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01 April 2008 @ 02:38 pm
Supernatural Slash Drabble: Waking The Tiger (PG-13)  
Title: Waking The Tiger
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Sam/Dean (Wincest, Drabble)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: A sequel to this drabble, where Sam and Dean crossed a dangerous line.
Author's Notes: Happy birthday to certainthings! This came out romantic instead of smutty, but I hope it still satisfies in combination with its predecessor.
Also for supernatural100, this is "Unexpected."

x-x-x-x-x

Sam speaks first into the awkward silence: "I'll be sorry if you want, but I'm not." His gaze falls to the fullness of Dean's lips, so recently on his own.

"I—" Dean starts. He can't finish— he's still vibrating with how perfect it all felt instead of wrong. The way Sam's watching him now makes Dean breathe harder.

"Thought so."

Sam's kisses are scorching, desperate. "Ran away from this once," he murmurs. "Not doing it again." His touch says everything Dean never expected to hear.

"So, then—"

"Yes," Sam answers, his kisses unceasing.

And finally, Dean believes him.



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JJ: its truejolietjones on April 1st, 2008 09:54 pm (UTC)
Phwoar! So intense for so few words - I love both drabbles.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on April 1st, 2008 11:55 pm (UTC)
Thank you, Louise! And do you want to get your own birthday request in early? It's probably already happening where you are. :0
jelly babies to manual: wincst rough kiss (heart manip)thehighwaywoman on April 1st, 2008 10:28 pm (UTC)
I just want to savor the heat and the emotion packed perfectly into 100 words. Marvelous!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on April 1st, 2008 11:57 pm (UTC)
So glad you liked it-- and I wrote the sequel after all. I didn't think I was going to do it, but somehow it worked out. :)
michelle: Dean gets all tinglycertainthings on April 1st, 2008 10:33 pm (UTC)
Mmm and aww and eee.

THANK YOU
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: spnKinkQuotehalfshellvenus on April 2nd, 2008 12:02 am (UTC)
Good enough? Porn in the first one, resolution in the second. Hope it left you with a nice satisfied feeling. And birthday love.

Many happy returns and a boatload of chocolate, Smidgy!
(no subject) - certainthings on April 2nd, 2008 05:35 am (UTC) (Expand)
The Grammarian about whom your mother warned you.acostilow on April 1st, 2008 11:43 pm (UTC)
Wheeeeeeeeeee!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on April 2nd, 2008 12:03 am (UTC)
Who knew there'd be a sequel? I was pretty sure it wasn't going to happen, but I was _wrong_.

Kisses make everything better. That's a good motto for life! Especially if you're worried the first kiss was one too many. :0
SHIVVYtimbershiver on April 2nd, 2008 12:22 am (UTC)
ooh nice! I remember the first one and loved the follow up.

Talking of which, it would be great if you could have just posted them both together, with a para-break to make the story flow better. I had to pop-up which is a hassle and as it's only 200 hundred words, which can be read in a blink, it would be lovely to read as a whole fic and I'm sure would inconvenience no one here.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on April 2nd, 2008 12:50 am (UTC)
I separated them because the first can be read as a standalone, and they're also for prompts from two different challenges on two different comms!

I was more expecting that people who'd read the first one might notice this one, but I'm glad you looked up the predecessor. :)
Deadbeat Nymph: dean stubble softdeadbeat_nymph on April 2nd, 2008 12:29 am (UTC)
Another great drabble! Though not smutty, it was still hot and sweet. Mmm...

I'm particularly fond of the construction his kisses unceasing.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on April 2nd, 2008 12:52 am (UTC)
Though not smutty, it was still hot and sweet.
Tying into the first one and setting the mood took more words than I expected, hence more time toward the resolution and less toward the smut!

I'm glad you liked it, though. And that line-- which became precidely that due to the need to whittle down the word count and to avoid repeating the "never" in the paragraph above. ;)
aeroport_art: tds yay!aeroport_art on April 2nd, 2008 02:18 am (UTC)
Heee this makes me feel all smooshy inside.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on April 2nd, 2008 04:02 am (UTC)
:D It's a happy ending! There aren't enough of those around lately. :D
sylvanwitchsylvanwitch on April 2nd, 2008 02:38 am (UTC)
Oh, this is just the perfect combination of hot, sweet, and right, and a fantastic follow-up to the earlier drabble. Awesome! A perfect package!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on April 2nd, 2008 04:06 am (UTC)
Not porny the way the first one was, but a nice ending to the massive feeling of "Oh no" at the end of the last one (thanks to the prompt the first one was for). Glad you liked it-- it's nice to leave the boys happy for a change. :)
brigid_tanner: boys-love hugbrigid_tanner on April 2nd, 2008 03:34 am (UTC)
Lovely. Really liked the last line.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Diner Deanhalfshellvenus on April 2nd, 2008 04:07 am (UTC)
Thank you, Brigid. :D Poor Dean-- there's a reason it's hard to convince him. He's never felt fully loved by anyone, at least not after they've left him. *sniffle*
subtly_modded: we're goin' to the Winchesterssubtly_modded on April 2nd, 2008 04:41 am (UTC)
YAY!

*happy happy joy!*
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on April 2nd, 2008 04:51 am (UTC)
Finally-- a little piece of joy never hurt anyone, especially Sam and Dean (who lack for it all too often). :D
layne: spn weaknesslayne67 on April 2nd, 2008 05:30 am (UTC)
Such a perfect post-kiss drabble, and of Dean finally believing ...
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Diner Deanhalfshellvenus on April 3rd, 2008 06:40 am (UTC)
and of Dean finally believing ...
It's so hard for him to trust that anyone would actually choose him for the long-term. Especially a situation like this, when Sam has left him once already and things were never as loaded between them as now.

Transforming Dean's ability to hear what's being said will never grow old to me, I swear. :)
Harley: Ten Jack glancecrimsonkitty88 on April 2nd, 2008 08:23 am (UTC)
The first one was just plain hot but this one was actually really sweet. LOVED this bit:

Sam's kisses are scorching, desperate. "Ran away from this once," he murmurs. "Not doing it again."
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on April 3rd, 2008 06:41 am (UTC)
"Ran away from this once," he murmurs. "Not doing it again."
If anything could convince Dean, it would be that: the idea that the reason Sam left the first time was loving Dean too much instead of too little.

God knows it appeals to me!
shaitanah: michael/mahone2shaitanah on April 2nd, 2008 09:01 am (UTC)
Ah, beautiful as always! ^_^
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Hughalfshellvenus on April 3rd, 2008 06:42 am (UTC)
Thank you, Shaitanah!
ruby_jellyruby_jelly on April 2nd, 2008 02:13 pm (UTC)
So few words, but so precise correct for each character. Loved it!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on April 3rd, 2008 06:43 am (UTC)
I'm thrilled that the characters still seem like themselves to you, especially with so few words to cement that. Lovely feedback! Thank you. :)
girlguidejones: big and little winchesters amuletgirlguidejones on April 2nd, 2008 09:00 pm (UTC)
Awwwwww. SammylovesDean4ever. The end.

Only, you added some more words and made it a lot prettier, but, yeah.

Hee.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on April 3rd, 2008 06:44 am (UTC)
SammylovesDean4ever. The end.
That's my Epic Love Story right there, in a nutshell.

More words make it fun, even if the meaning underneath is still the same. :D

And heaven knows, the getting there is the best part of all. ♥