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20 May 2009 @ 01:20 pm
Supernatural Slash Drabble: "On Edge" (Sam/Dean, PG-13)  
Title: On Edge
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Sam/Dean (Drabble, Slash, Underage)
Rating: PG-13
Summary (pre-series, slightly underage): They count on Dad traveling, but sometimes he stays home for weeks on end.
Author's Notes: A birthday gift for aeroport_art! Hope this brings back some good memories. :)
Also for supernatural100, this is "Alone."


The place is theirs when Dad's gone, but when he's home for weeks the time just drags on.

They're always careful, so fucking careful because if he ever—

After three weeks without in Tennessee, Dean's primed and edgy. The smell of Sam's hair crowds the kitchen, Sam's hands curving around a telephone make Dean ache.

Friday night, Dad finally goes out for groceries. The boys lock themselves in Dean's room.

"'Bout fucking time," Dean growls against Sam's neck, thrusting into him. Sam arches underneath, shudders into Dean's fist.

"Too long…"

"Yeah," Dean groans.

"Next time, we'll borrow the damn car."

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Deadbeat Nymph: sam dean airport lightsdeadbeat_nymph on May 20th, 2009 10:01 pm (UTC)
Nice! Very effective, and affective too, particularly in the sense of randiness. *grabby hands* (And I don't even normally like Bottom Sam!)

The smell of Sam's hair crowds the kitchen

This line in particular just wowed me. *applauds*

Of course it makes sense, and for obvious reasons, but the idea of John as a cock-blocker is tickling me right now. Not only was he neglectful to the point of abuse, he prevented the boys from getting off! Now that's just wrong. ;)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 22nd, 2009 07:20 pm (UTC)
And I don't even normally like Bottom Sam!
! I find them both equally likely to be in that position, and most believable that they would trade off. Unlike Michael/Lincoln, where Micheal is as bottomy as they come.

This line in particular just wowed me. *applauds*
Yay! I had to trim much of this down from 129 words (first draft), and I'm glad that still resonated in its shorter version. That kind of "imagery" is the sort of thing that you'd recognized if you'd ever had pangs for someone-- even the smell of what you can't have becomes too much, like an inescapable denial of the thing most desired.

but the idea of John as a cock-blocker is tickling me right now.
Hee-hee! Actually, in a larger sense, I think it also defined his personality-- even if you use it in the abstract, that's who he was! "No, you can't live your dreams and go to college. Now sit down!"