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10 February 2008 @ 01:34 am
Supernatural Gen Drabble: Golden Treasure (Gen, Wee!chesters)  
Title: Golden Treasure
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Sam and Dean (Gen, Wee!chesters)
Rating: G
Summary: Drabble for iamstealthyone's birthday!
Author's Notes: Also for 100_ghosts "yellow" challenge, which provided the perfect opportunity for a kid!drabble for iamstealthyone because of the key word used below.

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"What've you got, Sammy?" Dean's driving his toy truck around the back porch of Mrs. Franklin's house, where they're renting rooms for a few weeks.

"Lello," Sam says, holding out his prize. "Over there." He points, and Dean leans to the side to see what he's talking about.

"I didn't know lemons came from trees."

They've only been here since last night, after leaving the snow of Indiana far behind. California seems magical in comparison.

"Want it," Sam says.

"Sure, you found it," Dean agrees. "Wait—don't eat it!"

"Yucky!"

"Sorry. We'll just look at it, okay?"

"Okay…" Sam pouts.


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Cass E. Pants: image - goldfishcass404 on February 10th, 2008 10:23 am (UTC)
Aw, poor adorable Sam biting into a lemon. I want to smile at the image but these boys as kids being shuttled so much also breaks my heart. I don't want them to know that lemons grow on trees just yet. I want them to have open-space Kansas childhoods where they have to make up stories about how lemons grow and then go ask their mom.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: weechestershalfshellvenus on February 10th, 2008 06:25 pm (UTC)
but these boys as kids being shuttled so much also breaks my heart.
Oh, that Christmas episode just about did me in. Everything I'd imagined about their childhoods, but worse.

I want them to have open-space Kansas childhoods where they have to make up stories about how lemons grow and then go ask their mom.
:D Yes-- I can imagine what they'd come up with. "In the ground like carrots." "No-- on sticks planted in rows in the garden." "That's silly!"
plutogirl10 on February 10th, 2008 10:53 am (UTC)
"Lello," Sam says, holding out his prize.

That? Is SO CUTE. *melts*
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: weechestershalfshellvenus on February 10th, 2008 06:28 pm (UTC)
I'd forgotten how often kids say "Lello," and it's probably the only baby-talk word I missed when my kids got older.

How often do you find a big ball of "Lello" right out in the yard anyway? :)
nocturnal08 on February 10th, 2008 02:23 pm (UTC)
Awwwwww.... I so love it! Little boys!!

And I'm linking to you something you might find cute! Here
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: weechestershalfshellvenus on February 10th, 2008 06:38 pm (UTC)
Oh, that was cute. :) "nonion"-- such a typical kid things to say. And the trying it out anyway-- yick!
iamstealthyoneiamstealthyone on February 10th, 2008 02:55 pm (UTC)
Aww, thanks so much for the lovely drabble! I love it. :) It's so nice to see the boys just being kids, enjoying a nonhunting moment. And this:

"Lello," Sam says

Too cute! I love how little kids mangle words. *g*

"Okay…" Sam pouts.

*squishes him*

Thanks again, dear! *hugs*

The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: weechestershalfshellvenus on February 10th, 2008 06:39 pm (UTC)
Too cute! I love how little kids mangle words. *g*
That one is so common-- both our kids said it, and it sounds so cheerful.

*squishes him*
:D Not everything that looks pretty tastes good, but kids sure take their time learning that one. :0

So glad you liked it! Happy Birthday!
(no subject) - iamstealthyone on February 10th, 2008 07:38 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - halfshellvenus on February 10th, 2008 08:12 pm (UTC) (Expand)
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cindy: the dean show - do you have...tsuki_no_bara on February 10th, 2008 05:28 pm (UTC)
*dead from cute* "wait - don't eat it!" and then sam no doubt makes the cutest, most disgusted face....
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: weechestershalfshellvenus on February 10th, 2008 06:43 pm (UTC)
and then sam no doubt makes the cutest, most disgusted face....

My husband missed something just like this at the grocery store once, when he parked the cart too close to a food display with our 18-month-old daughter in it. Some lady saw the whole thing and told him-- Lauren grabbed a little brussel sprout, bit into it, made a horrified face and threw it back into the display, all while his back was turned. :0

Those baby cabbages are so cute, but a baby trying out a raw one? Bleh!
girlguidejonesgirlguidejones on February 10th, 2008 05:55 pm (UTC)
Awww...'Lello! ::smishes Sammy::

I've got a little cousin who loves lemons. He'll eat wedges of them just like you would a sweet orange. His mom craved lemons when he was in the womb, so it's a little creepy. I tell her that she was impregnated by an alien whose home planet had a vitamin C deficiency.

hee.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: weechestershalfshellvenus on February 10th, 2008 06:54 pm (UTC)
He'll eat wedges of them just like you would a sweet orange.
Apparently I used to do this when I was little. :0 We'd go to a seafood restaurant at the ocean, and I'd eat the lemon wedges they brought with the food. The other people in the restaurant were horrified!

