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18 August 2008 @ 08:10 am
Supernatural Slash Drabble: Intensity (R) for huntress69  
Title: Intensity
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Sam/Dean (Wincest, Drabble)
Rating: Hard R.
Summary: Heat and something lasting…
Author's Notes: Happy belated birthday to huntress69, who wanted some Sam/Dean porn.
Also for 100_ghosts, this is "Love Is In The Air."

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Shifting under Dean's hands, Sam can't stop moving—Dean's touch keeps winding him up, pushing him into "More, c'mon, more." Every sweep and stroke brings him closer, every kiss and lick and moan leaves his skin singing.

"Keepin' me waiting, Dean—you torturing me now or what?"

"Nope," Dean murmurs, fingers strong and slick and knowing, "just making it extra-good."

With a curl of his tongue and the power of sweet suction, Dean tips the balance and Sam comes, gasping and shaking.

"Didn't want it to be ordinary," Dean whispers afterward, "not this time."

Sam pulls him close. Never is…


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spike247ukspike247uk on August 18th, 2008 05:37 pm (UTC)
oh first - that normally doesn't happen!

short but oh so sweet :)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on August 18th, 2008 05:41 pm (UTC)
Somehow, I had comments disabled when I first posted this-- I still don't know how/why!

So glad you liked it-- the schmoop after the porn is the ultimate happy ending for me. :)
The Huntresshuntress69 on August 18th, 2008 06:10 pm (UTC)
I got a drabble, I got a drabble (Sing-songs)...and a nice drabble also, I must say LOL. Thank you so very much, it's taking my mind off the rain pouring outside.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on August 18th, 2008 06:13 pm (UTC)
Yours was the first one I wrote on vacation-- on the first day even, driving up I-5. The "porn" approach came to me right away, and I never say No to that!

Glad you liked it, and I hope the rain doesn't go anywhere scary. :0
The Huntresshuntress69 on August 18th, 2008 06:19 pm (UTC)
The scary, is the fact that my association has not fixed my roof yet. The winds are only at 60MPH, which, having gone thru various times of 140MPH winds is nothing, but they now expect "up to" 12 inches of rain.
dragontattdragontatt on August 18th, 2008 08:54 pm (UTC)
Oooh- very nice!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on August 19th, 2008 05:55 pm (UTC)
Thank you! :)
digitalwavedigitalwave on August 18th, 2008 09:51 pm (UTC)
I'm glad that we can comment now, sweetie! I saw this little gem this morning and really wanted to thank you for sharing it with us.

Of course, in my head, this is their first time together after Sam got Dean back. :)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on August 19th, 2008 05:57 pm (UTC)
I'm glad that we can comment now, sweetie!
Me too-- I don't know what happened there, must have been a random mouse "select" on semagic. Several hours after I posted it, I was looking at the journal pages and I thought, "What's wrong with that one? It doesn't have a comment line." :0

Thanks for coming back to leave a comment later!

Of course, in my head, this is their first time together after Sam got Dean back. :)
Oh mine too, definitely. It's the happy ending Dean's always needed and never even knew he wanted. :)
angels3angels3 on August 18th, 2008 10:23 pm (UTC)
Awesome!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on August 19th, 2008 06:02 pm (UTC)
Thank you-- I'm glad you liked it!
brigid_tanner: Dean-lips sinbrigid_tanner on August 18th, 2008 11:54 pm (UTC)
Can't imagine it every being ordinary between them. Lovely!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on August 19th, 2008 06:04 pm (UTC)
Can't imagine it every being ordinary between them.
I sure don't like to think of that ever happening, but I can imagine Dean OR Sam thinking that there's special and then there's extra special.

For me, the extra-special usually involves schmoop. In Dean's case, making it extra-special is its own form of schmoop. ;)
bubl on August 19th, 2008 12:36 am (UTC)
*ded*

Lovely.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on August 19th, 2008 06:04 pm (UTC)
Hee! Thank you. :D
layne: dean nekkidlayne67 on August 19th, 2008 03:19 am (UTC)
MORE!!!!!!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on August 19th, 2008 06:05 pm (UTC)
:D That's the thing about drabbles, though I think I still got a full story in there.

On the other hand, there can always be more porn!
twasadarktwasadark on August 19th, 2008 04:17 am (UTC)
Damn!!! Sexy stuff, hon. Especially love this line:

With a curl of his tongue and the power of sweet suction, Dean tips the balance and Sam comes, gasping and shaking.

So beautiful and evocative.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on August 19th, 2008 06:06 pm (UTC)
Oh, I'm glad you noticed that one. It's the most explicit part of the sex, but still more allusion than detail.

I think the reader gets the picture, all the same. And whew, what a picture it is!
fiery_fox2fiery_fox2 on August 19th, 2008 07:58 pm (UTC)
*is left shaking*
That's a good shaking, though. *wink*
*memories*
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on August 20th, 2008 07:23 pm (UTC)
Eee-- memories on a drabble! \o/

*happy desk flailing*