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20 June 2007 @ 11:38 pm
Supernatural Slash Drabble: Insatiability  
Title: Insatiability
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Dean/Sam (Wincest)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Drabble on "Greed" for 100_ghosts.

x-x-x-x-x

Dean used to tell himself he'd never do this— never cross this line with Sam, never act on the temptation. That promise died a year ago, after a night of too much danger and far too much to drink.

Sam kissed him first, but it doesn't matter now. They went full-tilt, all teeth, tongue and rough-sliding hands, not lasting ten minutes the first time—or the second, two days later.

Dean tries holding firm, but he keeps caving in. He can't get enough of Sam, not ever, has to take it all against the future when Sam finally says No.


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BEWARE OF JENMAR.: SPN - Dean's Brain (Sam and clex_monkie89 on June 21st, 2007 06:50 am (UTC)
Ooh, lovely

Also? I'm not actually reading this; I'm writing my final scene for my Big Bang. Honest. Really.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on June 21st, 2007 05:49 pm (UTC)
:D Final scene is promising! Almost there...

Glad you liked it, too. :)
mossylawnmossylawn on June 21st, 2007 07:16 am (UTC)
Only few sentences but such power.
I love the fact that Dean is still holding himself in check and that even after it was Sam who started it he's still do damned insecure.

I hate drabbles, they end the same second I get hooked.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Diner Deanhalfshellvenus on June 22nd, 2007 07:30 pm (UTC)
and that even after it was Sam who started it he's still do damned insecure.
That's just so Dean, isn't it? But given that everyone he's ever loved has left him... you can understand a little why he might think that's he's just not enough for anyone to "keep" on a long-term basis. *wibble*
(no subject) - mossylawn on June 22nd, 2007 07:47 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - halfshellvenus on June 22nd, 2007 07:51 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - mossylawn on June 22nd, 2007 08:20 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - halfshellvenus on June 22nd, 2007 08:31 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Cass E. Pants: SPN - dean reflectingcass404 on June 21st, 2007 07:28 am (UTC)
How do you put so much into just 100 words? It just amazes me. Dean needs to be whomped with a self-esteem charm. Not the strutting he does for the rest of the world, but he's got Sambandonment issues.
Elise: LoVebehrbemine on June 21st, 2007 11:43 pm (UTC)
but he's got Sambandonment issues

Aww... This is so random, but I so love that term, and I've never heard it before.

*aww's away in a wander*
(no subject) - halfshellvenus on June 22nd, 2007 07:33 pm (UTC) (Expand)
aeroport_artaeroport_art on June 21st, 2007 03:58 pm (UTC)
Dean in a nutshell! Luffly :3
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Diner Deanhalfshellvenus on June 22nd, 2007 07:34 pm (UTC)
Dean and all his issues that will never leave so long as he denies them and refuses to listen to evidence to the contrary.

On the plane yet? *watches for sadly departing jet*
The Grammarian about whom your mother warned you.acostilow on June 21st, 2007 05:21 pm (UTC)
*tiny flappy hands*

God, I've missed you.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Diner Deanhalfshellvenus on June 22nd, 2007 07:37 pm (UTC)
:D We've missed you too-- all of us!

And your scary, fierce little kitten icon. :)
Amyquarterwhore on June 21st, 2007 05:23 pm (UTC)
It's amazing how much feeling you pack into such a short fic. It hurts-- the longing, the desperation, the need, and the little hint of regret-- it's portrayed so well. I'm seriously tearing up. You know all the ways to make me cry, and you do it all in 100 words. Great job hon!

-Allie
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on June 22nd, 2007 07:39 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much-- what a wonderful comment! I was hoping for this one to be very intense, to fuel the "greed" with a lifetime of need behind it (and the fear of losing it all like that).

Your words were so wonderful. :) *snuggles them and you*
sadelyrate: livessadelyrate on June 21st, 2007 06:26 pm (UTC)
That last line is so very, very true, even taken out of context. Even without a single wincestuous thought.
And the latter half of Second Season merely enhanced that idea. Until, of course, that Finale...

