” Debbie asked, and Lincoln was the kind of guy that always picked “Dare.”

“We’re going to blindfold you, and you have to kiss the mystery person for at least a minute and then guess who it is.”

“Why didn’t we just play spin the bottle?” Lincoln asked.

“That’s dumb—we haven’t played that since junior high.” Veronica could look so superior and naïve at the same time.

“Okay, fine. Set me up,” Lincoln said. He took a swig of vodka while Jeff looked for a piece of cloth and a couple of the girls went to the bathroom. Minutes later, he was wrapped up and the lights were down, and everyone waited while time stretched out.

If they bring a dog in here, I am killing someone, Lincoln thought. He could hear footsteps on the carpet coming closer, but couldn’t tell much about them. Everyone had been moving around so much that it could be anyone. At least it sounded human…

After a moment, he felt warmth near his face, and then a tentative press of lips at the corner of his mouth.

No half-measures on this one, he thought, turning his face to force a real kiss. It was hesitant but nice—soft, warm lips, so full and receptive. Too lush to be Veronica, too shy to be Jennifer. He swept his tongue over the bottom lip, biting it softly, and felt the slight rasp of roughness at the corner of that mouth.

Jeff, he thought. That sneaky son of a bitch… He felt a competitive edge surfacing inside himself, and he kissed harder, deeper, dirtier with every ounce of technique he had. If Jeff was looking for trouble, he was going to get it. Lincoln nipped and teased and sucked on that mouth and tongue with porn-star seriousness, because making someone cream their pants was the ultimate victory for the kind of 18-year-old who could get laid just walking down the street.

His opponent was breathing hard, lost in an adolescent tsunami of sexual stimulation, and Lincoln could hear whoops and shrieks around them. Only one voice was different, and he heard it then.

“Lincoln, stop!” Veronica said, and he broke off his efforts with a wet, x-rated sound.

“It’s Jeff,” he said smugly, and he yanked the blindfold off.

But it was not. Jeff was giggling across the room and it was Michael who sat there instead, looking at Lincoln with swollen lips and black-pupiled half-open eyes. Michael’s chest was heaving and his expression was one of having been thoroughly debauched.

“Oh my god. Fuck!” Lincoln said, but Michael was on his feet and running out of the room before Lincoln could say or do anything else.

“Whose great idea was that?” he glowered, and Veronica’s downcast eyes gave her away. “Did you think it would be funny?”

“I didn’t think it would go that far,” she complained. “Honestly, what got into you?”

“I thought it was Jeff!” Lincoln yelled, and Jennifer suddenly eyed him from the corner like he was ten fantasies rolled into one.

“Seriously, Linc, I didn’t know you cared.” Jeff was laughing so hard he’d fallen out of the chair, and Linda and Debbie had giggled themselves into tears.

“Fuck off!” Lincoln yelled, grabbing his coat and stomping up the stairs.

“Michael, we’re leaving!” he called out, but the living room was empty. He found Eddie in the kitchen, halfway into a bag of cookies and looking guilty. “Where’s Michael?”

“Um… he already left. Sorry.”

Fuck.

Lincoln strode out the front door to an empty street, picking up speed as he went around the corner. Michael had better be headed home, he thought, because he sure as hell didn’t want to spend the night looking for him. He kept himself from thinking too hard about what kind of talk they were going to be having about all of this later. Truth be told, he didn’t even know where to begin. He hunched his shoulders up and walked faster.

Somebody had really crossed a line tonight, and he had the nagging feeling that it was him.

--------------- FIN --------------

The sequel, "Stung," is here.

 
 
 
cranberry117cranberry117 on March 31st, 2006 08:36 am (UTC)
Poor Michael!
I feel so bad for kid!Michael. I would love to see a follow-up on this with Linc talking to him and Michael being confused/embarrased about his feelings.

