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09 January 2007 @ 05:08 pm
Supernatural Slash Fiction: All Wrapped Up In You  
Title: All Wrapped Up In You
Author: HalfshellVenus
Pairing: Sam/Dean (Wincest)
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~3200
Summary: Dean offers Sam the kink of his choice for Christmas.
Author's Notes: A very late delivery for spn_christmas, but I hope still worth reading. This was one of those times where the porn really slowed me down! Sooo much detail. ;) pheebs1 and others on my f-list will recognize their inputs on the "kinks" displayed here.


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In which Sam is a total tease, and Dean was asking for it anywayCollapse )



 
 
 
albeitslowly on January 11th, 2007 12:35 am (UTC)
Thatwas beautifulperfectwonderful. I'm such a sap that I totally woulda been happy with just the PDA's, but the hot sex and the kiss was nice too. God, I would so go gooey to see those boys walking down the street freakin' holding hands. Guh! Dean with his hand in Sam's pocket and Sam with his arm draped over Dean's neck and down his chest...*is happy*
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on January 11th, 2007 01:52 am (UTC)
I'm such a sap that I totally woulda been happy with just the PDA's,
Oh, me too-- but I couldn't see Dean getting on board with that. *thwaps him*

God, I would so go gooey to see those boys walking down the street freakin' holding hands. Guh! Dean with his hand in Sam's pocket and Sam with his arm draped over Dean's neck and down his chest...*is happy*
Right there with you-- that would make me terribly happy too. :D

Thanks for reading and commenting!
(no subject) - albeitslowly on January 11th, 2007 01:56 am (UTC) (Expand)
Those two guys are totally having sex!capesofwrath on January 11th, 2007 01:04 am (UTC)
Wow. That was a very perfect blend of wow!hot and very sweet. Awww.

I was thinking reading a good fic would make me less anxious for Thursday, but I think it just made it worse. Dammit. But I think it was worth it.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on January 11th, 2007 01:55 am (UTC)
wow!hot and very sweet. Awww.
Yay! It kind of serves two audiences, doesn't it? The Dean and then Sam audiences.

Dammit. But I think it was worth it.
I sure hope so! And I need the schmoop to make up for the fact that we can't get one single little hug in canon! Grouses about it, and knows if it ever happens the pictures will be in high-res all over LJ within an hour.

Thanks so much for reading! And cool username, BTW. :D
(no subject) - capesofwrath on January 25th, 2007 03:33 am (UTC) (Expand)
9thof99thof9 on January 11th, 2007 04:44 am (UTC)
All I could think of by the end was "Merry Christmas you filthy animal." The bondage killed my brain.

It's been several minutes and I'm still not thinking straight. (No pun intended)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on January 11th, 2007 05:59 am (UTC)
The bondage killed my brain.
:D That's probably a good sign, because I haven't written that before!

I think your icon says it all: Go Boom indeed!

Thank you!
(Anonymous) on January 11th, 2007 07:16 am (UTC)
How cute is it that all Sam wants is a little PDA??? Of course I myself hate that stuff as much as Dean (I know I'm a strange girl), but for Sam I'd try, and for Dean I doubt I could help myself. ;>
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on January 11th, 2007 06:09 pm (UTC)
but for Sam I'd try, and for Dean I doubt I could help myself. ;>
Thanks so much for reading!

Well then, you definitely understand Dean's side of it-- AND the fact that though it kills him to do it, he tries at least a tiny bit for Sam. :D

MF Luder: SPN frictionmf_luder_xf on January 11th, 2007 07:43 am (UTC)
Adorable, insanely hott, and OMG that ending was just what i wanted. Whee!! Lovely as always.

The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on January 11th, 2007 06:10 pm (UTC)
Eeee! Thank you, Lucy! Oh, I'm so glad people don't find either the hott too much in the schmoop, or the ending out-of-place with the hott. :D

So glad you liked it. Yayyyyy!
I'm for wine and the embrace of questionable women: slashsdmissyjack on January 11th, 2007 02:01 pm (UTC)
Gorgeously hot, just the right amount of *awww* and the perfect ending.

