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23 March 2008 @ 10:11 am
Supernatural Slash Fiction: The Harder They Fall (NC-17)  
Title: The Harder They Fall
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Sam/Dean (Wincest)
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Season Two, Post-"No-Exit," Sam's not about to let anyone else step in to take what he's been waiting for all this time.
Author's Notes: Happy late birthday to acostilow and pheebs1! Finally, something longer than a drabble-- hope you both like it. :)
This was started for 60_minute_fics, the prompt of "All's Fair In Love And War," and is also for my spn_25 table (this is "Fall").

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Dean's resistance can't last forever...Collapse )

 
 
 
Tammiej: Supernatural // Jensen & Jared.radio_heroine on March 23rd, 2008 09:48 pm (UTC)
Ooooh love this! =D
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on March 25th, 2008 12:09 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! Ooh, cute icon too. :)
who breaks a butterfly upon a wheel: cuddle deanlaminy on March 23rd, 2008 10:00 pm (UTC)
Ooh, I loved that it took Sam just about to go home with any guy to finally get Dean to do anything about it. Dean must be the only person on the planet who could hold out that long, when Sam was moaning in the bathroom and not wearing boxers. Which is okay by me, 'cause it gave Sam more of an opportunity to do it.

This I really liked. Awesome story.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on March 25th, 2008 12:25 am (UTC)
Ooh, I loved that it took Sam just about to go home with any guy to finally get Dean to do anything about it.
It's kind of like a blazing advertisement for "This could have been yours, but you just wouldn't step up and take it." At that point, Dean can see that Sam's prepared to put out for a guy, which has to just cement all those other hints flying by before. :0

Dean must be the only person on the planet who could hold out that long, when Sam was moaning in the bathroom
And he caved, but only "in private," when he thought he was being so secretive about it. ;)

If Sam weren't his brother and Dean weren't obsessed with always doing what he thinks is right for Sammy, I think he'd have caved when Sam started going commando-- even if Sam was his first and only guy. Dean can only hold out so long on the free porn, especially when it's right there in front of him.

So glad you liked it!
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: spnKinkQuotehalfshellvenus on March 25th, 2008 01:56 am (UTC)
Whoa, whoa, Sam!
Poor guy-- think of the frustration! And he's found someone who looks enough like Dean to get some temporary satisfaction out of it, if it comes to that. 100% chance of regretting it later, but still, that's later.

Sam's body is exactly a last weapon, isn't it?
It is! All the ways he uses it to tempt Dean can only be accomplished because of the built-in hotass capability there from the start.

I never doubt that his tactics worked on Dean. *grins*
:D Just not enough, until he finally made Dean cave. \o/

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
Pheebs1pheebs1 on March 23rd, 2008 10:21 pm (UTC)
Oh wow happy birthday indeed, thank you.How hot and heh Sam going commando!!! :)

(Have a post up stating birthday gifts, and will edit to include and point peeps toward this one, thanks love!)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on March 25th, 2008 02:01 am (UTC)
and heh Sam going commando!!! :)
:D You know how Dean is-- that would be on his mind all day long, wondering what it feels like, whether it's making Sam hard, getting turned on just thinking about it and then jerking his eyes away and trying to pretend That.Is.Not.Happening.Right.Over.There. ;)

So glad you liked it, and I'm sorry I was out of town on your special day! On the other hand, the story wasn't finished just yet, so call it serendipity in the end. ♥
(no subject) - pheebs1 on March 25th, 2008 08:36 am (UTC) (Expand)
Christingermanjj on March 23rd, 2008 10:47 pm (UTC)
Dean could hardly take his eyes off Sam or even manage to complete a sentence

god, how much i would love to see that scene on tv! its so sad we never will :-(
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: spnKinkQuotehalfshellvenus on March 25th, 2008 01:59 am (UTC)
god, how much i would love to see that scene on tv! its so sad we never will :-(
Actually, if you rewatch "Hell House" in Season One, you'll notice Dean's eyes dropping down toward the towel while he kind of stands there open-mouthed mid-sentence. :0

That... was not a brotherly reaction to the (utterly incredible!) way Sam looked in that towel. Whoo!
(no subject) - germanjj on March 26th, 2008 06:03 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - halfshellvenus on March 26th, 2008 06:30 pm (UTC) (Expand)
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dawnstarrising: dean intensedawnstarrising on March 23rd, 2008 11:18 pm (UTC)
Mmmmmm.....Just what a girl needs when shes not feeling well. Hot Winchester action should be available in all stores.