This line made me really crack up:
"He found Eddie in the kitchen, halfway into a bag of cookies and looking guilty. "
I remember being caught doing something bad only to be relieved that they weren't looking for me. Eddie dodged a bullet on that one!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB slashhalfshellvenus on March 31st, 2006 05:25 pm (UTC)
Re: Poor Michael!
I feel so bad for kid!Michael. I would love to see a follow-up on this with Linc talking to him and Michael being confused/embarrased about his feelings.
I know. I can't promise to write it (not everything has to have a sequel), but ouch. One of them is playing a game to burn his friend, and the other is jolted into a whole new world he didn't even see coming.

This line made me really crack up:
"He found Eddie in the kitchen, halfway into a bag of cookies and looking guilty. "
I remember being caught doing something bad only to be relieved that they weren't looking for me. Eddie dodged a bullet on that one!

Heh! Yes, sadly I have a personal basis for this experience (although hey-- what kid doesn't?) ;)
The Good, The Bad and The Lana: happy sarathelana on March 31st, 2006 08:54 am (UTC)
Eeeeeeeee, I love this! You can't stop here! Noooooooo! I want the aftermath! I want more POVs. Ok, especially I want the aftermath/confrontation.

I love Lincoln's thoughts. They made me laugh so hard.
If they bring a dog in here, I am killing someone,

I love that now everybody thinks that Lincoln wants to make out with Jeff and that Jennifer thinks that that is hot as hell. (hmmm, I feel another aftermath coming, Jennifer (maybe Jeff and Jennifer?) putting the moves on Lincoln as a follow up? And Lincoln would probably be pissy/disgusted because it is connected to this event of them tricking him)

And I have so much love for this (because, yeah, totally):

and Lincoln was the kind of guy that always picked “Dare.”

And totally unexplainable random love for this:

“That’s dumb—we haven’t played that since junior high.” Veronica could look so superior and naïve at the same time.

And I love Lincoln turning on porno kissing to get back at "Jeff" :)

And just perfect last line.

he had the nagging feeling that it was him.

It just works so well, original characters and all. Just feels so real.

tiny nitpick: didn't the bios say that Lincoln dropped out of school? Then again, well, the bios, we all know how fluent they are.

Seriously, sooooooo much aftermath. Michael/Lincoln fight/aftermath, maybe with more kissing (maybe more sweet and less lusty?)? Michael POV on Veronica coming in and asking him to kiss Lincoln. Maybe a reluctant Veronica aftermath where she hunts down Lincoln and sheepishly asks Lincoln about the event. What that means for them, if he is mad at her and if it means that Lincoln likes guys (and if it is pre-kissing Michael again he'd probably be all WTF? I was just doing it to piss off "Jeff"). Maybe he saying that he has never kissed her like that. And of course Jennifer and/or Jeff wanting an follow up hook up :)
The Good, The Bad and The Lana: dom lazythelana on March 31st, 2006 09:04 am (UTC)
Also?

with occasional recovery for victory yells and the kind of trash-talking that geeks learn from TV shows but will never, ever master.

LOVE!

At least it sounded human…

And this will never stop being funny.

Also? Lincoln would totally kiss a dog if somebody dared him hard enougn and gave him enough money. I mean ever since "The Rat" stupid dare taking Lincoln is practically canon :)
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The Good, The Bad and The Lana: naw micheal sniffythelana on March 31st, 2006 10:58 am (UTC)
Re: Will you marry me?
=> seen the new preview clips yet? Michael with dorky ear warmers :) http://zsuness.livejournal.com/171047.html
Re: Will you marry me? - halfshellvenus on March 31st, 2006 05:35 pm (UTC) (Expand)
who breaks a butterfly upon a wheellaminy on March 31st, 2006 12:11 pm (UTC)
No, you can't stop there! Maybe...sequel? With some more kissing? Oh, this is so good!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB slashhalfshellvenus on March 31st, 2006 05:42 pm (UTC)
Wow-- so much love for a little bunnylet. Although Lincoln/Michael kissing by stealth is so much hotter than any bunny can contain. :0

I'll be thinking about a sequel, since so many people are asking for it (not that I'm surprised by that, since there's potential there). ;)

Thanks!
goodbyemyfancy: Prison Break lovegoodbyemyfancy on March 31st, 2006 12:15 pm (UTC)
*gales of laughter* Sheer brilliance - and it was totally believeable to have Veronica to think up that mystery kisser!! And Linc at 18 would def know how ot porn star kiss ;)

Love to see the conversation with kid Michael after this ;)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: PB slashhalfshellvenus on March 31st, 2006 05:43 pm (UTC)
And Linc at 18 would def know how ot porn star kiss ;)

And be allll about using it to embarass someone who's trying to embarass him.