*shakes her head*

This is adorable and achy in all its complete shortness, though. Just like the relationship between Sam and Dean.

They went full-tilt, all teeth, tongue and rough-sliding hands, not lasting ten minutes the first time—or the second, two days later.

And this is the hottest single sentence I've read in a good while. :)
Thank You.

*friends you*
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on June 22nd, 2007 07:47 pm (UTC)
That last line is so very, very true, even taken out of context. Even without a single wincestuous thought.
Yes-- I've always thought so too. Sam is Dean's major source of happiness and completion, and yet he's always living with the threat of Sam leaving. It makes him that much more desperate.

And this is the hottest single sentence I've read in a good while. :) Thank You.
Whoo! What lovely feedback. :)

*friends you*
Nice to see you over here, as I remember your wonderful reviews at fanfiction.net. *friends back*

foxieindelibility on June 21st, 2007 06:55 pm (UTC)
Guh. I think you captured the situation perfectly :D
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on June 22nd, 2007 07:48 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! Anything involving "Guh" is always good from my POV, too. I know from "Guh" when I read it in other peoples' stories. :D
Leigh: brothers dean and samleighm on June 21st, 2007 08:13 pm (UTC)
love this:)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam/Dean kisshalfshellvenus on June 22nd, 2007 07:48 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much, Leigh! :)
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Diner Deanhalfshellvenus on June 22nd, 2007 07:53 pm (UTC)
Thank you, Velvetine! This is all the ache inside Dean that even Sam doesn't understand and Dean works so hard to hide. :(
dc_longwing on June 21st, 2007 11:31 pm (UTC)
FABulous.
Thanks,
DC
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Diner Deanhalfshellvenus on June 22nd, 2007 07:56 pm (UTC)
Thank you, DC! Always love hearing from you. :)
Elise: LoVebehrbemine on June 21st, 2007 11:41 pm (UTC)
Mmmmm! Say it louder now: MMMMMMMMMMMMMM!

So yum, and so angsty in just the right way. I feel fulfilled, and yet I want more, so much more. Your words are so tasty and tempting. Awesome.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean slashhalfshellvenus on June 22nd, 2007 07:59 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much! Tasty and tempting words-- I love that.

Like a perfect little snack, though you wish there were more of them on the tray. ;) Lovely!
downbythebay_4: Whimsical Treedownbythebay_4 on June 23rd, 2007 04:31 pm (UTC)
Amazing, with extra 'a,' even without the brotherly loving...I worry that Dean will go the way of Edna Pontellier (of course there was that whole crossroads bit, so I guess he sort of has, in his own way...) Sometimes I just want to grab him by his shoulders and shake him around and give him that: "I understand you would die for your brother, but you don't have to LIVE for him" line...

You capture all these emotions so beautifully, with your superior drabbling skills
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Diner Deanhalfshellvenus on June 24th, 2007 05:52 am (UTC)
I understand you would die for your brother, but you don't have to LIVE for him" line...
I don't think Dean knows how not to. A person usually would, but growing up as they did-- in such an insular, untrusting and transient setting-- who else is Dean ever going to love so strongly? Especially now that Sam is all that's left?

I wish there were more for him in life, but I definitely understand his feeling that a world without Sam is not worth living in, and moreover that Sam is more needed than he is. I don't think it's true, but Dean certainly does. Frustrating, isn't it?

And thank you so much for your kind words!
fpvs: Sam owns Dean's soulfpvs on June 30th, 2007 04:04 am (UTC)
AWWWW!!!! Heart turned all warmy happy!!!! *nods*
That was SOOO sweet.... Oh, Dean... Always with your fears that Sam's going to leave.... :(
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Diner Deanhalfshellvenus on July 3rd, 2007 07:19 am (UTC)
:D I'm glad you liked it!

Oh, Dean... Always with your fears that Sam's going to leave.... :(
Because he has, and he'd said several times that he wanted to again, and Dean's convinced he's not worth anyone staying for. :(