Supernatural Slash Drabble: The Fire Within (PG-13)

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03 April 2008 @ 10:10 pm

Title: The Fire Within
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Sam/Dean (Wincest, with a twist)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Dean's wrong, and wrong again—until it's too late.
Author's Notes: Happy Birthday to

jolietjones, who wanted SPN with a blindfold and realization. This probably isn't what you expected, but I hope you like it!
Also for

100_ghosts, this is "Forbidden Fruit."

x-x-x-x-x

Maybe whatever has him isn't supernatural, because why the blindfold? Dean's not the type to die of fear— or run to the cops, because 'fugitive' means Shut the hell up.

He strains against the ropes, helplessly confined. Can't fucking move.

Footsteps come closer, a smell he recognizes: Sam. The touch of lips on his own jolts him hard, a sequence of shock, resistance… then heat.

Fuck.

He shouldn't want this, it has to be Sam— Dean knows that scent. He's drowning in it, body shaking under those enormous hands.

Sam growls, brimstone deep.

Not Sam.

Jesus, Dean thinks. Please— no…

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Tags: birthday, drabbles, my_fic, sn_slash, wincest

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acostilow on April 4th, 2008 05:16 am (UTC)

Jesus, that's awesome. Deep and creepy and yet awesome beyond the telling.

Also, FIRST. HAHAHAHAHA. I mean, um. :D

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halfshellvenus on April 4th, 2008 05:24 am (UTC)

and creepy
Yes-- I think the birthday girl was expecting kink with those prompts, but since I'm not terribly kinky my mind went someplace else entirely. Because god, a Demon!Sam twist was irresistible.

Also, FIRST. HAHAHAHAHA. I mean, um. :D
Hee! I think you had it right the first time. :D

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jolietjones on April 4th, 2008 06:16 am (UTC) (Expand)

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halfshellvenus on April 4th, 2008 06:59 am (UTC) (Expand)

missyjack on April 4th, 2008 05:17 am (UTC)

God, that gave me shivers!

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halfshellvenus on April 4th, 2008 05:25 am (UTC)

Whoo-hoo! That's exactly the effect I was hoping for, after the initial "Mmmm, steamy" into "Uh-oh..."

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obeetaybee on April 4th, 2008 05:41 am (UTC)

Ah! Your drabbles always make me long for more! They always end too soon! That's my only complaint! That and I can't seem to stop using exclamation points!

You're like the drabble master, you are.

Hee!

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halfshellvenus on April 4th, 2008 07:02 am (UTC)

That and I can't seem to stop using exclamation points!
Hee! I know that feeling all too well! OMG, it's happening to me too! :0

I'm glad you liked this, even though you just want more of the dirty-wrong-dangerous porn now. But isn't that always the way? ;)

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sierra_foxx on April 4th, 2008 06:42 am (UTC)

Whoa. Didn't see *that* twist coming. :)

I'm not a big Wincest fan per se, and I can't honestly say why I read this, lol - but I'm so glad I did, because the twist at the end really made it work for me! *g*

I love drabbles - writing them and reading them - from a writers POV, there's the challenge of using only a hundred words for maximum effect, and for the reader, there's the beauty of a single snapshot moment, laid out in front of you.

Really great, Karen - I'm sure

jolietjones will love this!

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halfshellvenus on April 4th, 2008 07:07 am (UTC)

but I'm so glad I did, because the twist at the end really made it work for me! *g*
It's funny how the blindfold quickly demanded the arrival of Sam (whom Dean could smell) and dirty-wrongness, and then the further twist of what Dean couldn't see and didn't suspect. :0

That's the kind of creature that would tie Dean up and still be supernatural. Yipes.

from a writers POV, there's the challenge of using only a hundred words for maximum effect, and for the reader, there's the beauty of a single snapshot moment, laid out in front of you.
I love the challenge of them-- they're short and the chances of finishing them are pretty good, but the further challenge of a complete moment or mood is better still. You wouldn't believe the amount of wordsmithing needed to get the necessary punch into those last three lines, just so that feeling of threat and surprise and fear all registered completely. :0

I'm glad you took a chance on this one. :)

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realpestilence on April 4th, 2008 05:13 pm (UTC) (Expand)

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halfshellvenus on April 4th, 2008 04:49 pm (UTC)

Oh, now, that gave me chills.
*bounces* I'm so happy to hear that-- I so rarely write the scary part of SPN. :)

I cannot stop staring at your icon, with Dean's hand on Sam's chest. *boggles* *wipes up drool*

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dc_longwing on April 4th, 2008 12:42 pm (UTC)

Hot! and Ngah!-inducing creepy! A scorching combination, my dear. ::goes back to re-read::
Thanks,
DC

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halfshellvenus on April 4th, 2008 04:52 pm (UTC)

Whoo-hoo! It's funny how thrilling it is that people find this "creepy"-- this is one of the few times I'm going for that mood.