Lovely descriptions. Made my toes curl.

Brilliant as always

D xxx
*waves*
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Hughalfshellvenus on March 25th, 2008 05:31 am (UTC)
Hot Winchester action should be available in all stores.
If it were, I'd pay real money for it! There'd be a line going around the block and then some, too.

Glad this lifted your spirits a bit! You deserve it. :)
kliqzangel: Sammy & Dean 51kliqzangel on March 24th, 2008 12:24 am (UTC)
Very Nice!

I always love new relationship stories.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on March 26th, 2008 05:56 pm (UTC)
I always love new relationship stories.

Oh yes-- first times are still such a kink for me. Though thanks to this fandom, I also love the established relationship ones too. So much good PWP porn!
I'm Mulder, She's Scullyrunedgirl on March 24th, 2008 01:03 am (UTC)
"Sam fingered the crack of Dean's ass through his jeans, spreading Dean's legs wider with the promise in that suggestive touch." That line just about knocked me off my feet. Well, chair. Whatever. Mmm, this was delicious. :)
Thanks,
Lynsey
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: spnKinkQuotehalfshellvenus on March 26th, 2008 06:03 pm (UTC)
That line just about knocked me off my feet. Well, chair. Whatever.

You can really sense Dean just getting all worked by that touch to where he's reacting almost automatically, can't you? Plus, *rowr*

Thanks for reading and commenting!
Michaela: Dean & the Impalanighean_isis on March 24th, 2008 02:05 am (UTC)
I love first time stories. :D

Thank you.

Oh - btw - we *SO* need to see what happens when they get to the motel. Just sayin'. ;-)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on March 26th, 2008 05:57 pm (UTC)
So glad you liked it!

Hmm, you weren't the only one who wanted a continuation story. ;)
Magicgerbil: WelcomeDCmagicgerbil on March 24th, 2008 03:13 am (UTC)
*squeal* *pets the purty* Oooo...shiny.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on March 26th, 2008 05:58 pm (UTC)
These two together, I tell you-- emotionally AND pornily satisfying. It's the complete package!
sylvanwitchsylvanwitch on March 24th, 2008 05:39 am (UTC)
You know what made this especially hot? Dean's choked off noises--GREAT description, very hot.

You know what made this sweet and brotherly and perfect?

Dean's uncertainty in the car, his hand working the seam of the seat. THAT is brilliant use of a detail to convey SO much about the emotion of the scene.

You rock!

Thanks for sharing this. I'm hoping to dream sweet dreams of Dean and Sam. :-)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on March 26th, 2008 06:01 pm (UTC)
Oh, I'm glad you noticed those details! Especially the one in the car, because I wanted to show exactly what you got from it-- Dean's attempt to mask his worry over what happened and who wanted it more and all of the things you know would immediately fill his head in that quiet moment.

I'm hoping to dream sweet dreams of Dean and Sam. :-)
Those are some of my favorites-- I'd schedule them if I could! Or the Jensen/Jared ones, I'm not picky. :)
billysgirl5: Workingbillysgirl5 on March 24th, 2008 03:04 pm (UTC)
Great job! I was getting a little worried about Dean not responding, but it all worked out in the end.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on March 27th, 2008 07:41 am (UTC)
I was getting a little worried about Dean not responding

You can imagine Sam's frustration over that too-- like, "Could I be any hotter? WTF is wrong with Dean?" :D

But the escalation was definitely half the fun, at least for everyone but Sam. ;)
Entendre? Make mine a double.: SN Dean mmm theredeirdre_c on March 24th, 2008 06:49 pm (UTC)
Nnnggghh. Very much of the awesome! :)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on March 27th, 2008 07:43 am (UTC)
:D Could Dean MAKE Sam work any harder? Though we know why he's reluctant to jump into the brothercest from the get-go.

And it's a perfect opportunity to make Dean's jealousy do the job for both of them. :)
bonbonschneckebonbonschnecke on March 25th, 2008 11:19 am (UTC)
Wonderful....awesome! Love it!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on March 27th, 2008 07:43 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! *hugs*
Leigh: almost lost youleighm on March 26th, 2008 01:01 pm (UTC)
So sweet and needy and loving. Just how I like them:) I always love the little details you add.

Thank you for sharing.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on March 27th, 2008 07:45 am (UTC)
Oh, I'm so glad you enjoyed this one, Leigh. It's been far too hard to get stories about the boys to finish this season, and thank goodness this one did.

Not to mention that jealousSam deserves to be appeased by finally getting what he wants.