Supernatural Slash Drabble: "Liquid And Lazy" (Sam/Dean, PG-13)

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14 June 2009 @ 12:37 am

Title: Liquid And Lazy
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Sam/Dean (Drabble, Slash)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: It's not the destination, it's the journey…
Author's Notes: Happy belated birthday to

trinipedia! I hope you enjoy this, and the mood it brings!
Also for

spn_drabble, this is "Wet."

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In August, the New Orleans rain is lazy as the heat, so soft and slow that no-one tries to escape it.

The air grows heavy like a cloud about to break, and Dean tilts his head up in the shadows of a Vieux Carre alley and waits. Sam's lips find him before the water does.

"We're chasing a werewolf," Dean manages despite the distraction of Sam's teeth grazing his neck.

"It's daylight." Sam grips Dean tight against him, lost in the pull of distant music and the slick perfection of his brother's skin.

The rain watches, constant, smooth and silent.

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Tags: birthday, drabbles, my_fic, sn_slash, wincest

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trinipedia on June 14th, 2009 08:22 am (UTC)

....*awesome overload*

LOVE.
THIS IS LOVE.

thank you so much!! I'm so happy *dances*

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halfshellvenus on June 15th, 2009 05:51 am (UTC)

Yay! I'm so glad you liked it, and sorry it took me so long. I just couldn't seem to 'brain' for much of the last week, though I hope it was worth the wait now that it's finally here! :)

Many happy belated returns!

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thevinegarworks on June 14th, 2009 08:27 am (UTC)

Nnngh, now I wanna go to New Orleans. :(

Gorgeous fic, though. Oh boys... ♥

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halfshellvenus on June 15th, 2009 05:52 am (UTC)

God, I want to go to New Orleans and lurk in the shadows and hope to see something like this going on.

Heck, for that, I'd go to Bakersfield!

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misstyxx on June 14th, 2009 10:16 am (UTC)

Wonderful!

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halfshellvenus on June 15th, 2009 05:52 am (UTC)

Thank you! :)

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brigid_tanner on June 14th, 2009 11:27 am (UTC)

Beautiful. Great atmosphere.

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halfshellvenus on June 15th, 2009 05:53 am (UTC)

Thank you, Brigid! I'd really hoped the atmosphere would come through. It really drives the 'flavor' of this particular drabble, and I'm glad it seemed to work!

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halfshellvenus on June 15th, 2009 06:51 am (UTC)

Awww, what a nice thing to say! Poke me on your birthday, and I'll write something for you then too! :)

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outsideth3box on June 14th, 2009 07:10 pm (UTC)

Mmmmmm, warm rain and even warmer Winchester boys.

Much love.

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halfshellvenus on June 18th, 2009 08:10 pm (UTC)

Something about warm rain is so sensual to me, where cold rain is an utter annoyance.

And boy, does it ever lend atmosphere to this story! Whoo!

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littleone87 on June 14th, 2009 10:50 pm (UTC)

Just lovely! Thank you for this!! =) <33

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halfshellvenus on June 18th, 2009 08:10 pm (UTC)

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :D

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screamoutloud on June 14th, 2009 10:57 pm (UTC)

Gorgeous!
x

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halfshellvenus on June 18th, 2009 08:11 pm (UTC)

Thank you, Lizzie!

Love the icon, BTW. :D

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screamoutloud on June 18th, 2009 08:14 pm (UTC) (Expand)

realpestilence on June 14th, 2009 11:27 pm (UTC)

"The rain watches, constant, smooth and silent."

It's like the world is holding its breath, to let them love...:)

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halfshellvenus on June 18th, 2009 08:14 pm (UTC)

Yes! That's exactly how I wanted that to feel. ♥

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dangerous_puff on June 14th, 2009 11:29 pm (UTC)

Oh absolutely gorgeous.

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halfshellvenus on June 18th, 2009 08:15 pm (UTC)

Thank you so much! :)

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yaoifangirl16 on June 14th, 2009 11:54 pm (UTC)

I like this!! Very nice! And porn before werewolf hunting...now that should be in an episode! XD Great job halfshell!

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halfshellvenus on June 18th, 2009 08:16 pm (UTC)

Oh, any porn any time would work for me! I'll take photo manips if I have to, like this one. :)

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yaoifangirl16 on June 19th, 2009 07:54 pm (UTC) (Expand)

runedgirl on June 15th, 2009 01:06 am (UTC)

Mmmm, having just been to New Orleans, I could *feel* the atmosphere here. Too bad I didn't run into Sam/Dean in an alley tho. :)

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halfshellvenus on June 18th, 2009 08:17 pm (UTC)

Yay! That makes me SO happy to hear that!

I would love to randomly run across Sam/Dean anywhere, anytime. I keep hoping we'll get a smooch on one of the gag reels, but so far nothing. *crosses fingers for the future*

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sistermine on June 15th, 2009 08:27 am (UTC)

On an impulse after watching the fangirl episode, I googled SN slash, and the phrase that caught me was "Sam shouldn't know what Dean tastes like".
A week later, I have discovered a whole new world, haven't slept a lot, and feel like I've been 'turned' in some way ... have even been inspired to write some myself (for twenty years I've only written reports for work). It's a weird feeling, but seriously rather wonderful.

...and, hey, I'm thanking, you! Your fic is beautiful, lucid, contagious, and addictive. I'm so glad it was yours that I first read (having now read some others too - very mixed), and I can trust your recs. Brilliant. Thanks for a new life!

Sorry for long message - haven't quite got the etiquette yet, but thought I should say something!

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halfshellvenus on July 6th, 2009 06:05 am (UTC)

Sorry for the late reply! Real life has been kind of overwhelming lately, and I'm getting behind on answering comments.

And what a wonderful series of comments this was! This is the kind of feedback that inspires you to keep writing even when it's not coming easily (or when canon is doing things to the show and characters that you really wish it weren't).

I'm thrilled to have helped you, in some way, discover a new world of Sam/Dean and all the fascinatingly broken/beautiful/blindingly-hot ways they merge together. It's like having the characters suddenly open up into a new universe you never thought existed before, one very much like the one you've been watching on TV all this time but with irresistible added depths.

I've been where you are-- including the losing sleep because you can't get enough of this new idea, or the feeling it gives you. Kirk/Spock fanslash was the first time that happened for me, and it was years afer the show was off the air but I finally discovered the fanfiction. Whoo!

I hope the Sam/Dean continues to bring you happiness for a long while to come, and you're doing fine on the etiquette. Authors love comments, and we NEVER complain about long and detailed ones! ♥

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sistermine on July 6th, 2009 11:33 am (UTC) (Expand)

veritas_st on June 15th, 2009 06:10 pm (UTC)

God...absolutely stunning. As always.

The things you can do with 100 words!

xx

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halfshellvenus on July 6th, 2009 06:07 am (UTC)

Thank you!

As much as I love writing drabbles just in general, I _really_ love when the atmosphere takes ahold of something and practically writes it for me. The combination of New Orleans and warm rain and Sam/Dean was just inspiring. :D

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halfshellvenus on July 6th, 2009 06:08 am (UTC)

You're so welcome! Always glad to make you smile, especially with a nice mood piece like this one-- I always hope the drabbles help to create further reflections on the setting for the readers. MMMMmmmmmm...

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