Kudos on the kink. It was exquisite, and the effort you put in was worth it. Choreographing normal Wincest (sic) is hard (sic) enough but kink taks extra skill to make it flow and be sexy and still make sure we know what's going where!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on January 12th, 2007 05:43 pm (UTC)
It was exquisite, and the effort you put in was worth it.
Oh, I am SO glad to hear that. That explicit choreography takes so incredibly long for me to write, but hitting all that variety took even longer. Still... I can't see Sam not taking his time to really explore and enjoy when he has such a perfect opportunity. Don't want to rush the porn OR the love. :)
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on January 12th, 2007 05:44 pm (UTC)
Thank you, Dawnie! Oh, a dead computer is just no good! Once you've found the Internets, you can never go back. :D
Echostir_of_echoes on January 11th, 2007 06:54 pm (UTC)
Oh, I loved this so much :)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on January 12th, 2007 05:46 pm (UTC)
Ooh, thank you Jules! And I'm so glad people are as happy with the love as the sex, honestly. That thrills me to pieces!
(no subject) - stir_of_echoes on January 12th, 2007 05:50 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - halfshellvenus on January 12th, 2007 06:54 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - stir_of_echoes on January 12th, 2007 09:46 pm (UTC) (Expand)
The Grammarian about whom your mother warned you.acostilow on January 11th, 2007 07:51 pm (UTC)
*GLEE*
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on January 12th, 2007 05:47 pm (UTC)
:D Porn! With Sam and Dean! It's your favorite kind of glee, and a much-deserved pick-me-up from the way RL is going lately. Hope it's helping. ♥
(no subject) - acostilow on January 12th, 2007 06:46 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - halfshellvenus on January 12th, 2007 06:51 pm (UTC) (Expand)
it's not a trick, pay attentionlvlysnidrus on January 11th, 2007 08:33 pm (UTC)
That was soooo cute! And hot and all, but also very, very CUTE.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on January 12th, 2007 06:08 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! I really wanted both halves of the story to work, and I'm so glad you think they did. :)
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Queen of the Monkey People: Hotadelheide on January 11th, 2007 10:18 pm (UTC)
This...

This is...

Yes.

Wow.

Can't comment.

Hot broke my words.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN SpecialHellhalfshellvenus on January 12th, 2007 06:10 pm (UTC)
Wha-hoo! \o/ Thank you so much! :D
(no subject) - adelheide on January 12th, 2007 09:08 pm (UTC) (Expand)
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GirlOnFiresacrilicious on January 11th, 2007 10:43 pm (UTC)
Nothing says Christmas like some festive holiday bondage and rimming. Loved it!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN SpecialHellhalfshellvenus on January 12th, 2007 06:11 pm (UTC)
:D That's what happens when you write things for other people-- BUT I did choose the prompt, so had to make it worthwhile. Rrrrrrowr...

Glad you liked it!
annkiri on January 11th, 2007 10:51 pm (UTC)
Oh, I liked this a lot!!!

I loved Sam teasing Dean about PDA's, and the Bondage was SMOKING HOT!!!! WOW! Totally awesome.

But I also really loved the affection you were able to show between the two. And Sam's resilience in finding presents for Dean and being all secretive.

And the end!! I loved it. YAY!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on January 12th, 2007 06:14 pm (UTC)
Yay! I haven't written Bondage before, because it's really not my thing, but this approach to it was definitely something I could work with, especially making it about affection and enjoyment more than control.

The affection was the big motivator for me in this story-- that's my favorite part of their relationship, though I love all the other components (snark, miscommunication, angst) as well.

And I'm thrilled you liked the ending! I wanted it to finish off Sam's underlying want and the mood of the piece, without seeming too abrupt. :)
The Lone Jewel: Oh yeah baby!eremir on January 11th, 2007 11:45 pm (UTC)
God, that was perfect. I love Sam teasing Dean about public affection, and I was actually a bit disappointed when Sam caved and went for the bondage, but fuck if I wasn't happy later... The sex was totally hot. And the ending was fab. :)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on January 12th, 2007 06:16 pm (UTC)
and I was actually a bit disappointed when Sam caved and went for the bondage, but fuck if I wasn't happy later...
I pretty much had to go with something that might be considered a real "kink," because this was written for somebody else's prompt, and otherwise I'd kind of be bailing out on the spirit of the whole thing.

The sex was totally hot. And the ending was fab. :)
Thank you! The sex was very loving as well as hot, and in the end Sam actually got what he wanted anyway by loving Dean to the point where Dean realized he owed something big in return. :)
I can read Sam's mind: SPN: Brotherswendy on January 12th, 2007 12:16 am (UTC)
He drew letters with his tongue— they might have been Sam and Dean, though he'd never admit it to anyone

SO hot and yet SO sweet.

I love how well they know each other, I love their back-and-forth teasing, I love the image of Sam washing Dean's hair, love the BURNING HOT SEX OMG, I love the love.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on January 12th, 2007 06:19 pm (UTC)
SO hot and yet SO sweet.
I was hoping that wouldn't seem too over the top, and I'm glad you liked that touch. It seemed like a good sexual technique, and if Sam were searching for words, well... what else could he choose?

I love how well they know each other, I love their back-and-forth teasing,
Oh, me too-- because I want it to still seem like THEM, not like some totally different pair of guys wearing Sam and Dean's skin.

I love the image of Sam washing Dean's hair,
The tenderness there... *dies* Dean doesn't let Sam love him as much as either of them needs, and isolated moments where he gives in are just so heartbreakingly sweet.

love the BURNING HOT SEX OMG, I love the love.
Yay! The porn is no good if it's not hot (especially when it's for somebody else), and the love is what makes these two so compelling, at least to me.

Thank you, Wendy! ♥