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29 March 2014 @ 06:09 pm
Writerverse: Two Haiku  
For the writerverse prompts that match the titles.


Come With Me
I stretch out my hand
to your heart. In that soft reach
lies love or distance.

Your touch heats my skin,
the silken torment of breath
bringing forth the fire.


similiesslipsimiliesslip on March 30th, 2014 02:52 am (UTC)
Wow. I love how you put these words together. The poems say so much, so simply.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphorshalfshellvenus on March 30th, 2014 03:58 am (UTC)
Thank you! I haven't really tried haiku much in the past, but there is a certain, spare beauty in what you can do with it.
cindytsuki_no_bara on March 30th, 2014 06:13 am (UTC)
ooooh. these are nice! i especially like how the second one seems to answer the first.