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19 July 2007 @ 01:26 pm
Supernatural Gen Drabble: Overkill  
Title: Overkill
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Sam and Dean (Gen, Humor)
Rating: PG
Summary: Drabble on "Overkill" for 100_ghosts.

x-x-x-x-x

Sam really hates it when Dean works a job alone. He barely reaches the library before turning around and driving back to the ivy-covered house where he dropped Dean off.

The door is open, but the room's secure. "What's this?" Sam says.

Dean's standing over a pile of ashes— wet ashes, to be exact— his whole body daring it to move. There's a bloody dagger on the table.

"Dean?"

"Stabbed it. Burned it—holy water chaser."

"Jesus, how dead does it have to be?"

"Sucker pissed me off." Dean kicks the ashes.

Second time this month. "Ohh-kay... I'll wait outside."


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jellicle on July 19th, 2007 08:32 pm (UTC)
So, we just lost the gold over here (volleyball) but you made me smile. I love when Dean is like this!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Genhalfshellvenus on July 19th, 2007 08:59 pm (UTC)
I'm glad to help lift the mood a little bit, after such a disappointment.

I love that Dean rarely seems to realize when he's being unreasonable. Really, do any of us? :D
Tam 'O Bedlamangstpuppy on July 19th, 2007 10:16 pm (UTC)
Is it sad that that just made me giggle out loud?
It could be a character flaw....(mine not Deans).
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Genhalfshellvenus on July 19th, 2007 10:18 pm (UTC)
Not sad at all-- it's For The Win! \o/

It could be a character flaw....(mine not Deans).
Oh, I think Mr. Winchester is at fault here. Holy moly-- it's not like we can't imagine him doing exactly that. :0 :D
blazeorfadeblazeorfade on July 20th, 2007 02:56 am (UTC)
LMAO

Oh Dean.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Genhalfshellvenus on July 20th, 2007 06:35 am (UTC)
And yet, you know he totally would!

Later, he'll try to pass it off as being 'thorough'. ;)
The Grammarian about whom your mother warned you.acostilow on July 20th, 2007 04:51 am (UTC)
Good lord, Dean. Overkill much? :D That's my boy.

Not first. :( Just got back into town.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Genhalfshellvenus on July 20th, 2007 06:35 am (UTC)
You can't say he doesn't enjoy his work, now can you? Sometimes too much. :0

At least you're not last! I hope.... :D
layne: spn impalalayne67 on July 20th, 2007 08:23 am (UTC)
And that is why they need each other. Yin and yang and all that stuff :)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Genhalfshellvenus on July 20th, 2007 03:39 pm (UTC)
:D That's exactly how I see their relationship too-- yin/yang, where despite their extremes the two of them create balance.

Not that they always arrive at it peacefully. ;)
zora_souritzora_sourit on July 20th, 2007 11:14 am (UTC)
Powerful and beautiful, as always. And true, as always :).
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Genhalfshellvenus on July 20th, 2007 03:40 pm (UTC)
Hee! There is a certain horrific truth in this one, isn't there? And to think some people actually hate their jobs. Dean possibly enjoys his a little too much. :)
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Genhalfshellvenus on July 20th, 2007 03:59 pm (UTC)
Haha! "Thorough" is what he tells himself he's doing-- work that rationalization!

I couldn't think of any reason not to use the prompt as the actual title, because that really says it all. :)
lover all alone: Winchestersinvisiblelove on July 20th, 2007 06:36 pm (UTC)
*SNORT* Oh Dean. *hugs*

VERY cute little drabble. I loved it :)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Genhalfshellvenus on July 20th, 2007 08:54 pm (UTC)
Hee! Thank you so much. :D
kamelionleenys on July 20th, 2007 06:44 pm (UTC)
*chuckles* Let this be a lesson.
DO NOT PISS THE MAN OFF.
*makes metal note*
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Genhalfshellvenus on July 20th, 2007 08:55 pm (UTC)
Haha! I can just imagine the shopping expeditions:

"Dean, we do NOT need another blow torch. Besides, when are we going to run into bees again anyway?"

"Good for zombies. And Blutargh demons. And... stuff." ;)
kamelionleenys on July 21st, 2007 06:39 pm (UTC)
LOL!!!!
batgurl10: hawt ass deanbatgurl10 on July 20th, 2007 09:45 pm (UTC)
"Jesus, how dead does it have to be?"

BWAHAHAHAHAH! Man I loved this! Yes dean loves his job, what of it? I was one of the few who didnt think that dean whacking that vamp in the first appearence of gordon epi was overkill...
Seriously, buffy was way more emo violent than dean and noone judged her....giggle snort! :-)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Genhalfshellvenus on July 21st, 2007 12:01 am (UTC)
Dean killing the vampire was disturbing to me (and icky), but it was entirely appropriate-- he was a little out of control, and his excess enthusiasm showed it. Sam was as horrified as we were, but... a point was being made.

Buffy so loved her Mr. Pointy-- and I loved the irony of giving her staking sticks names like that and then using them for such violent purposes. :D
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Genhalfshellvenus on July 21st, 2007 02:46 am (UTC)
Heh-heh!
getting the chocolate in the peanut butter: dean: demonsarenervousdotfic on July 21st, 2007 01:26 am (UTC)
Heh. I could so picture this. Dean's a bit enthusiastic about his work sometimes. Although, depending on when you intended this to be set, this makes me wonder if it's Dean taking his issues out on the undead again.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Genhalfshellvenus on July 21st, 2007 02:51 am (UTC)
this makes me wonder if it's Dean taking his issues out on the undead again.
So few words, so many layers of meaning. ;)

Although better the undead than the living, I always say. :D
kuromatickuromatic on July 21st, 2007 04:07 pm (UTC)
I really like that you have him kicking the ashes. :)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Genhalfshellvenus on July 21st, 2007 06:30 pm (UTC)
Haha! It's the final over-the-top touch, isn't it?

Or the sign of someone who knows how to hold a grudge. ;)
labseraphlabseraph on July 22nd, 2007 05:14 pm (UTC)
*snort*

*giggles maniacally*

HOMG. This is priceless.


"Stabbed it. Burned it—holy water chaser."

"Jesus, how dead does it have to be?"

"Sucker pissed me off." Dean kicks the ashes.

Second time this month. "Ohh-kay... I'll wait outside."


Dear God. How could four lines bring so much mirth? You are for the win.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Genhalfshellvenus on July 23rd, 2007 05:32 am (UTC)
Hahaha! I'm so glad you liked it!

Amazing what can be "shown" with lines like that-- not just about Dean, but also about how Sam deals with him at times like these. Run awaaaaay... :D
     Mandya_phoenixdragon on December 29th, 2007 10:26 am (UTC)
Damn, lol!! This...was awesome!!

*hugs*