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22 May 2008 @ 11:21 pm
Supernatural Slash Drabble: When The World Stops Spinning (PG-13)  
Title: When The World Stops Spinning
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Sam/Dean (Slash, Drabble)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: The universe shifts with a single touch…
Author's Notes: For particlesofgale, who wanted a first kiss. Happy birthday! I hope this hits the spot.
Also for supernatural100, this is "Sea Change."

x-x-x-x-x

In a forgotten corner of Arkansas everything changed while the world looked away.

Breathless and dazed, Dean lay where the Black Dog had thrown him, blurred sky overhead suddenly blocked by Sam's face.

"Dean…"

It was a shock when Sam kissed him, unreal and wrong like a disturbing dream. But the relief and gratitude in that desperate touch of lips made Dean dizzy with Oh and Yes.

He was more than a soldier then, more than a hunter whose face would be forgotten.

Hand curling over Sam's head, Dean kissed him back.

More than anything, he realized, he was Sam's.


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shaitanah: sandshaitanah on May 23rd, 2008 06:31 am (UTC)
This is beautiful! <3 A perfect first kiss)))
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 23rd, 2008 06:36 am (UTC)
Thank you, Shaitanah! When I got the request from Debbie, I hadn't realized there'd be so much plot in the result, but still... I think the emotion is there too. Hope so!
spike247ukspike247uk on May 23rd, 2008 08:03 am (UTC)
love this first kiss - the realisation that he's Sam's? *melt*
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 23rd, 2008 07:56 pm (UTC)
For Dean, that last part is probably the most important of all. :)
Catherine Winnersunrunnersioned on May 23rd, 2008 04:03 pm (UTC)
"unreal and wrong like a disturbing dream"

wow...just beautiful!!~
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 23rd, 2008 07:57 pm (UTC)
Thank you!

And in the end, the dream goes someplace Dean never dreamed he'd have for himself. :)
 Nayeli Honizrewillow_fae_20 on May 23rd, 2008 04:12 pm (UTC)
Oh Dean... This was lovely.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 23rd, 2008 08:27 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much. I always hope for better for Dean than life seems to give him...
Lady Macbeth: SPN - I Got Youlady_macbeth_13 on May 23rd, 2008 05:01 pm (UTC)
M'awww... Dean is Sam's, and Sam is Dean's.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 23rd, 2008 08:28 pm (UTC)
And that's the most perfect thing they'll ever have in the world. Thank goodness it's each other. :)
elusive_life_77 on May 23rd, 2008 05:25 pm (UTC)
*happy sigh* that was lovely and evocative.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 23rd, 2008 08:29 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
fiery_fox2fiery_fox2 on May 23rd, 2008 06:34 pm (UTC)
D'awww!
*melts*
This is sweet. And Dean finally getting that he belongs to Sam?
*THUDS*
Wonderful drabble!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 24th, 2008 12:45 am (UTC)
And Dean finally getting that he belongs to Sam?
That's the one piece of happiness he's been missing all along. What a transformation it causes, finally knowing it!

Glad you liked it - thank you!
saavikam77: Dean: Me and Samsaavikam77 on May 23rd, 2008 07:35 pm (UTC)
Awww!! Gorgeous! :D
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 25th, 2008 07:44 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much. :)

Love the icon... :D
brigid_tanner: brothers-there for youbrigid_tanner on May 23rd, 2008 10:20 pm (UTC)
Awww, that's sweet. Like that Sam kissing him made Dean realize he was more than a soldier and a hunter, that someone loved him.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Diner Deanhalfshellvenus on May 25th, 2008 07:45 pm (UTC)
Like that Sam kissing him made Dean realize he was more than a soldier and a hunter, that someone loved him.
With everything Dean has going for him, it's the lack of that one thing that defines his own self-worth.

How wonderful to finally find it. :)
The Grammarian about whom your mother warned you.acostilow on May 24th, 2008 12:29 am (UTC)
Gnargh.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 25th, 2008 07:45 pm (UTC)
Why, thank you! :)
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 26th, 2008 07:30 am (UTC)
Oh, I'm so glad it meets with your approval. This wasn't what I thought I was going to write, but it's where the mood took me.

to have something for himself and to belong. To Sam.
Yes, exactly that. Belonging to a 'profession' or a 'skill' isn't the same as mattering to someone so much that your name alone is the definition of something important that isn't about what you do but about who you are. And god knows, Dean never had that from anyone else.

I still want that for him-- or more clearly, I want him to know that he has that. I think our wishes for him are very much the same. :)

I'm so glad you liked this, and I hope your birthday was wonderful! *hugs and confetti to you*
Miss Virgohoveringon on May 24th, 2008 01:01 am (UTC)
perfectt! <3
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 26th, 2008 07:30 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. :)
Unsupervised children will be used as bait.: Sam/Dean kiss by crecd060dhvana on May 24th, 2008 02:07 am (UTC)
Oh...poetry.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 26th, 2008 07:32 am (UTC)
Thank you, Dhvana! Nice to have you back, too. :)
sadelyrate: thinkingsadelyrate on May 30th, 2008 09:47 pm (UTC)
You continue to surprise with how much you can fit into a handful of words. And with how right the wincest feels.

He was more than a soldier then, more than a hunter whose face would be forgotten.

This sentence hurts. Because thinking about the boys, how they live, where they are... and how the world might view them even if it knew they existed...

More than anything, he realized, he was Sam's.

*hugs the ficlet close*

Thank you.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 31st, 2008 05:58 pm (UTC)
And with how right the wincest feels.
That's always the biggest challenge, because though it feels right to me I have to make it work for the reader too! I'm always thrilled when people think it works. :)

Because thinking about the boys, how they live, where they are... and how the world might view them even if it knew they existed...
It's such a lonely existence. All that they do- all they risk their lives and their emotional well-being for- is so often utterly invisible to the world at large (usually by intent). There's almost no external validation for what they do, and when you combine that with the danger and isolation... gah. How does that not become your only identity, especially if you're Dean?

I'm so glad you liked this one, and I always look forward to your very thoughtful comments. ♥
jelly babies to manual: dean found serenitythehighwaywoman on May 31st, 2008 12:36 am (UTC)
*purrrrrrr* Lovely, just lovely!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 31st, 2008 05:59 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! *bounces happily*