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05 May 2009 @ 11:46 pm
Supernatural Slash Drabble: "In Vino Veritas" (Sam/Dean, PG-13)  
Title: In Vino Veritas
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Sam/Dean (Slash, First-Time, Drabble, All-Dialogue)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Alcohol-aided impulses lead to a deeper truth.
Author's Notes: Drabble Meme offering for dreamlittleyo, who wanted Sam/Dean, tequila, and warm rain. That was a lot of plot for a drabble, but thanks to the power of dialogue it's all here!
Also for supernatural100 ("Change") and for spn_drabble ("Rain").

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"Smart to cut me off—liquor store's cheaper."

"Don't get drunk here, Dean, we'll get arrested. Keep walking."

"Rain'll keep me sober. It's… showery."

"Jesus, give me that!"

"Make me. See? You—"

"Hah!"

"Damnit, hand it—"

"Ow! Sonofabitch, Dean!"

"Everything's wet."

"No shit—we're on the ground."

"Mmmmm…"

"You did not just hump me! Stop—Mmmph!"

"Niiiice."

"You kissed me."

"Yeah."

"You taste like tequila, Dean."

"You too, Sammy. Mmmmm…"

"God, that's—Fuck, where'd you learn to kiss like that?"

"Just always… always wanted it. You."

"And tomorrow, when you're sober?"

"Not going anywhere, Sammy."

"Mmmm…Yeah. Me either."


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Maerhys: √ away from ruinmaerhys on May 6th, 2009 11:39 am (UTC)
"Not going anywhere, Sammy."

"Mmmm…Yeah. Me either."


FLAILS! I heart them so!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on May 6th, 2009 05:14 pm (UTC)
Me too! Find that happy place, boys, and keep it!
tyricaltyrical on May 6th, 2009 12:17 pm (UTC)
Rain will keep me sober! Ha!
I love drunks. They have the best randoms.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on May 6th, 2009 05:14 pm (UTC)
They really do. :D It's one of the ways they give themselves away. ;)
angelsallfireangelsallfire on May 6th, 2009 12:54 pm (UTC)
*loves*
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on May 6th, 2009 05:14 pm (UTC)
Hee! Thank you!
Yo: SPN:  Ava gigglesdreamlittleyo on May 6th, 2009 02:35 pm (UTC)
d'awwwww YES PLEASE! I'm really enjoying these dialog-only drabbles a great deal. There's something that just WORKS about them, y'know? *happy bounce*

I think the "You did not just hump me" is my favorite Sammy line of ALL TIME.

Thank you for this, dear!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on May 6th, 2009 05:36 pm (UTC)
I'm so glad you liked this! *bounces*

I was stymied about how to get the whole setup in a drabble, because it was a great prompt and I didn't want to lose the "atmosphere" of it. But when I tried the dialogue approach, I'd gotten a lot of it in by about 65 words, so that looked like a winner! Whoo!

Poor Sam, always the victim of Dean's bad behavior. Though he finally comes around here, and in style! :D
Entendre? Make mine a double.: SN hold me Sam slash mumbly_mumpydeirdre_c on May 6th, 2009 02:59 pm (UTC)
YAY! Drunk shenanigans! <333
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on May 6th, 2009 05:37 pm (UTC)
And more back at the motel, one hopes! :D
Rosegestaltrose on May 6th, 2009 06:19 pm (UTC)
beautiful.... just perfect
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on May 6th, 2009 07:13 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm glad you found some depth to it too, and not just the humor. :)
tekmessa: SamnDean - walking and talkingtekmessa on May 6th, 2009 06:51 pm (UTC)
Lovely. I won't quote anything because if I did, I would have to quote everything, it's just wonderful. So, so cute!
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on May 6th, 2009 07:14 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! I think all the action is clear, but the words are very sparse. In the end, it definitely reaches the place we'd all like these two boys to find. ♥
you've been poto'd: Wincesthpnut3239 on May 6th, 2009 07:42 pm (UTC)
Eee, it's so cute! I adore dialogue only fics. The last 2 lines are *perfect*.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on May 6th, 2009 07:48 pm (UTC)
I'm glad someone besides me likes dialogue-only! They're such a fun challenge, and for something short like a drabble you can really pack in a lot of plot.

The last two lines *sigh*... that's pretty much every Wincest ending I want to see. :)
Trini: EyeOfTheTigertrinipedia on May 7th, 2009 01:31 am (UTC)
*blinks*
*blinks again*

LOVED IT.
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on May 7th, 2009 05:34 am (UTC)
Transformed by tequila, Dean finally makes a move! And there's even a touch of schmoop at the end. :D
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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: spnKinkQuotehalfshellvenus on May 19th, 2009 07:23 pm (UTC)
Haha! So glad you liked it!

This presents a nice picture, doesn't it? I'm all over the Sam/Dean, however it happens-- but especially in a first-time setting. :)
gunznammo2gunznammo2 on July 11th, 2009 10:43 pm (UTC)
Anytime I can see Sam and Dean in the words they're speaking I know the writer has done good. You done good. %)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: SN Lovershalfshellvenus on July 29th, 2009 04:49 pm (UTC)
Thank you! It's a great challenge getting not only the voices to sound "authentic," but to also get the "action" to be clear.

So glad you enjoyed this. :D