I've missed you lately-- and there's been at least one longer Sam/Dean porn! About time, huh?

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drvsilla on April 4th, 2008 04:05 pm (UTC)

Such an unexpected and great kick-twist at the end. Tis a powerful 100 words you conjured!

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halfshellvenus on April 4th, 2008 04:53 pm (UTC)

Thank you, Dru! Boy, that twist was what drove the piece entirely. Sexy and scary all at once. :0

Your icon cracks me up. It's perfect! :D

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girlguidejones on April 4th, 2008 04:18 pm (UTC)

Wow. That packs a punch...huge swings of emotion in just a hundred words. Great job!

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halfshellvenus on April 4th, 2008 08:25 pm (UTC)

huge swings of emotion in just a hundred words.
That's true-- with every changing assumption and physical response, Dean's feelings go somewhere else. Even without him wanting them too. :0

So glad you liked it! *offers Mocha Latte*

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tattoo_kink on April 4th, 2008 05:08 pm (UTC)

*thud*

You're and evil, evil woman. But I adore you anyway!

And poor Dean! You just broke me! *g*

smooches

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halfshellvenus on April 4th, 2008 08:26 pm (UTC)

And poor Dean! You just broke me! *g*
:D It's all "RRowrrr~~~ uh-oh!?!" isn't it?

Thanks for reading! :D

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realpestilence on April 4th, 2008 05:18 pm (UTC)

It's probably very wrong of me, but my first thought was Ooooh, YEAH! \o/

*Then* it was admiration for the skill and effectiveness you packed into those last 3 lines especially. Turns it from a nice, safe "realizing the Wincest" fic to something entirely darker. *grins, pleased*

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halfshellvenus on April 4th, 2008 08:28 pm (UTC)

It's probably very wrong of me, but my first thought was Ooooh, YEAH! \o/
I don't think you were the only one thinking that, not by a long shot! Including me. ;)

Turns it from a nice, safe "realizing the Wincest" fic to something entirely darker.
I couldn't resist the realization not ending at "Sam... attracted..." The whammy of "Oh god, no!" really seemed to fit the setup. :0

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deadbeat_nymph on April 4th, 2008 06:59 pm (UTC)

I'm shivering here. I guess I don't have to tell you how much I love this, or the very fact that you've written evil!Sam/Dean bondage dub-con, do I? ;D

I especially love the imagery of Dean drowning in Sam's scent. Not only is it sensual and yummy, but it evokes a sense of intoxication that is another form of bondage in itself.

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halfshellvenus on April 4th, 2008 08:31 pm (UTC)

or the very fact that you've written evil!Sam/Dean bondage dub-con, do I? ;D
Just the phrase "dub-con" scares me, though at least I know what it means now. It wasn't so dubious here until the "Uh-oh" moment. :0 Dark, dark, dark.

Not only is it sensual and yummy, but it evokes a sense of intoxication that is another form of bondage in itself.
I like that him drowning in it means that he can't deny to himself whose kiss he's enjoying so much, even when he thinks he shouldn't. Rrrrowwrrr!

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docsaico on April 4th, 2008 07:40 pm (UTC)

GAH! That was...yeah! XD

I literally said, "Gah" out loud to myself, lol. Good job!

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halfshellvenus on April 4th, 2008 08:32 pm (UTC)

I literally said, "Gah" out loud to myself, lol. Good job!
Whoo-hoo! That's the kind of reaction a person hopes for-- total suprise to the reader AND to Dean (who is in big, big trouble now). :0

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layne67 on April 5th, 2008 04:34 am (UTC)

Sam growls, brimstone deep.

I hate your drabbles.

Because I want MORRRRRE!!!

*whimpers*

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halfshellvenus on April 5th, 2008 07:31 am (UTC)

:D I should use them as a torture device more often, definitely. :0

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aeroport_art on April 5th, 2008 08:24 am (UTC)

Oooooh, sexy.

brimstone deep
\o/

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halfshellvenus on April 6th, 2008 07:31 am (UTC)

brimstone deep
:D The reader is caught between Rrrowr and Uh-oh, but poor Dean has to be solidly over into "Oh, god!"

Evil!Sam was a sexass though, I have to admit.

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ladybugkay on April 5th, 2008 12:45 pm (UTC)

Yikes! But, you know, that's the way Dean's life seems to go. Everything he wants most, the things he wants for himself, get ripped away or twisted into something horrible and painful. He must have been born on a Wednesday, man, because, that guy is full of woe. Everything just goes...bad for him.

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halfshellvenus on April 6th, 2008 07:32 am (UTC)

get ripped away or twisted into something horrible and painful.
You know, that's a very interesting way of looking at it, because for the most part it's true. Nothing real lasts for him, not the way he wants it.

It's part of why we can't resist him, I think. :)

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