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19 September 2008 @ 01:28 pm
Supernatural Slash Drabble: "Already Waited Too Long" (PG-13)  
Title: Already Waited Too Long
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Sam/Dean (Slash, Drabble)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: (S4 premiere) It doesn't matter how, it only matters that both of them are here.
Author's Notes: For grayscaled, who wanted Sam/Dean and hugging in light of the S4 premiere. Hope you like it!
Also for supernatural100, this is "Impatience."

x-x-x-x-x

It's hard to let go, even with Bobby and the girl watching him and Sam hold onto each other like they're drowning.

The feel of Sam against him—solid, warm, real—is overwhelming. Hell is forgotten, but a shadow-memory of emptiness and desolation lingers, something unshakable outside of this single, perfect moment.

Dean wants more—to kiss and devour Sam until the truth of his own survival reaches his soul.

He doesn't blame Sam for the girl—he's known that desperation himself. But he's back, it's over, and he's ready.

The rest of the world can't clear out fast enough.


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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Hughalfshellvenus on September 19th, 2008 08:58 pm (UTC)
I didn't expect it either, but it actually worked really well into your prompt!

Many happy returns, and I hope it was a great birthday. :)
Ariss Tenohariss_tenoh on September 19th, 2008 08:41 pm (UTC)
Lovely! Just what we needed for that scene in the première^_^
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on September 19th, 2008 08:59 pm (UTC)
Yes-- more, more, more Sam/Dean and love and desperation to draw it out.

It was over too soon, in my book, so why not dwell on it and make it seem more solid? :)
Deadbeat Nymph: sam dean profilesdeadbeat_nymph on September 19th, 2008 09:18 pm (UTC)
*sniffle* I am sick, and congested, and in pain, and generally avoiding the internets, but this? Was totally worth reading, and makes my poor little head feel better. *sniffle* I'm going to take this drabble with me to snuggleville. *sniffle*
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on September 19th, 2008 09:21 pm (UTC)
Was totally worth reading, and makes my poor little head feel better. *sniffle*
Yay to power of yay-- especially if it helps ease the misery of being sick..

Although... the entry just before this might boost your mood too, and it was cause for me to publicly break out that wonderful icon you made me! ♥
(no subject) - deadbeat_nymph on September 19th, 2008 09:38 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Nebula: spn sam dean weakspotauthoressnebula on September 19th, 2008 09:29 pm (UTC)
Thank you. Oh my god thank you. *squees*

~Nebula
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Hughalfshellvenus on September 19th, 2008 09:37 pm (UTC)
:D You're welcome!

Let's dwell on that moment (and subtext it every which way from Sunday) as long as we can! \o/
saavikam77: Dean/Sam Hugsaavikam77 on September 19th, 2008 09:58 pm (UTC)
Perfect. Yes. Gods, I couldn't help thinking that Dean was hurt by Sam's quick dismissal of her comment. Poor boys...
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Hughalfshellvenus on September 19th, 2008 10:17 pm (UTC)
Gods, I couldn't help thinking that Dean was hurt by Sam's quick dismissal of her comment.
He's only everything to Sam, and she's some girl Dean supposes Sam's known for maybe a few hours.

Where were the tears? I was expecting Sam to be more devastedly happy to have Dean back.
(no subject) - batgurl10 on September 20th, 2008 12:29 am (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - halfshellvenus on September 20th, 2008 02:48 am (UTC) (Expand)
brigid_tanner: boys-love hugbrigid_tanner on September 19th, 2008 11:20 pm (UTC)
Oh, I do like this take on the hug. I keep changing my mind on favorite lines, so consider the whole piece my favorite :)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Hughalfshellvenus on September 20th, 2008 02:48 am (UTC)
Hee-- thank you! I'm glad it was worthy in more than one spot, even! :)
The Grammarian about whom your mother warned you.acostilow on September 20th, 2008 12:15 am (UTC)
Wheeeee!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Hughalfshellvenus on September 20th, 2008 03:21 am (UTC)
:D \o/
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on September 20th, 2008 12:44 am (UTC)
Nice... I really was annoyed their reunion had such an audience.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Hughalfshellvenus on September 20th, 2008 03:23 am (UTC)
Me too-- I could have accepted Bobby (he's family, after all), though it would have been so much better alone so they could cling to each other a little longer.

Like that off-camera moment in the "Ghostbusters" episode, where Dean had to reassure himself that Sam was all right. Or collect major kisses. ;)
sceltoscelto on September 20th, 2008 01:53 am (UTC)
*sniffles*

This is just what I needed after last night. Exactly.

The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on September 20th, 2008 03:23 am (UTC)
Thank you very much! I'm glad it hit the spot. :)
Yo: SPN:  Hugs (animated love)dreamlittleyo on September 20th, 2008 01:56 am (UTC)
Beautiful!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Hughalfshellvenus on September 20th, 2008 03:24 am (UTC)
Thank you! There just isn't enough hugging in this fandom, not in canon anyway.

We've got to make it last as much as possible. :)
layne: spn crotoanlayne67 on September 20th, 2008 04:00 am (UTC)
I love this. I'm afraid the hug per se didn't affect me all that much, my bad I'm sure because everybody seems to be squeeing about it.

So I need this to feel that connection!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Hughalfshellvenus on September 21st, 2008 06:05 am (UTC)
my bad I'm sure because everybody seems to be squeeing about it.
It was lovely (in part because they're so rare between the boys), but it could have (should have) been more. Back from death, after four months of despair! Where is the crushing sense of relief?

So I need this to feel that connection!
Glad to do my part to help prolong and cement the moment!
SilverWick: MSpot hug---13056566~~~katysamprncssflutterby on September 20th, 2008 05:13 am (UTC)
Awwwww! I love that!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Hughalfshellvenus on September 21st, 2008 06:06 am (UTC)
Thank you! I hope it helped replay the moment for you and then some (with expansion). ;)
(no subject) - prncssflutterby on September 25th, 2008 03:30 am (UTC) (Expand)
shaitanah: lonelyshaitanah on September 20th, 2008 12:20 pm (UTC)
Lovely drabble! God, I loved that episode...
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Hughalfshellvenus on September 21st, 2008 06:07 am (UTC)
It was certainly a long-awaited reunion (and a nail-biting summer for far too many people)!

Nice to be back, isn't it? :)
izzy_the_unbreakabletheatervine on September 20th, 2008 08:11 pm (UTC)
Lovely.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on September 21st, 2008 06:08 am (UTC)
Thank you very much! :)
(no subject) - theatervine on September 21st, 2008 05:18 pm (UTC) (Expand)
fiery_fox2fiery_fox2 on September 20th, 2008 10:43 pm (UTC)
Thanks for this. Considering I threw up this morning and still feel queasy and icky, huggy!smexin'!boys make me feel a little bit better. After I *memories* this drabble, I'll go have some water and crackers...if I can keep it down. *gags*
Nice job of fleshing out what we all knew was really going on with that hug. *wink*
:]
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Hughalfshellvenus on September 21st, 2008 06:09 am (UTC)
Sorry you're feeling sick-- what an awful waste of a weekend day, too. :(

Nice job of fleshing out what we all knew was really going on with that hug. *wink*
Apparently even demonRuby2 knew it as well. :0

I'll bet Bobby's still in denial, though. ;)