I tell her that she was impregnated by an alien whose home planet had a vitamin C deficiency.
Hahaha! You see where those pregnancy cravings lead? :D
aeroport_art: biteaeroport_art on February 10th, 2008 06:15 pm (UTC)
Nnnngh *heartclench*

The "Yucky!" kills me, it's so CUTE.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: weechestershalfshellvenus on February 10th, 2008 06:55 pm (UTC)
The "Yucky!" kills me, it's so CUTE.
Hee! Can you imagine-- the lemon is sour enough, but biting right into the peel? Yikes!
ficwriter1966ficwriter1966 on February 10th, 2008 06:54 pm (UTC)
That was sweet and wonderful! The boys being struck by the wonder of California after Indiana snow and cold - and Sammy's "lello." I really enjoyed this - thanks for sharing.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: weechestershalfshellvenus on February 10th, 2008 06:56 pm (UTC)
Oh, I'm so glad you liked it!

And what a shock kids get when they find something so beautiful and discover that it tastes just awful. :0
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: weechestershalfshellvenus on February 11th, 2008 02:51 am (UTC)
:D Thank you!
Nebula: spn wee!chester d hold sauthoressnebula on February 10th, 2008 11:47 pm (UTC)
So. Cute. I think I'm dead from the cute. *smishes them both*

I want a wee!Sammy and wee!Dean, and I would feed them chocolate all day long. ^_^

Thank you so much for this enjoyable bit into their childhood! I'm adding this to my mems.

~Nebula
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: weechestershalfshellvenus on February 11th, 2008 02:52 am (UTC)
They make such a cute picture, don't they? And I'm sure if they belonged to any of us, we'd cherish them the way they deserved. :)

Adding to memories! Wow-- thank you! :)
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: weechestershalfshellvenus on February 11th, 2008 06:47 pm (UTC)
I mean to be so vulnerable and then have a hunter obsessed father.
Especially now that we've gotten some really bald detail with that Christmas episode. That was SO sad-- like being moved around constantly and living out of motels isn't bad enough, but to be left alone for days on end including Christmas. *wibble*

These little moments that the boys share with each other is one of the few happy ideas I ever have about their childhood. Somehow, children usually find even small moments of joy-- and at least they have each other.
layne: spn weechesterslayne67 on February 11th, 2008 08:45 am (UTC)
Oh. The image of wee!Dean playing his toy truck really tugs at my heart strings, esp when I think of Dean in the last episode.

And Sammy, lello is lemon? *g*
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: weechestershalfshellvenus on February 11th, 2008 06:45 pm (UTC)
Oh. The image of wee!Dean playing his toy truck really tugs at my heart strings,
I'm glad somebody noticed that! To be seven, and have that pretty much be one of your few toys because it's portable and not very expensive. *cries*

"Lello" isn't lemon, it's actually how a lot of little kids say "yellow." And it's a baby word I really like, because it sounds so happy. :)
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: weechestershalfshellvenus on February 12th, 2008 05:21 am (UTC)
It's such a kid thing-- when you've found a bundle of "yellow" in the back yard that you don't recognize, that's exactly how you think of it: I found some yellow! :)

Which was really not tasty after all. :0
tyrical: Snoopy_surprisetyrical on February 16th, 2008 08:01 pm (UTC)
This reminds me of the time I drank sea water!
I was five or six and my father thought it would be funny!
I think it was ... for him!
If that don't wake you up! Nothing will!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphorshalfshellvenus on February 16th, 2008 09:47 pm (UTC)
I was five or six and my father thought it would be funny!
Good lord. Makes me think it would be funny for your father to get attacked by a seagull! :0

I've tasted sea water, always accidentally (as in, getting knocked down by a big wave). Bleh! I don't think a person can imagine how salty it really is until they've tasted it. Yuck!
zooey_glass04: SPN: Smiling boys in the Impalazooey_glass04 on February 17th, 2008 10:04 pm (UTC)
Awwww, that's so lovely! It's absolutely note perfect, I can really imagine them. Their child voices are really convincing, and I'm torn between awwwing and wibbling at this.

Brilliant, thank you!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: weechestershalfshellvenus on February 17th, 2008 10:21 pm (UTC)
and I'm torn between awwwing and wibbling at this.

:) That honestly is so often exactly how I feel about the Wee!Chesters. They're cute together, and while they have their moments of being pure kids there is almost always something overshadowing the picture that turns it bittersweet-- even if here it's just the fact that they move around so constantly.

So glad you liked it! Thank you. :)