I can easily see him using his sexiness as a weapon, even at that age. ;)
dragon9maiden on March 31st, 2006 02:01 pm (UTC)
Another brilliant story! I love it!
I guess a kiss can be the sexiest thing if it is written well. You set up the kiss in the dark and focused on the Lincoln's senses. Very sensual. What a great way to launch your readers' imagination!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: kissMichaelhalfshellvenus on March 31st, 2006 05:45 pm (UTC)
I guess a kiss can be the sexiest thing if it is written well.
I am so big on good kissing fic it isn't even funny. That icon is just beautiful, BTW. And perfect for this story.

You set up the kiss in the dark and focused on the Lincoln's senses. Very sensual.
I'm all about the sensuality whenever I can work it in and it makes sense. That tends to be what I like reading the most, hence I tend to write it. ;)

Thank you, dragonmaiden :D
Are we back to hos over bros?lissa_bear on March 31st, 2006 05:30 pm (UTC)
Yeah, that was good. I'll come back and leave proper feedback when I'm feeling more coherent.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: DominicSexyhalfshellvenus on March 31st, 2006 05:45 pm (UTC)
Heh-heh-heh! The hotness melts your brain... (or maybe it's lack of sleep) ;)
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: kissMichaelhalfshellvenus on March 31st, 2006 07:10 pm (UTC)
Loved this! It was so believable and Linc's thoughts? Too funny and totally spot on. "If they bring a dog in here..." => Hysterical!
The setup is taking so long, he has reason to get suspicious. And can't you see his friends pranking him with that? Although ewwwww...

I'm right there with you, Michael/Lincoln kissing must be explored at every opportunity and with great gusto. BTW, did you see my plot bunny about kissing? *You're* the perfect person to write a fic based on my kissing fic bunny. :)
Please, point me to it. If it's not somehow icky, I can probably work with it.

When can we expect the sequel in which Linc consoles 13 yr old confused, *broken hearted* Michael to be written? Pushy, ain't I? LOL

Have you READ the other comments? Jeez! Although, at least you're in good company. ;)


Sorrel, the artist formerly known as goddessleilasorrelchestnut on March 31st, 2006 06:51 pm (UTC)
Bzuh. Hotness. And poor Michael! I really hope you write the next scene.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: DominicSexyhalfshellvenus on March 31st, 2006 07:16 pm (UTC)
Bzuh. Hotness.

Excellent! So the hotness came through then, just from the reader knowing who's on the other end of that kiss even though Lincoln doesn't? And poor rattled Michael! I kindly did not mention the state of anything below the waist there ;)

I may be forced to write the next scene, since everyone wants it. :0

Say... ever do any beta-ing? I've got an SN story that maygra's been helping me with, and I have some rewrites on POV/ending to do. But at this point, I've lost all perspective on whether it makes its point or is crap, and she suggested getting an additional beta. What do you think?
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BEWARE OF JENMAR.: PB - Don't Leave Me - Michael and Lincclex_monkie89 on March 31st, 2006 08:23 pm (UTC)
I have litteraly had this open for about fifteen minutes and I really can't think of anything more coherent to say than:

Guh.

I love this and it rocks and... Damn. Porny kissing rocks the socks.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: kissMichaelhalfshellvenus on March 31st, 2006 08:45 pm (UTC)
I have litteraly had this open for about fifteen minutes and I really can't think of anything more coherent to say than:
Guh.


Whoo-hoo! Incoherent boyLust!

I love this and it rocks and... Damn. Porny kissing rocks the socks.
It really does, doesn't it!

