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25 March 2007 @ 10:34 pm
Supernatural Slash Drabble: All The Right Moves  
Title: All The Right Moves
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Sam/Dean (Wincest, PWP)
Rating: R/NC-17
Summary: Another day in another motel. A different take on the "Homecourt Advantage" challenge at 100_ghosts.

x-x-x-x-x

"God, Dean, just—"

Mouth and tongue and fingers there, all rhythm-rough and jittery-edged teetering on the brink until swirl-stroke-swirl-stroke

"Yes!"

Sam bucks and arches, Dean moving right along with him, until Sam's boneless bliss and Dean's settled in beside him.

"God, your mouth…" Sam moans. "How do you always just—fuck, it's perfect. It's incredible."

"Got the same equipment as you, Dude," Dean grins back. "I know what feels good."

That's either some kind of wrong or incredibly lucky, Sam can't decide. Right now he's grateful.

Thing is, he knows stuff too.

It's about time Dean found that out…


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michelle: Sam - Oh Deancertainthings on March 26th, 2007 05:58 am (UTC)

Mmm mmm good.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on March 26th, 2007 08:43 pm (UTC)
:D That's my favorite flavor of everything! \o/

Thank you, Smidge!
I'm for wine and the embrace of questionable womenmissyjack on March 26th, 2007 06:05 am (UTC)
Love the ending - you tease you!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on March 26th, 2007 08:45 pm (UTC)
:D I got at least one half of it in 100 words, and a fairly good amount of implied detail. ;)

Now if I could just finish the decent-sized porn I'm working on. Its prompt is "Lips," and you can see how this little snippet might be on my mind just now. ;)
(no subject) - missyjack on March 26th, 2007 10:25 pm (UTC) (Expand)
angels3angels3 on March 26th, 2007 06:15 am (UTC)
I want to know
What things does Sam know tell us tell us or better yet have Sam show Dean.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on March 26th, 2007 08:45 pm (UTC)
Re: I want to know
:D I can't, I'm off my word limit!

Have to wait for another story. *tempt-tempt-tempt* ;)
Re: I want to know - angels3 on March 26th, 2007 08:54 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Re: I want to know - halfshellvenus on March 26th, 2007 08:57 pm (UTC) (Expand)
sugar_sex: dean dirty ideasugar_sex on March 26th, 2007 08:25 am (UTC)
Oooh yum, short and sweet hot.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on March 26th, 2007 08:46 pm (UTC)
:D Thank you so much-- and what an utterly perfect icon for this story. ;)
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on March 26th, 2007 08:47 pm (UTC)
Yay! What a great way to start the week!

This is one of my porniest 100-word efforts yet. Always good to see how much I can get into that word limit. ;)
fpvs: Supernatural_Fanfic_Deanfpvs on March 26th, 2007 10:29 am (UTC)
*drool trickles out side of mouth*
Gah

SHOW HIM, SAMMY!!! :D
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on March 26th, 2007 08:48 pm (UTC)
"Drooool~~~" is pretty much what this whole scenario does to me too.

Dean's mouth and-- *flails*
dru: dean backway grindrvsilla on March 26th, 2007 12:26 pm (UTC)
\o/

Yeah, that's what I got.

\o/

hee! Mmmm, good stuff, ma'am. :D
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN SpecialHellhalfshellvenus on March 26th, 2007 08:49 pm (UTC)
\o/ is totally a comment flavor!

Because I know exactly what you mean by it. ;)

Thank you, Dru! ♥
(no subject) - drvsilla on March 27th, 2007 12:44 am (UTC) (Expand)
not a morning person...tattoo_kink on March 26th, 2007 01:37 pm (UTC)
Wow sweetie, it's always incredible, how much emotion you write in 100 words. Love it! Definitely. *hugs*
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(no subject) - tattoo_kink on March 26th, 2007 03:18 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - halfshellvenus on March 26th, 2007 08:54 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - tattoo_kink on March 26th, 2007 09:09 pm (UTC) (Expand)
dawnstarrising: Yumdawnstarrising on March 26th, 2007 05:18 pm (UTC)
Oh yeah......such a beautiful picture. *sigh*

Hello honey. Its good to see you again.

love

Dawn xx
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on March 26th, 2007 08:55 pm (UTC)
You too, Dawn! Drop me an email, let me know how you're doing.

And glad you liked this. I still owe you a ficlet, and heavens if it isn't just taking me forever! :0
(no subject) - dawnstarrising on March 26th, 2007 09:11 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Elle: SN D/S kiss manip wow11 by lidiellel on March 26th, 2007 06:25 pm (UTC)
GUH!!!

Thing is,he knows stuff too.
Ohhhh?Though,I never doubted Sam has some tricks to show Dean;)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on March 26th, 2007 08:56 pm (UTC)
Glad you liked it, Elle. :)

Oh that Sam, a college boy with access to the library and the Kama Sutra and lots of other interesting books.

Not to mention that Freshman-year experimentation. ;) I imagine he could scandalize Dean with sheer variety, if he wanted to. :0
(no subject) - ellel on March 27th, 2007 06:58 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Andy: SPN - Translationrule_number_7 on March 26th, 2007 09:10 pm (UTC)
It's about time Dean found that out…

I think it's about time we readers found out to *nods*

Great fic :P
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN SpecialHellhalfshellvenus on March 26th, 2007 10:10 pm (UTC)
Hee! Thank you!

Love the icon. ;)
Rachel_sin_attract on March 27th, 2007 03:45 am (UTC)
Hottest 100 words ever!

;) Love it, as always!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: spnKinkQuotehalfshellvenus on March 27th, 2007 07:02 pm (UTC)
That's my goal now-- to see which of my Slash drabbles can be the porniest in only 100 words!

Oddly enough, it is easier to write sex in drabble form. Those key little details really set the scene, and in the longer fics it takes me forever to block it all. :0
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on March 30th, 2007 12:21 am (UTC)
Hee! Glad you liked this one. :)
tyricaltyrical on April 3rd, 2007 12:41 am (UTC)
How'd I miss this!

Again Dean's very talented and sinful mouth strikes again!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on April 14th, 2007 06:43 am (UTC)
:D This was a snippet that came to me while I was working on the larger Mouth Porn story. :) I had Dean's lips on the brain as you can see, but the other story was taking awhile.

Well! That mouth is worthy of endless attention, I tell you! :)