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03 May 2008 @ 12:55 pm
Supernatural Slash Drabble: Worlds Aside And Time Held Distant (PG-13)  
Title: Worlds Aside And Time Held Distant
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Sam/Dean (Wincest, Drabble)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: A schmoopy drabble for girlguidejones. Happy Birthday!
Author's Notes: Also for supernatural100, this is "Calm."

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The sound of waves lapping along the shore is louder than Sam's breath against Dean's neck. The room glows gold in the afternoon sun, comfortable and warm. Dean's hand strokes lazily through Sam's hair.

They woke at noon after driving here in the dark. Except for a snack, they've stayed in bed—lost to passion and each other.

"Again?" Dean asks, his lips already searching softly for Sam's.

"Yes." Sam lifts himself up and slides in closer, thumbs stroking across Dean's face as he kisses them both to distraction.

Outside the lake waits patiently, its clear blue promise still unseen.


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aeroport_art: jare-bearaeroport_art on May 3rd, 2008 08:55 pm (UTC)
"Again?" Dean asks, his lips already searching softly for Sam's.

Awww, Sam's such a horndog!! *luffs*
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 4th, 2008 03:44 am (UTC)
Well, Dean does offer. ;)

How they resist each other for any length of time (other than when they're squabbling about something) is beyond me. :)
realpestilencerealpestilence on May 3rd, 2008 09:40 pm (UTC)
Dreamy and loving-and that last line is particularly beautiful.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 4th, 2008 03:45 am (UTC)
Thank you, Pesti! It took some effort to get the mood just right, with peaceful schmoopiness and the idea that something good is being overlooked for something even better. :)
brigid_tanner: boys-love hugbrigid_tanner on May 3rd, 2008 10:08 pm (UTC)
Lovely! Nice peaceful feel to it. No stress, no angst, just love.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 4th, 2008 03:46 am (UTC)
No stress, no angst, just love.
Don't we all need some of that right now, too! :)
The Grammarian about whom your mother warned you.acostilow on May 3rd, 2008 10:08 pm (UTC)
Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on May 4th, 2008 03:46 am (UTC)
Hee! Thank you so much. :)
I'm Mulder, She's Scully: Chicagorunedgirl on May 4th, 2008 12:41 am (UTC)
So peaceful and pretty....love the last line. Might have to wait a long time, methinks :)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 4th, 2008 03:47 am (UTC)
Might have to wait a long time, methinks :)
I like the idea that for some delicious length of time, they're enough for each other. :)
plutogirl10 on May 4th, 2008 01:25 am (UTC)
Oh, how lovely! The entire drabble is beautiful, but this;

"Again?" Dean asks, his lips already searching softly for Sam's.

I could live off that one line alone, even if I never read anything more for the rest of the week.

edit: Also, I now have an overwhelming urge to drabble. I haven't written anything in so long, it seems like the perfect way to ease back into it.

Edited at 2008-05-04 01:26 am (UTC)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 4th, 2008 05:43 am (UTC)
I could live off that one line alone, even if I never read anything more for the rest of the week.
That one has such contentment in it, and such a feeling of a future together, doesn't it? Schmoop indeed. :)

Also, I now have an overwhelming urge to drabble. I haven't written anything in so long, it seems like the perfect way to ease back into it.
Oh, you wrote such lovely drabbles and shorter works way back when. I know the longer stories have sapped your time (and that pesky RL thing as well), but it would be nice to get some shorter pieces out again! I still remember how vividly perfect the story with the stained glass theme was. :)
The Rogue Bitch.: the hugroguebitch on May 4th, 2008 02:45 am (UTC)

Oh, so lovely!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 4th, 2008 05:44 am (UTC)
Thank you! I was hoping to catch the perfect mood with this one-- schmoopy in part because of all the reasons to be content.
I'm the girl that you just won't admit you adore.: handtabularassa on May 4th, 2008 04:07 am (UTC)
*loves it* <333
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Hughalfshellvenus on May 4th, 2008 05:44 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! :)
girlguidejonesgirlguidejones on May 4th, 2008 05:44 am (UTC)
Oh, lovely! Just what I had in mind when I wished for schmoop. Who needs a gorgeous lake when they have each other?

claps

Thank you!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 4th, 2008 05:46 am (UTC)
Yay! I'm sorry it took so long, but this was definitely the mood and effect I was trying for. It was just a little stubborn in arriving.