It never gets old for me, so long as the guys are hot and the description is good. Hotcha!
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dawnstarrising: Jensen and Jareddawnstarrising on March 31st, 2006 09:53 pm (UTC)
No,no, no, no ,no, NO!
You can't leave it there please!!!!

I'll flutter my eyelashes and smile sweetly at you *flutter,flutter* *big cheesy grin*. Pretty pleeeease?

Lincoln nipped and teased and sucked on that mouth and tongue with porn-star seriousness, because making someone cream their pants was the ultimate victory for the kind of 18-year-old who could get laid just walking down the street.

Ah yes, the hedonistic teenage days..........

Loved it as always honey xxxxxx

Dawn
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: DominicSexyhalfshellvenus on March 31st, 2006 11:49 pm (UTC)
Re: No,no, no, no ,no, NO!
Glad you liked it, Dawn. Hope that made your day better :D

And you're sportin' the big J-squared love in your icon for me, too. ;)
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dirtandweeds on April 1st, 2006 04:22 am (UTC)
Awww. Crossed the line? I think they stamped all over it.

This was cute - so cute!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: kissMichaelhalfshellvenus on April 1st, 2006 05:36 am (UTC)
Awww. Crossed the line? I think they stamped all over it.
Yeah, I think Lincoln might have done the equivalent of pole-dancing on it. ;)

Glad you liked it-- thank you :D
Sylph: SN_bjsylph_ironlight on April 1st, 2006 10:24 pm (UTC)
Mmm. Would love if you wrote a sequel, maybe from Micheal's POV during the kiss, 'cause I gotta wonder what was going through his head when he even agreed to do it. Very nice.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: DominicSexyhalfshellvenus on April 1st, 2006 10:35 pm (UTC)
That's some... mesmerizing icon you have there! :0 <-Dean (Eeep!)

Mmm. Would love if you wrote a sequel, maybe from Micheal's POV during the kiss, 'cause I gotta wonder what was going through his head when he even agreed to do it. Very nice.

Now that is a very intriguing idea-- to flip it around for the sequel (which apparently I will be forced to write). That adds a lot of interesting possibilities...

Thanks for the suggestion! And I'm glad you liked this one-- this kind of ficlet crosses all fandoms, doesn't it? ;)
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cattisandklece on April 2nd, 2006 02:14 am (UTC)
oh. my. god.
that was sexy as hell, i can't even compose myself.
good lord.
i absolutely love the portrayal of Lincoln(among the list of things i love about this fic). he's so strong and grown up and i love how you made him open to anything- like nothing could shake him. love it.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: DominicSexyhalfshellvenus on April 2nd, 2006 03:19 am (UTC)
that was sexy as hell, i can't even compose myself.
I never thought this bunny had such legs, but it's good to hear I did it justice!

i absolutely love the portrayal of Lincoln(among the list of things i love about this fic). he's so strong and grown up and i love how you made him open to anything- like nothing could shake him. love it.
He's a risk-taker, but especially when it's not exactly life-threatening. I would love to have his confidence and panache. It had better not be a dog coming, but if it is he'll live and then someone will pay. Not easily rattled, that's for sure :)

Oh, I've missed hearing from you. It's been ages! Guess this one finally rung your bell-- and picked up a fair number of my SN friends who are peeking into the PB fandom. Yay!
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tyrical: PB_brotherstyrical on April 2nd, 2006 12:46 pm (UTC)
How much do I love you right now?

Oh man I was hoping someone would pick this puppy! The potential was so there.
Then you did it and made it into something more than I ever thought it could be.

I just loved hearing Lincoln's thought processes in this. Fab-U-lous. Love, love, love, love, loved it.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: kissMichaelhalfshellvenus on April 2nd, 2006 06:14 pm (UTC)
Oh man I was hoping someone would pick this puppy! The potential was so there.
So you had your eyes on it, even though thelana put it out there? That makes sense. There was potential. Setting it up was the hard part!

Then you did it and made it into something more than I ever thought it could be.
Hot AND twisty, which I didn't see the first time I looked at the description either. But sexy+angstlet is always good...

Glad you liked this so much-- it turned out way better than I thought it would (although now... sequel pressure :0).