29 March 2014 @ 06:09 pm
Writerverse: Two Haiku  
For the writerverse prompts that match the titles.


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Come With Me
I stretch out my hand
to your heart. In that soft reach
lies love or distance.



Combustion
Your touch heats my skin,
the silken torment of breath
bringing forth the fire.


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( 3 comments — Say what you feel )
similiesslipsimiliesslip on March 30th, 2014 02:52 am (UTC)
Wow. I love how you put these words together. The poems say so much, so simply.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphorshalfshellvenus on March 30th, 2014 03:58 am (UTC)
Thank you! I haven't really tried haiku much in the past, but there is a certain, spare beauty in what you can do with it.
cindytsuki_no_bara on March 30th, 2014 06:13 am (UTC)
ooooh. these are nice! i especially like how the second one seems to answer the first.
( 3 comments — Say what you feel )