Who needs a gorgeous lake when they have each other?
It's peace and completion from within the circle of themselves, and that's a feeling that makes me happy all by itself.

So glad you like it! Happy birthday wishes!
layne: spn sam looks at deanlayne67 on May 4th, 2008 10:03 am (UTC)
"Again?" Dean asks, his lips already searching softly for Sam's

Hee, Dean's going to be so sore come dinner-time! ;D

But seriously, I LOVE that line so very much ♥
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 4th, 2008 10:13 pm (UTC)
Hee, Dean's going to be so sore come dinner-time! ;D
Or Sam. Or maybe they're trading off. :D

But seriously, I LOVE that line so very much ♥
There's so much mutual happiness in that, isn't there? :)
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 5th, 2008 02:58 am (UTC)
Thank you, Debbie! That's definitely the mood I wanted. :)
Harley: Jack/Gwen kisscrimsonkitty88 on May 5th, 2008 09:52 pm (UTC)
Oh just complete... GUH! Especially loved this bit:

"Again?" Dean asks, his lips already searching softly for Sam's.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 6th, 2008 08:45 pm (UTC)
"Again?" Dean asks, his lips already searching softly for Sam's.

Makes it seem as if they've spent hours at it already, and would be happy to continue, doesn't it? As if there's no rush toward anything outside that room and the two of them together.

Now there's a happy thought. :)
(no subject) - crimsonkitty88 on May 7th, 2008 11:45 pm (UTC) (Expand)
fiery_fox2fiery_fox2 on May 8th, 2008 05:16 pm (UTC)
I love the artfulness of this. I especially adore the way you added the lake into it---maybe they can go skinny-dipping later? *wink*
I heart these lines:

They woke at noon after driving here in the dark. Except for a snack, they've stayed in bed--lost to passion and each other.

**gets all tingly from the above**

"Again"? Dean asks, his lips already searching softly for Sam's.

**HUMINA**
I can't tell you enough what a gorgeous writer you are. And thank you--you've made me want to delve into doing some drabbles again! Yay!
**bounces**


The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 17th, 2008 12:47 am (UTC)
maybe they can go skinny-dipping later?
Nice thought, isn't it? I actually have a skinny-dipping drabble that I wrote for (I think) deirdre_c a couple of years back. :)

And thank you--you've made me want to delve into doing some drabbles again! Yay!
Yay indeed-- that's wonderful news! They're a great form, such a terrific challenge. I say this knowing that I'm behind on drabbling- nothing in the last couple of weeks! Must rectify. Kind of a combination of art and puzzle-solving. :)

I am totally mesmerized by the manip in your icon. Talk about HUMINA! \o/

sadelyrate: brokensadelyrate on May 12th, 2008 06:52 am (UTC)
*stares*

No one should be able to pack so much into 100 words.
Sam, Dean, and the things between them... even if hoping for such a calm scene in canon is useless.

I raise my hat to you, lady.
Thank You.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 17th, 2008 12:48 am (UTC)
Eee, what a wonderful comment!

That makes every drabble moment in the history of EVER battling the 100-word-count totally worthwhile, right there. ♥
bonbonschneckebonbonschnecke on May 16th, 2008 09:09 pm (UTC)
Oh that was lovely!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on May 17th, 2008 12:49 am (UTC)
Thank you so much!

And another mesmerizing manip icon. Wow.
(no subject) - gunznammo2 on December 13th, 2008 06:35 pm (UTC) (Expand)