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05 January 2006 @ 10:36 am
Supernatural100 "Pets" Drabble Challenge: The Point Goes To Dean  
Author: HalfshellVenus
Category: Sam/Dean Genfic (drabble)
Rating: PG

Author’s Notes: OK, fine. At least this “Pets” fic is 100 words. supernatural100 gets this one, but the other? Is mine.

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The beast is fangs and froth and hatred, and they killed it just in time.

Dean lowers the shotgun. “Weren’t you the one that always wanted a dog?”

Sam’s look is quick and pained. “I didn’t say I wanted this dog!”

“Wonder if anyone’ll eat it?” Dean pokes it with his foot.

Sam’s already at the car, glaring behind him. “You’ve been at this job too long.”

Dean packs the gun in the trunk. One more point for me. Seven to two today.

It’s late and they’re done, and Dean’s won this round for sure. Sweet, he thinks.

“Let’s ride.”


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And here's the one I wrote first that didn't make the 100-word cut: Making Friends



 
 
 
The Good, The Bad and The Lana: happy sarathelana on January 5th, 2006 06:56 pm (UTC)
“Wonder if anyone’ll eat it?” Dean pokes it with his foot.

Sam’s already at the car, glaring behind him. “You’ve been at this job too long.”


LOL, is it the wrong reaction when this one makes me laugh? :D
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Gen: icon by Tinamishihalfshellvenus on January 5th, 2006 07:02 pm (UTC)
Not at all! That was the point!

Sick, sick Dean...
skippy_peanutsskippy_peanuts on January 6th, 2006 08:57 pm (UTC)
the "wonder if anyone will eat it" part made me laugh as well.
i liked this is was rather amusing. good job.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Gen: icon by Tinamishihalfshellvenus on January 6th, 2006 08:59 pm (UTC)
Heh. Sometimes we all enjoy the sick humor. And you know Dean does :-)

Glad you like this. A very different flavor from the one I wrote first, which I like for totally different (and rather fluffy) reasons.

Hah! Take that, supernatural100! You have not bested me yet!
tyrical: SPN_Lenschn_D_smiletyrical on February 10th, 2006 06:15 pm (UTC)
This one was fun.

One more point for me. Seven to two today.

This is so something Dean would do.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Gen: icon by Tinamishihalfshellvenus on February 10th, 2006 06:52 pm (UTC)
This is so something Dean would do.

And so gleefully. Heh!